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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2008 05:53 pm Title: James Halpert

That was excellent! I would love to meet his mom :)

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2007 03:28 am Title: James Halpert

Loved this; I couldn't stop smiling: especially those last two parts? The second-last I loved because of the mention of her shoes, I love that she wants to fit him better, even there's no real need to. =P The last one made me grin till my teeth hurt. Jamie Halpert, a mix of Jim and Pam, would be a regular Dennis the Menace, certainly! Aww.


Author's Response: I didn't even think of the whole wanting to fit him better, but that is a good point! So thanks! And yeah, the ending was kind of spur of the moment, (the other four parts had been planned out like a month ago) but now I have all these little tiny plot bunnies dealing with the Halpert clan, so I'm not sure thats the last we've seen of him, but remember he has a sister too! hehe :-P Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 06:32 am Title: James Halpert

Very cute!!
Though, check your "you're"s. A few of them should have been "your".

Author's Response: Thanks! And I will get right on that, I know I should have used a beta but I always chicken out! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 04:53 am Title: James Halpert

Haha. Good story. I know that Jim=James, but it always takes me a second to connect it.


Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah I made sure that Jim is actually Jim Halperts nickname because in his yearbook, it says James Halpert. Yeah I paused it, but I don't think it makes me sad...hehe Thanks for the review...

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 10:24 pm Title: James Halpert

hahah...loved that. So cute them having prankster kids!

Author's Response:

Oh wow, I love the whole Baby Talk series so it's awesome that you like this! And yeah, I like to think that the playful side of Jim and Pam will last forever so of course the kids are gonna pick up on it! :-)

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 09:50 pm Title: James Halpert

I loved these!~ They just make me giggle like a little girl! I especially love how their kids carry on their parents tradition. tee hee just adorable fluff, I wish this stuff would happen on the real show!! Lovely job!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! Coming up with the prank was difficult! What could a seven year old do? And I felt it was important that as a Mom she would have to dissaprove but as Pam when it's just her and Jim recognize the family legacy...thanks for the review

Reviewer: Beth Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 09:49 pm Title: James Halpert

that was so cute!  The ending was just perfect!

Author's Response: The funny thing about the ending was that when I got the idea for this I had the first four, and thought the wedding would be the last one, but then I could never come up with a good inbetween 3 and 5 so instead after writing the first 4 I got the idea for the kids!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 08:56 pm Title: James Halpert

SQUEEEEE!!!! such  a great read! and the whole tall shoes thing made me laugh.. since i'm 5'1" and can definitely relate!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm only slightly taller than that and I remember from past pictures having to stand ona box and it was embarrasing...thanks for the review!

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