If you read my stories (there's only two), you'll see that I'm not all that into fluff and romance. but this is definetly an exception. It's looooooooong (that's what she said), but I just can't stop. Nice work!

Author's Response:

I've definately read your stuff...and it's an honor for me to know that you like this! Yes, I know its long (TWSS) but honestly, I did not plan for it to go on this long. It just seemed like I was having readers keep telling me that they wanted more and enjoyed it, so I kept going! Sadly, I will be ending it soon, though.

As for the fluff...I'm not always the fluff lover either. I'm acutally really fond of the angst, then the make up. If you've ever read any of my other stuff (Sound Of Love, Farewell....) there are several solid chapters of just angst that I loved writing. I find that I enjoy writing the stuff that grips at the readers hearts and makes them feel with the charaters than just writing bull-honkey that everyone can imagine in their own minds before bed everynight.

But, thanks again for reading and reviewing. More will follow soon.

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oh, and I was going to also say - scarlets bad dream, as scary as it is is NOTHING like the nightmares that used to plauge me. seriously, i would have recurring (for years), nightmares of people killing me, my family, chasing me in an attempt to kill me.

but then i also dreamed of kids i babysat for turning into those little monkeys and us preforming on the streets. 

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Hey I am just decided to read this story! I love love love it so far, I'm only on chapt 1!! It's going to take forever to read the whole thing, but I've got time! =) Rating it a 10! Scarlet, what a beautiful name.... I'm sure if she's Pams daughter shes lovely!

Author's Response:

Thanks for tuning in! It's been up for a while now and I'm glad to see that some people are just now discovering it! So, thanks for reading and there will be more to it soon so keep reading!

I've read through your whole story and I have to say that it's so good! I definitely want to see more of the newly married Halperts after the ceremony. And I want to echo someone else's suggestion of maybe seeing another addition to the family before ending it.  Jim, Pam, and Scarlet with a baby brother or sister? I'd hate to see it end so soon! And can I just say that was such a sweet chapter!

*squee* that's all i can say right now. And sigh dreamily.

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Oh I am so excited for the next chapter.......Oooooh the Anticipation:)... I LOVE where I think this is headed ;) Great writing !!

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More PLEASE....I Need more....Can't move on until I get more.......I SO want this story to just go on and on and on and on...Well you get my point :)

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I noticed that you said this is completed. Let me tell you how wrong that is. A story this great needs more and more. Seriously, it can't be done. What can I do to change your mind. I need more sexy older father figure Jim!

Dont want to sound to beggy, but this is seriously my favorite story, of all time. 

I'm not usually crazy about AU stuff, but this is a fun story. Jim as a surrogate dad just has so much potential. And I love that you update so quickly. Keeps me sane.

I am enjoying this story- looking forward to Ch. 3! Thanks.

i totally think you should continue! it has such an awesome sense of Pam needing to be rescued and who else is there but Jim to save the day? also, how did she end up leaving Dunder-Mifflin and marrying this Neil guy? it has great potential and your writing style is great. 

I like this idea! I can't wait to see what happens! There's so many ways you can go with this and it's a fresh idea. Please, more!