Date: March 19, 2007 07:53 pm Title: The Sketch
Oh that is so clever! I'm excited.
Author's Response: Yeah the idea of her sending Dwight with a hidden message - couldn't this really happen..... please....do you hear me Office writers???
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2007 03:55 pm Title: The Sketch
You know what I call that ending? Cruelty to fic readers. There should be organizations. And protests. And signs. And acronyms.
Wow, I'm not usually that exuberant. Regardless, this is heating up nicely and I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm really sorry I just saw that I hadn't responded. My southern sensibility won't have that! I'm sorry for the cliffhanger, I honestly didn't think it was, but reading it through the readers' eyes it clearly was. Hope I made up for it!
Let's see, what acronym, could we use...... oh shoot totally drawing a blank.....
Date: March 16, 2007 01:12 am Title: The Sketch
That was so freaking cute!!! i can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! It was fun to write and I'm very happy that you liked it! I wish we could see some JAM cuteness on TV!
Date: March 16, 2007 01:02 am Title: The Sketch
Just got caught up with this one. I am liking it and excited to see what happens next! Your Dwight and Creed make me laugh. Well done!
Author's Response:
Yeah they are two of my favorite characters, Dwight in particular has really been coming into his own lately. I mean I love JAM, but aren't Dwight and Angela so sweet! Thanks for the review and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
Date: March 15, 2007 07:58 pm Title: The Sketch
SO GOOD.
Okay, “Rumble in the Dunder” is hilarious. And so michael.
she could see his face all day long. She watched as the bruises and cuts healed up, while they simultaneously worked on repairing their broken friendship.
Just beautiful. I love the way you wrote it and the suggestion of slow healing. I also love that they're taking it slow in this. Very realistic.
He leaned into her and responded, “What kind of rematch you have in mind Beesly?”
Um, fantastic. I would have pulled him across the desk, absolutely.
And let’s face it, how well do we know our co-workers? Have you ever seen Creed do anything?”
Quite possibly my favorite part of this chapter. So very Dwight and fantastic use of a Creed mention.
And the ending?! Jeeze! I can't wait for ch9!!!
Author's Response:
You made my whole day with such big reviews. I love hearing what things worked for people, to see if it is the same things I liked or different. I've decided that ensemble pieces are my favorite right now. Even though it has been a bad year for JAM, it has been a great year for Dwangela. and don't get me started about creed, seriously isn't he the best character. He is never on screen that I am not dying laughing.
I also think that at this point, Pam and Jim have alot of things to work on together, so I like the idea of them really starting over. I'd like to go back a year in the show and redo..... Thanks Shan for all the support! You know I think your stories are the best!
Date: March 15, 2007 12:21 pm Title: The Sketch
Argh! Don't end here! More, please!
Author's Response: Oh don't worry, I won't end it here. Even I'm not that masochistic! We'll have our happy ending....hear that Greg Daniels!!!
Date: March 15, 2007 08:30 am Title: The Sketch
What do I think? I think you need to update ASAP!
Author's Response: coming soon I promise, I have a draft done. Thanks for sticking with me agd!
10 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2007 08:08 am Title: The Sketch
Oh, I'm still reading and can't wait for more, eagerly anticipating the goodness ahead. It suits my tastes perfectly. Pam's use of Dwight made me smile.
Author's Response: Yeah that all seemed too perfect. I loved that Dwight was an important piece because Jim likes it when Pam pranks Dwight and because it was important info....I also loved that Dwight had no idea how important he really is - ie helping JAM get together.....Thanks so much for the review!
Date: March 15, 2007 06:32 am Title: The Sketch
um, love it. well, hate the fact that i have to wait for another chapter. so, change that. i hate hate hate it. why do people drag this out? shesh. :)
write more soon, because if not i will have to come aunt you. or better yet, force greg daniels to do something. but that could wind me up in jail, so, i should stick with you writing more
Author's Response:
Ok i'll admit it, I drag it out because sometimes I don't know where I am going, just enjoying trying to get there......
I don't want you to go to jail though....so I'll post this weekend probably....btw, I am so ready to know what Jim's Secret is......hint hint.....
Date: March 15, 2007 05:19 am Title: The Sketch
I really love that last paragraph. How great! I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm enjoying this story--especially this turn for the good. All the angst of Cocktails has finally faded and now they can embrace being together. Thank God.
Good job! Can't wait for the rest
Author's Response: I know, I never thought I would say it, but I'm burning out a little with all the angst. I think it brings the show down a little. But I'm enjoying the little happy places we make on this site! Thanks for reading! I'm really happy you enjoyed it.
Date: March 14, 2007 10:50 pm Title: The Sketch
*falls off chair*
no!! cliffhanger!!!!
GAH!!!
thx.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: I realize now that wasn't nice of me! (grinning mischievously) I'm almost done with the rest.
9 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 09:44 pm Title: The Sketch
What? Seriously? OMG. You CANNOT end it there. It's so...guh.
Author's Response: Sorry, That wasn't nice was it! At least there is more to the story, and i'll post it quick as I can. Even I want to know what happens once he gets there.....how big is that desk anyway........?
Date: March 14, 2007 09:06 pm Title: The Sketch
Oh... so nice! The sketch is sweet. I'm still reading...
Author's Response: Thanks Kev! Just checking on you..... ;-) (alright I admit, my insecurities got the better of me there.)
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 09:05 pm Title: The Sketch
B...E....A....uetiful!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it. For once I was really happy with how a chapter came out, but i'm still floored if other people like it. I'm grinning at my computer this goofy grin. It means alot to me that you recc'd it at TWoP! and love your name!