Date: March 24, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
The first chapter was kind of soul crushing but the 2nd and 3rd chapters are slowly lifting my spirits. Please keep going with this marvelous story. Also, I was just in Paris last summer and it is so true about there being couples everywhere. We actually started a tally of all the couples we could see making out in public. I think we may have reached the high teens in less than a week. Great detail.
Date: March 15, 2007 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Goodness, BeckySue, your story makes me want to curl up and watch the UK version just so I can see what happens! This is so great and heart-breaking, I can hardly wait to see what happens next!
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it; feels so much like the brittish version. lets just hope thats not how things really turn out though; jam needs to be together now!!!!
Date: March 10, 2007 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
is three of four supposed to be three or four (from michaels talking head at the beginning) or am i just confused?
But OMG, I loved it. Seriously. It was so wonderfully sad. I felt so proud of Pam in a way, taking off and exploring the world. I kinda guess cause I was jealous of that. I want to explore everything. But its still sad - because, its not happy. But its just, oh, I suck with words.
Please post more.
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was damned good. Just Wow. I don't think I've ever seen this done before (for such a simple concept, that's odd, but I guess people don't want to think about that possibility). But you took it, and you nailed it. I'm not sure if I want to see where you take it, though, because you said it perfectly already.
8 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so heartbreaking. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: March 08, 2007 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! Post the next chapter!!!! PLEASE!
Date: March 08, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this! It's so very sad. And I love, LOVE, that you borrowed from Tim's talking head from the UK version. It fits here so very well.
Date: March 08, 2007 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Well that was heartbreaking. It brought tears to my eyes. Let's hope you continue and we can get a happy ending.
Date: March 08, 2007 02:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, I really loved it. I looooove me some good angst and yours was superb. Seriously, great job. Do not torment us any longer and post that second chapter already!:-)
Date: March 08, 2007 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Man that's SO sad! WOW!
That's what I miss about the Uk show - Tim's brilliant speeches - how amazing was the Christmas Special! OMG and when Tim found out Dawn was leaving! That was so powerful! Glad to here someone likes the English one as much as me!
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1
How sad.....I don't want Pam to leave! It would be a sad day! lol Update soon! Hopefully they both get a clue soon!
Date: March 07, 2007 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
You need to post the next chapter. Like right now. This is so good.
Date: March 07, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I think I might cry am crying.
Absolutely heartbreaking. But usually, this is life.
Thank you so much for this.(is there more?)
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 07, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
More please! I do like how you've woven in the talking heads, which seem strongly in character.
Date: March 07, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, I'm crying. Are you happy? :-P
Seriously, this was beautiful and angsty and you should absolutely continue it... because I want a happy ending!
Date: March 07, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm bawling. it was very well written. if this were real life, that is what would probably happen, which is what makes it so sad- actually, i'm a lot like pam and this is close to something that happened to me.
Date: March 07, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
this seriously breaks my heart! I hope you're going somewhere a bit less heartbreakin in the next chapter!!
Date: March 07, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
this seriously breaks my heart! I hope you're going somewhere a bit less heartbreakin in the next chapter!!
Date: March 07, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love Tim's speech, the one that you quoted and that ending for Tim and Dawn is what makes everything ok for me with Jim and Pam. but anyway, am I interested in the next chapter.....um YEAH! As soon as possible please.
Date: March 07, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Even though reading this has totally broken my heart, I'm anxious to read the next chapter. (Jim's talking head was so sad.)
Date: March 07, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. That was heart breaking! Mostly, I think, because it was so realistic and in tune with their characters. Can't wait to read more!
Date: March 07, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really good. I could see it going that way. I hate to admit it, but I could. Can't wait for more!
Date: March 07, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Totally awesome! Wow you are like the definition of angst!!! Very well written - i can't wait for you to add the next chapter! DO it soon!! PLEASE!!!
Date: March 07, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heartwrenching. Beautiful. Wanting more.
Just give me a second to buy another box of Kleenex.