1 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2020 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
TOO SWEET.
Author's Response:
Much, much too sweet. But I still like the idea that a little bit of physical contact lit a fire that helped them cut through the BS.
I've had too much fun this morning looking at these with you. Thank you!
Date: March 28, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
SO sweet (literally!) I'd love to see this happen. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm feeling pessimistic today, but I still want to have hope!
Date: March 25, 2007 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw! This was so lovely! And of course Michael takes the credit!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: March 23, 2007 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so bad about remembering to leave comments when I've already read it!
I repeat again, for posterity, this was just so hot. A thousand times more passionate than all the smut in the world. The impact was in no way diminished by the fact that I've already read it. And I still want the parking lot scene, dammit! ;-)
Author's Response: I love you to pieces. I also think you're biased, but I'll take your extravagant praise any day! Thank you! (We'll see about the parking lot scene. I'm not sure I can do it justice, though!)
Date: March 23, 2007 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Another sweet, tasty confection from your Jam-filled brain, Lis. Not that I meant to imply your brain is like a jelly donut but, well, you know I mean it in an entirely good way! ;-)
Author's Response: These two ARE turning my brain into a jelly donut. Enough is enough! Screw realism, I want fluff! :) Thank you, m'dear. I always appreciate it.
5 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2007 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
He could just about make it for five minutes without her. He suddenly couldn’t believe he’d lasted years.
Boy, does that sum up Jim Halpert to a T. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just want them to cut to the chase, you know? It's all been very realistic and everything, but I'm starting to feel tortured! (Thanks again!)
Date: March 21, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmmm...gotta love those powdered donuts from Dunkies! I am definitely buying one tomorrow. Jim touching Pam's face? Pam leaning into his hand? Um, gah???
Thanks for the happy fic!
Author's Response: "Gah" is a wonderful comment! Hee. Seriously, though, these two say so much without words...it seems like a look or a touch will be what they really need to get back on track. I'm so glad it worked for you. Enjoy your donut!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love powdered sugar donuts, Jim and Pam together, happy endings and your stories - I am a happy person after reading this. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Well, I love your reviews. Thank you so much! We need a little bit of happiness to carry us over, don't we?
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
aah!! so sweet! pun intended! love, love, love! if only that were all it would take to bring those two back to their senses!
Author's Response: I don't think it will take that much more, if they'll just get out of their own way and let themselves be happy. And a gentle touch can be a powerful thing...here's hoping, anyway! Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love how simple and sweet(!) this is. I just hope they don't suffer a setback when the sugar crash comes. (J/K!!)
their estrangement is so crazy I could believe something like this could be just the trigger. God knows it's got to be something that in retrosprect will seem unbelievable, yet so perfect. Lovely job - I'll be reading this one again....
Author's Response:
I agree- I think they're going to end up together either with a huge bang or a tiny whisper. No in-between at this point, so I decided to go with the whisper.
There's always a sugar crash (says the old married woman), but that's when their wonderful basis in friendship will carry them through. That's why we love them, right? Thank you, as usual!
Date: March 21, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet as Krispy Kremes!
Loved!
Author's Response: Ooooh, Fresh & Hot! Mmmm. Thank you, ma'am!
Date: March 21, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lis - it's official. I adore you. :) So incredibly sweet.
Author's Response:
The adoration is mutual, xoxo! Thank you. With a name like "Sugar," I'm glad it ended up sweet! :)
Date: March 21, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVED IT! Short but sweet as they say =)
Author's Response:
I was sure about the "short" part- I'm so glad you think it was sweet! Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, AWW! I so needed that. Adorable. And I truly believe that one touch will be all it takes. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree- there's just not that much stopping them now. Thanks, again!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh! Oh, I love this, absolutely love it. It so is just what we needed right now. Guh. Thank you!!
Author's Response: No, no, thank you! Yeah, we need some sweetness soon!
Date: March 21, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not since the infamous 27 seconds has a half minute (roughly) packed such an unspoken emotional wallop. So very good. And loved the last line.
Author's Response: Thank you! These two communicate so well without words, don't they?
Date: March 21, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dunkin' Donuts = love. Wow, you do much in so few words.
Author's Response: "So few words" is my mantra, apparently. Thank you so much!
Date: March 21, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: March 21, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was just like amazing. i littlerely sucked my breath in reading when jim touched her cheek. yet another innocent thing that will make me think of JAM and be totally romantic
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, face-touching can be very nice. :)
Date: March 21, 2007 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! The tension is just... wow. I am clearly speechless. I will need a few minutes to regroup.
Author's Response: Ha! Sorry about the speechlessness. Do you need to buy me a Coke, now? Thank you!
Date: March 21, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow steamy, I kind of felt like the end was a little abrupt like there needs to be a little more....still really good though....and now i want a donut and a Jim to wipe the extra sugar away....
Author's Response: Yeah, I did sort of chop it off, there. I'm glad it didn't ruin it for you! Mmm, donuts and Jim? Great idea! Thanks!