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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 08:19 pm Title: RED

Gorgeous. Weird, but perfectly Schrute.

Author's Response: Thanks! Although if you mean "Schrute" the way Andy does, does that mean I'm late? :D (kidding)

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:45 pm Title: RED

OMG...it's so sad that all of what you wrote is so completely Schrute-esque.  This is quite possibly my favorite Dwight story ever...no, it definitely is.

Author's Response: Thanks! Even with Dwight, there is method in his seeming madness.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:04 pm Title: RED

How'd you do that with the title?  That's hardcore to do that just to take a theme to the next level.

Author's Response: You can turn off tinyMCE and code the html directly. That's how I got the pictures into the stories, too. :)

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 06:34 pm Title: RED

Oh I loved green, and not just because it was Pam. There's something about the scent of gardenia and the obtuseness of the orchid that you just captured here perfectly. I can just picture shy little Pam opening herself up gradually to her plants. That was perfectly lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks! I had no idea orchids were obtuse, but I like that phrase. :)

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:33 pm Title: RED

At the very least, one should carry nunchucks.

Dwight heard a scurrying sound in a corner and wondered if Angela would let him have one of her kittens to train into a warrior cat. Probably not. She was squeamish about the strangest things.

Heehee, great lines! What an intricate and interesting picture of Dwight, he is so hard to write for sometimes but you captured him really well.  Also, really great concept overall, can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: Thanks. I know we've never seen Dwight with nunchucks on the show, but they seemed right for him. Glad you liked this!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 05:27 am Title: RED

Writers turn Dwight into a truly fascinating character. You in particular demonstrated great imagination in taking what we're given on the show and stretching it into a extraordinary life that no one really can imagine. The pictures on the cellar wall, in particular, are just so dark yet hopeful. Loved this.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Dwight is a very interesting character. I'm glad you liked this.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 02:00 pm Title: RED

I like this a lot.  I'm glad you explained things in the chapter end notes.  I got the reference, but some people might not, so a gentle reminder was good.

I like:  "Nothing stops a Shrute."  I could see Dwight saying that. 



Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, that last line would have looked too sinister to some folks without a bit of explanation. Glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 11:24 am Title: RED

yes, weird it is. but, it was a very interesting take on his weird which i enjoyed


Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 08:17 pm Title: RED

Did anyone else think from the title that it was going to have something to do with Roy?  Just me?

Author's Response: Next chapter. :)

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 05:45 pm Title: RED

this was fab, you kept Dwight odd and ecclectic, but so sweetly human...I can't wait to see what else you have in store

Author's Response: sweet like a beet, that's our Dwight. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ozana Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 05:05 pm Title: RED

This is one of the most original and entertaining stories that I have read in a long time.  I have always enjoyed your stories, but I think this one may be my favorite.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!

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