10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
Fab ending, me loved it a lot!
Date: May 03, 2008 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this one had me laughing. I liked this story a lot and will definitely be reading more of your work!
Date: January 30, 2008 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oooh how embarrassing!!! But I'm glad it all ended happily. =)
6 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2006 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
A lovely little story. Very, very cute. I did think that the small conflicts between Jim and Pam felt a little forced--if you're going to write fluff, don't be afraid to write fluff! And believe me, this is great fluff. Also, the Creed chapter, while definately Creed, felt out of place.
But these are really minor things. It was a nice set. And extra brownie points for one of the all-time greatest titles.
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 04:13 am Title: Chapter 6
adorable ending :)
i love how every chapter had the feel of the character who finds out and you did a great job of progressing the JAM story while focusing on the other characters. this whole series just made me giggle :)
Author's Response:
Thanks again! That was my plan and I'm glad it worked out.
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved this entire story, but that last two lines made me very happy. :)
Plus, you know, all the Jam love.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad!
9 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 05:40 am Title: Chapter 6
Awwww... That was a nice ending!
Author's Response: Thank you
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 12:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Haha. So awesome and sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks proposals! :)
9 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2006 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow you nailed Michael! It sounded exactly like him. Loved the series!
Author's Response: That's what she said! Thank you.
8 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2006 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
aww cute ending! i love a good Michael POV, he's such a dope.
Author's Response: Yeah, he is! Thanks for the review. :)
6 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2006 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
What a great ending! I love that Ryan tried to keep Pam's note private. I'd like to have seen what Jim's note to Pam said, too.
Author's Response: Thanks kaystar!
9 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2006 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is the perfect way to end this really fun series. You capture the cringe-inducing nature of the series perfectly in the letter-reading scene, and Pam's letter is just lovely.
Very, very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments.