Date: August 21, 2008 10:52 pm Title: One
Wow. Poor Jim, just when he thinks Roy's behind them. I am SO glad this didn't happen, but you wrote it very poignantly.
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 11:43 am Title: One
OMG poor Jim :(
8 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 12:59 am Title: One
Oh shit!
SOOO glad that this did not happen. Reading on...
Date: September 04, 2007 09:46 am Title: One
Ouch. Wow. But thanks for linking this in as a challenge response or else I never would have gotten to it! :-)
Date: April 04, 2007 04:13 pm Title: One
I LOVED THIS. sorry i'm not more eloquent today, but you totally conveyed the heartache both must have felt and all those failed tries. Loved it!
Author's Response: eloquence is overrated, and you did just fine. Thanks so much!
Date: April 03, 2007 11:32 pm Title: One
That is just perfectly what Jim would say. Poor Pam!
Author's Response: I love Jim, and I wish he was real and split into a million bodies so we could each have one. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 08:33 pm Title: One
OUCH!!! And the title had given me such hope for fluff! But I loved it. Because sometimes, life really bites.
Author's Response: There will be fluff, I promise. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:43 pm Title: One
Oh my god, no! No Roy-lets!
I love this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The first story freaks me out, too, and I can't figure out what Pam would do!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:02 pm Title: One
Oh, waah! Wrong dad!! But sweet that Jim will help. I like these lines: "it had been so shaming for Roy and for Pam, and even for himself. Now things were rockier than ever with Karen, and he can't blame her for being wary of practically anything." It does seem to me that all 3 of them would be embarrassed and ashamed of the mess! And of course Karen (if she stayed with Jim) would be watching like a hawk and not trusting anything.
I hope some of the 5 are little Jambabies...! (Is there something you want to say about the baby? (/Ryan))
Author's Response: Don't worry- I like my babies Jammy, too! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: April 03, 2007 06:55 pm Title: One
Aw. That would be terrible for Pam. If only it were Jim's......hmm. Lol <3
Author's Response: Oh, just wait. She'll have plenty of Jim, if you know what i mean...
Date: April 03, 2007 06:49 pm Title: One
wow. these first two are brutal. I guess kids in my mind just puts the final nail in any relationship coffin. I guess that's what's so heartbreaking. and you're breaking them my friend, you're breaking them.
Author's Response: I know, I know, it's so mean, but I really wanted to write something not fluffy. Stay tuned, though...