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Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 10:49 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

The chick who has all these things on her desk sounds pretty damn cool.  ;)

As is the one who put them all to such lovely use.   I admire your restraint and creativity. ;) Excellent job.  I adored every word.  Thanks for this Mox!



Author's Response:

"The chick" is actually just a touch loony, but that's why she makes such a rockin' muse. ;-)

Hope these helped you keep yourself off that ledge!!!  When in doubt, read this again.... 

Reviewer: Susan M Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 10:49 am Title: the little black book of project management

Aw, the sweetness.  I want that Jim and Pam on my teevee every week!

And the make up bath?  Better than pancakes.  :-) Another great story, Moxie.


Author's Response:

Oh, Susan, you and me both!!!!  I hope these last two episodes don't let us down!!

Thanks for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: Willow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 10:39 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Very sweet!


Author's Response: Aw - thank you so VERY much!!:-)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 10:09 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Tuscan cooking together? Make-up bubble bath? Moving in together? This is like hitting the fluff jackpot. (And I thought you'd outdone yourself when you had Pam wearing marabou feathers in the last chapter.) Like eating a delicious bon bon, only without the pesky calories. Delicious, Mox.

Author's Response: Thanks, Colette!  I was worried this chapter would be kind of boring until the bubble bath idea hit..... and I am very proud of myself for so some restraint in letting you figure out all the hot sexytime stuff......  ;-)

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 09:10 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

aww precious! great job with this last chapter! 

Author's Response: thanks so much, rulesofjinx!!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  I hope we enjoy the last two episodes of this season as much!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 08:49 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Yeah, I think that would be more than enough to knock the wind out of our boy's sails!

Author's Response:

hee - not that he would mind in the least, hmm??  :-) 

Long live fluffy fic - and thanks for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 10:39 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Hee! I love that you always include pictures! A night in is just what the doctor ordered for them! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

thanks, aggiegurl22! I find visual aids really help when I'm writing it - I'm glad you like the pictures, too!!

Thanks for reviewing!!! 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 08:17 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

"The only thing hard about his relationship with Pam, he thought bemusedly, was him when he was touching her."  Whew, what a hot line!  I'm really enjoying this story. I loved the lunch on the roof, such a sweet thing to do to honor Jim's grandmother.



Author's Response:

Between you and me, that is my favourite line of that chapter - I was hoping someone would notice it!!  :D

thanks for reviewing, Kay! 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 02:58 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

here is what Pam needed: http://www.pixelbomb.com/blog/images/2006/08/thumbs/ipod_panties.jpg

oh what a world we live in :) 



Author's Response:

Oh Holy Hell!  :-)

Do they come in pink?  

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 02:36 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

So that's what I was missing!   I already have the iPod but I need the outfit to go with it.   So, so silly of me.

Better go shopping. ;)



Author's Response: Ha - I can't believe you didn't have that outfit already!!  Silly girl!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 11:50 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

wow.. and here i thought you'd made up the whole swavarski  crystal bit.. love it!!

Author's Response:

Nope - but you really aren't surprised SOMEBODY thought of doing that, right?   I'd love a pair, just not at $48 a set....

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: invis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 09:29 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Hooray!  It's about freakin' time, Pam!  :)


Author's Response:

LOL - ain't that the truth!!!!   

So glad you liked it - you rock for all your reviews!! 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 09:25 am Title: a deck of cards

Listen to the cards, Jim!  The cards never lie!


Author's Response: Well, sometimes they do, but Pam was telling the truth.... ;-)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 09:20 am Title: clothespin

Pam is a goddess.  I love her--not as much as Jim does, but I do.  :)


Author's Response:

Yes, Pam has more power than she realises.  I just hope she starts using it soon!!!!

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 09:14 am Title: the little black book of project management

Aw!  That was the perfect thing for Pam to write.  Not too jokey, but not over-the-top romantic, either.  Perfect balance, and totally Pam.  Love it.


Author's Response: Oh great!  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 07:23 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Talk about surprise!  Seems Jim is learning he needs to hold on for dear life because he never knows what Pam is going tothrow at him.  Not that I believe he minds :)

Love this: " And what he saw dropped his heart right into his shoes."  Excellent job here.  It is an incredibly fun story and it is nice to see them just being them :)



Author's Response:

Well, now that she's made a move 4 times,you think he'd be feeling confident enough to surprise her....  and nope, I think he doesn't mind anything she does for him in the least!!

 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 07:19 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Great googly moogly. My heart was in my shoes from the first paragraph.  Those were some inspirational ear buds, girl!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review - I really hope you liked it.  I figured you'd have no trouble adding the rest of the evening with your imagination! :-)

 

Reviewer: Willow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 06:40 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

This is so sweet!

May we have a chapter 4a with the smut? 

;) 



Author's Response: hahaha - In one of those moods again, are we?  :-D

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 06:32 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

"Look at me, Jim," Pam said. He did and she continued. "I was sure a long, long time ago."

Awesome line.  This story is so sweet, Moxie.  I like Pam's outfit a lot more than Karen's icky undies. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've always thought Pam would be more comfortable into pretty/romantic types of lingerie than slutty stuff.  (*cough*limegreenundies*cough*)

Did you get that, Everybody?  ;-)  

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 11:55 pm Title: a deck of cards

wow.. pam IS a witch! hehe.. love this chapter! way for her to ask jim out on a date while still making him ask her out on a date. niiice.

Author's Response: Pam might be FNB DCMP, but that still doesn't mean she's going to be a bit shy about asking Jim out on a first date...  Glad you liked her approach!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 01:12 pm Title: a deck of cards

i love this fic and can't wait for more.  Great job again

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much, gotkona!  :-)

Reviewer: lonefreckle Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 03:37 pm Title: the little black book of project management

I've been lurking for a while now, but I had to register to tell you how completely amazing that chapter was! There have been so many different scenarios for how Pam finally reveals her feelings to Jim... and this one was just perfect, in so many ways. Just wonderful.

Author's Response:

Awww - thanks so much for taking the time to register to review - that means so much!!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 02:25 pm Title: a deck of cards

Wow, I really love this story. Even if it takes baby steps, Jim and Pam are definetly heading in the right direction. I like of it's Pam who's doing the subtle pushing. She's got to go get her man.

Author's Response: Yes, the only way Jim's going to open back up to her is if he believes she's vested in their relationship.  And FNB can certainly prove that to him.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 02:03 pm Title: a deck of cards

Go Pam with her bad self!  What a fun way to flirt.  Good thing Halpert took the bait!  This was incredibly fun and playful.  Like the Jim and Pam of old.  I love the progression of them in this story. 

Author's Response: Yeah, I think Pam might have blamed the heat if things didn't go her way.  But seriously - what are the odds he could turn her down???

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 12:33 pm Title: a deck of cards

He started to smile and he noticed a flash of relief across her face.

No matter how fancy she gets, she's still Pam. This was delightful, of course, as usual, forever.



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Yes, she's getting that courage, but it doesn't negate the butterflies!!! 

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