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Reviewer: Green Eggs and Pam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Pam

Not the ending I wanted, but at least there's some hope.  You made me really feel for Karen, though, so damn you!  Loved the story.  thanks!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 06:19 pm Title: Pam

I can see how this would be difficult to write.  I cheered when Jim admitted he was an ass.  I frowned when he said they should just be friends.  Anyway, nice job.

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Pam

I really like the ending, I think it's really sweet. :) I like the whole thing, I think you did a good job.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Pam

Sigh.   Oh,Night Swept.  You have again punched my grief bone.  

 An excellent story, well written.   My petty desire for a different outcome doesn't really matter...because you have made this scenario seem like it's the only one that makes sense.   

Waaaaaaahhhhhhh......... 



Author's Response: I hope I'm wrong, or the grief-bone doctors will have a busy summer.  Thanks for the comments!

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