Date: May 26, 2007 06:08 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
"friends don't let friends eat feet" That is hands down the funniest thing I have read at this site!! I love this story. it is a great original way of dealing with this whole mess of Jim/Pam/(and that doggone)Karen.
Date: May 17, 2007 01:53 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
I was going to just review at the end, due to time constraints (finale in 3 hrs, 10 m!!!), but I had to say that this is my favorite chapter so far. Pam-preciation day, Creed hugging Meredith (and making out! Meredith isn't going to remember that, but neither will Creed, so...), Jim wanting to get flowers. Just all so good.
And if I had a dime for every time in my life that I had found occasion to use that old adage, "Friends don't let friends eat feet", I'd be... well, no better off than I currently am, I guess. That was so funny.
All right, so on to the next...
8 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 06:07 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
Pam-tini's all around! The only constr. crit I offer is that I can't see Phyllis saying 'reamed'. I loved the Karen part of this story and can't wait for more. good job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the contr. crit for sure. Thanks for your comments. Even though I've kind of gotten rid of Karen, she'll be back.
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 02:24 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
I love all the soap opera references in here....I would love it if they actually addressed all the drama on the show like this.....kind of making fun of itself. Anyway I really like how you gave Karen some dignity. I love the sweet Jim in this last chapter. I think it would be good to write about how they first started going out before jumping ahead to the future. But either way I can't wait to read what you come up with next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Beth....and I have decided to bring them together a little more slowly.
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 01:37 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
That was a great chapter..I think you shouldn't jump to the future just yet..Maybe another chapter then jump..But then thats just my opinion..
Author's Response: I think I can add a little more to this. Y'all have inspired me! Thanks so much for your comments.
Date: May 15, 2007 01:13 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
I really like this take on post beach day. Your karen is just awe inspiring. I think I fell a little in love with her. And the post it was perfect.
Author's Response: Awwwww.....thanks so much. I really appreciate it.
Date: May 15, 2007 12:38 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
Oh, I'd love to get a few more chapters between this and the epilogue....but then, I'm a sap and can't get enough of "The two crazy kids finally get together" stories....
Author's Response: I think I've figured out a way to do this. I'm a sap too. Thanks so much for your review.
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 12:21 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it!! michael throwing a pam-preciation party? sooo great, because it hasn't been done in fanfic yet, and i could definitely see it happening on the show. and jim's post it note? yeah, that's gonna keep a smile on my face for at least 2 days.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad I put a smile on your face. Your review has certainly done that for me!
Date: May 15, 2007 12:12 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
No, one more chapter! Pretty please?
That sticky note was amazing btw :) Great work as usual!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the sticky. It honestly just came out of nowhere and I wasn't sure it would work. Thanks for your comments.
9 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 11:55 am Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
Pam begins to think that maybe the only positive outcome of her speech will be Jim winning the award for top salesman.
What a wonderful, wry little detail. It's exactly the kind of low-key, funny thing Pam would say in a TH. I think this is adorable. Feel free to bring on the fluff at your leisure.
Author's Response: I shall bring the fluff. Thanks for picking up on that little bit. I always appreciate your comments.