Date: December 18, 2020 07:09 am Title: Sunday Part 2
I really liked this - this feels a lot like what might have happened post-Beach Games if these were real people and not TV characters whose big life moments have to be dramatic, a sort of quiet coming together.
I also really appreciate that you gave Karen some agency here and let Michael give Jim the guidance he needs once again.
Date: October 21, 2020 07:07 pm Title: Sunday Part 2
This has been on my bookshelf for a while and I finally got to read it. I know this is a story from a long time ago but I thought I'd drop a review all the same.
Really enjoyed this retelling of the finale. Season 3. Impressed you came up with all this before the finale aired.
I liked that Karen took herself out of the picture in your version. She really had blinders on in the show's version (although I could see she would try to convince herself otherwise especially after making such a big move to be with him).
But I like how Jim gets to stay "clean" here. Going back a few chaps love the Michael bit. He really can be observant and wise at rare times.
A nice AU ending with a whole lot to imagine for their future.
Overall, a really enjoyable read, well written and full of lots of good nuggets and call backs.
Date: October 09, 2016 12:45 pm Title: Sunday Part 2
This is a lovely version of how it could have gone. Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks, I love the last few minutes of The Job as much as any JAMmer (Pam's face when Jim asks her out still gives me tears of joy) but I also would like to think a more quiet, private moment like the desk move and planning a prank could have happened and would have been very JAM like as well.
Date: June 03, 2007 10:34 am Title: Sunday Part 1
I have to stop reading here to applaud Jim moving back to his old desk! YAY! I can't decide if I like this (the box moving) or the way it happened in "The Job" as my favorite 'grand gesture' from Jim to Pam' to get them back on track.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm flattered (though really, what can top what happened on the show?)
Date: June 03, 2007 08:54 am Title: Sunday Part 2
That was a very nice alternative ending. Well done!
I love that he wanted her there to see him change desks. Definitely an "actions speak louder than words" moment.
Author's Response: (a review from Moxie, yay :) ) Thank you
Date: June 02, 2007 11:08 pm Title: Sunday Part 2
and after the fourth "accidental" bump, Jim took her hand.
Hee! This was a great story. I would totally be okay if this happened exactly this way on the show! I loved the ending *Sigh* great!
Author's Response: Thank you, I was conflicted on how to end this, and my idea's ranged from a knowing smile between them to a passionate kiss, but went for the hand holding instead. I like it, and am glad others do too.