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Reviewer: invis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 12:29 am Title: Kelly

Oh, Kelly!  I can't help it: I love that girl, in all her high-pitched, squeaky glory.

Reviewer: Inanna3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Kelly

This is so much fun! I can absolutely see Michael dismissing Jim as an asshole, despite having encouraged him in the past. Michael isn't exactly a portrait of consistency. As others have said, there is plenty of potential left in the remaining characters--I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this story.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 06:21 am Title: Kelly

This is so funny so far.  I loved Kelly's, especially.  And the fact that she gave it away to Kevin, who gave it away to Toby, haha.  And Michael ... oh, NO.  This is gonna be a good one!

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: VelvetMorning Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Kelly


And the winner for Best Fic Title goes to...

Well, that's pretty obvious.  I have to admit that I feel a bit bad for Toby, even if his crush on Pam tends to be more on the pathetic side.  But you handled it so well!  I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 01:59 pm Title: Kelly

Oh man... that is hilarious! "Dude." lol...And Kelly and Pam really made me laugh. Oh, I can't wait to see how the rest goes...lol...

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Kelly

Beeswax and 3HolePunchJim? LOLOL. SO good. This is hilarious stuff and I also loved Kevin's itemized list -- especially the thing about the hot coals. I was so proud of Kevin for listing something that wasn't about her boobs. lol. Great stuff here. Keep it coming, you are contributing to my deliquency from work.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Kelly

Ha!  You captured the hyperactive monkey quality that characterizes Kelly so well!  That was very funny.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Kelly

yes, I love where this is going.

the title is also dawesome

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Kelly

This is too funny! I can't wait for the next chapter. You have their voices nailed! And I can totally see Pam and Jim's "doing it" making Kelly forget all  about her own love life for a moment. lol

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 11:34 am Title: Kelly

hahaha! i love that they cover it up with the message bit. and Kelly seriously is TOO funny! you got the characters spot-on! great job.

Reviewer: bealsa Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 11:31 am Title: Kelly

This was so funny. Great job getting Kelly. I could really picture her. Can't wait for the next ones!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 10:43 am Title: Kelly

I laughed out loud. Oh, Kelly. Too cute.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 10:33 am Title: Kelly

Hilarious! Great job with Kelly.

Reviewer: killerqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 10:06 am Title: Kelly

love. it.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:44 am Title: Kelly

This was so funny! What Kelly said to Jim was just priceless, as was Kelly in general, just building and building until she erupts in inappropriateness. 

Then I sombrero-snorted at the little Pam/Jim exchange at the end.  Really fun. 

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