Date: June 13, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Michael
This chapter is so good! Jim's emotion at what he did to Karen and how Michael insensitively made him think about it further. Every character - Pam, Jim, Michael, Toby - written so perfectly in character.
Date: June 13, 2007 06:02 am Title: Michael
Ah, Michael. Michael-Toby interactions are some of my favorite Office things. You captured this one very nicely.
Date: June 13, 2007 05:37 am Title: Michael
I really like this story because you've managed to tie everyone finding out into each other -- like how Kelly led to Kevin who led to Toby who led to Michael. Who's next? Dwight? Hahahaha. I can't wait to see!! Also: your Michael dialogue had me in tears. He's so... unlike anyone else. Hee.
Date: June 13, 2007 12:39 am Title: Michael
Oooh, I can't wait to see who finds out next. I kind of don't want it to be Karen, because I already feel bad for Jim being an asshole. Poor assholey Jim. :(
Eeep! Update soon, please?
Date: June 12, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Michael
Stupid asshole haircut...that cracked me up! This is such great in character funny stuff you're doing. Michael was right on.
Date: June 12, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Michael
Stupid haircut. Hee!
I love how these chapters all escalate on the uncomfortable scale!
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Michael
Wow, I never thought I'd hear Michael calling Jim an asshole. What happened to his Never ever give up advice anyway? And how far away is 10:30>>
Date: June 12, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Michael
oh to be a fly on that supply closet wall...
can I just say I love this and can't wait already for the next chapter? :) Great job!!! I heart it.
9 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Michael
Poor Jim! He's not really an asshole. I like this story and always get excited when there is a new chapter just to see who will find out next. Hmmm, will Karen find out? Then again Andy or Dwight have awesome comedic possibilities. Can't wait to see.