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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Meeting Creed

Nice!  Although I like to think that Steve let Jim put the stuff in there without having to pay, since they're (Dwight thinks anyway) friends.

I'm guessing the condoms were Ryan's for Kelly (especially since she 'forgets' to take her birth control pills), and they'll get some use when he visits the office.



Author's Response: Hah! the Closet Condoms are taking over my story! And yeah, I had to work  my Favorite. Prank. Ever into this story. Thanks, Kev!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 06:05 pm Title: Clean and Sober

Interesting!  I like how she mentions Jim must be a good salesman, and all the nice detail about Rabbi Aaron, and Phyllis's knitting.  I thought the line about Robin Williams was funny. 



Author's Response: Something about Robin Williams ought to be funny! (Ooh, was that mean?) Thanks, Kev.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Of Mice and Math

This just keeps getting better and better. Who, oh, who is using the condoms? Hee.

Author's Response: Heh heh heh. The answer may surprise you. I hope it does!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 11:58 am Title: Of Mice and Math

Sunny helping Melissa is a great connection. Love it.

Author's Response: Thanks, DI. A good teacher likes kids, and I kind of feel sorry for Melissa having such a sourpuss for a dad!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 11:54 am Title: Of Mice and Math

Yay!  The truth about Jim comes out  ;o)  And I'm happy for Sunny to be getting an outlet to teach.

Author's Response: You can't keep a good teacher down! Thanks for reading, lisahoo!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 11:52 am Title: Meeting Creed

I love Sunny's perception of Jim. It a very true perspective, knowing just what she knows at this time.

Author's Response: As I got into this story, I realized that those of us who have been privy to Jim's feelings from Day One must have a different take on him than people coming late to the party, so to speak. Don't worry, though, Sunny will catch up.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 11:31 am Title: Of Mice and Math

Thanks for another fun chapter...and the cookie recipe!



Author's Response: I can tell I'm going to be doing a lot of baking this weekend. I am not sure if I'm writing the story for the excuse to research cookie recipes or not...

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2007 05:24 am Title: Meeting Creed

Aw, grilled cheese = love. In fact, I've heard its aphrodisiacal powers surpass oysters and chocolate. Still liking Sunny and glad she's warming to Jim (she is a woman with a pulse, after all!) Nice perceptions of Kelly too. 

Author's Response: Yes, grilled cheese = love. But what does a box of condoms in the Supply Closet of Love mean? Heh heh, as Sunny would say.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 08:43 pm Title: New Job

What a fun story!  I enjoy stories that are done as letters or emails. Great idea.  I like your Sunny - I like that she's trying to pay back money she owes, and that she's doing her best to make a new life for herself.

Author's Response: Thanks! Sunny is a fun character to write, and is based a little bit on some people I actually know who have slipped and fallen and gotten up again, so to speak. Everyone deserves a second chance.

Reviewer: Officeworker911 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Meeting Creed

I really enjoyed this series. 8-)

Author's Response: Not over yet! I'm glad you're having fun.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 07:25 pm Title: New Job

I want Sunny to get some lovin' from Creed now.  I'm not sure why, because Creed sex is creepy.

Author's Response: I know. But ... I know. I am just afraid Creed will break her heart, that cad.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Meeting Creed

Aww, so glad you had Sunny notice some sweetness between Pam & Jim.


Author's Response: Sunny is all about the sweet. Thanks, lisahoo!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 06:44 pm Title: Meeting Creed

Pam glowing like a light bulb and cheese samiches in the stairwell... does it get any better than that? Okay, let me go get my man points back now... 

Author's Response: I'll never tell, Mose! Glad you are enjoying this.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 04:13 pm Title: Clean and Sober

I am loving this story and the mini-movie reviews!  Will Sunny have an opinion about the Emmy noms?  Oh, no TV.  Probably not...  Dying to know who is getting busy in the 'Supply Closet of Love'.


Author's Response: Maybe it's a good think Sunny's rehab meeting is on Thursday nights, or this whole meta thing would get totally out of hand...

Author's Response: ETA think = thing

Reviewer: schrutebucks Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 03:51 pm Title: Clean and Sober

Usually, this isn't my kind of story, but you really make it work. The characterization of "Sunny" is great, I can't wait to see what else she finds out. Keep up the good work!

 

(And I totally giggled over both movie mentions. Is her next DVD rental going to be 'Blades Of Glory'? Hee.) 



Author's Response:

*snort* If she had a TV, maybe she'd be watching Little Miss Sunshine on Pay-Per-View...

It's not my kind of normal story either, schrutebucks. I'm just playing here. So far it's fun and I'm having a good time. 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 03:41 pm Title: Clean and Sober

I love that Sunny is seeing movies with Office stars in them! Such a wonderfully blurred line between fantasy and reality here. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, trying not to make this too meta, but it's fun to play transgressive little games like that. 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2007 03:27 pm Title: Clean and Sober

Yay!  Another chapter!  Keep going.  That was fun.  Should I be embarassed to say that I've seen License to Wed twice?  Such a loser...   : )

Author's Response: Since I've seen LtW three times, I can hardly call you a loser. Obviously, Sunny and I have different tastes. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Soap Opera

It's interesting to hear a "newcomer's account" of the story. 

For the record, I really liked Evan Almighty.  Our group had a 42 year age span, and we all really liked it.  Oh, well. 



Author's Response: Sunny and I don't always agree on everything. :-)  Darn characters! Thanks for your review, TLK!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 06:03 pm Title: New Job

I really like this!  Maybe you already fixed the formatting, because it didn't give me any trouble...


Author's Response:

Oh, good! The formatting is a little weird on the first part, I think. Still not sure what happened there, but I'm glad it works for you.

 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Soap Opera

Oh, I love Sunny's protectiveness of Pam and wariness of Jim. Sounds like the girl has lived a bit and has learned the hard way to be suspicious of cute boys. Love that, and her Creed-lovin' fangirliness!

Author's Response: I was surprised to find myself writing Sunny as so suspicious of Jim, but somehow it seemed natural. And who can resist the Creed love? The man is a god. Thanks for reading, nqllisi!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 12:44 pm Title: New Job

This is fabulous! I love Sunny already- she feels very real, and her reactions to the zoo of DM are spot-on. Love this experiment.

Author's Response: Thanks! This is fun. I'm glad you like it, too.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 11:55 am Title: Soap Opera

Liaisons dangereuses de Scranton...you clever girl, you. I like Sunny's school of hardknocks history (her once having been a teacher is a great detail) and that those smarts inform her pov as she watches this soap opera unfold. Lots of great impressions of the characters and so much fun to hear the story re-told this way. Kind of a fly on the wall, but in a very different way than the cameras. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Always with the French! Well, I guess I have to expect that from someone named Colette. :D  Glad you're enjoying this. More to come.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 11:13 am Title: Soap Opera

"I worry that this Jim guy may be a heartbreaker who goes through women like a dose of salts. If he hurts her, I'll put laxative in his coffee."  Damn straight.  Tell 'em Sunny!

The movie with Georgia was awful. Something about a guy building an ark in suburbia. 
Hee!  The outsider's perspective on the drama is awesome.  Can't wait to see where this goes next!


Author's Response: Hah. Wasn't sure anyone would catch the Evan Almighty ref. Glad you are enjoying this, lisahoo.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 11:05 am Title: New Job

Hee!  NEJ loves her some Creed!  The perspective of an observer to the Beach Games/The Job drama is v. intriguing, too, BTW.


Author's Response: Ah, you caught me, lisahoo. Me with the Creedlove, as usual. I hope this doesn't wind up too Mary Sue. :D Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 06:26 am Title: Soap Opera

Heh...you know, when you boil the plot down like this into one or two paragraphs, it DOES sound a little silly. :)

I'm really liking this third party observer look at Dunder-Mifflin! Keep it going, for sure.  



Author's Response: Thanks, Cousin! I do have a plan for where I'm going, so I will definitely keep this going. I'm glad you like this.

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