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1 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2017 06:35 am Title: A Favor
This is darling, and I want it to be canon, which surprises me because I usually hate Pam-Jim breakup fics. Great job with the characters.
10 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2008 01:25 pm Title: A Favor
Oh my. This made me just ache to read, it was written so well. If I have to see them break up, this was the way. Utterly great.
I'm sorry; I'm at a loss for much more than gushing! :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2007 04:51 pm Title: A Favor
i loved it :]
i was SO sad at first because they were broken up and that broke my heart! but they were cute and awkward and i loved how you got them back together. this was really great :]
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2007 09:29 pm Title: A Favor
aaaaaawwww damn fancy new beesley and her indecisiveness that causes so much angst...but it makes JAM getting together SO MUCH BETTER. love it!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 07:53 am Title: A Favor
Another BBQ.... I loved the first one... my favorite episode. Should I just dele into that episode and talk about how amazing it is and how this scene and that scene....(three hours later) back to the story.
The box :(.So full of happy memories.
He painted it for her... yeah, so I have allergies. Of course. That is why my eyes are a bit teary. allergies.
Okay, see, this is why I wait for the end, because now I don't want to throw garbage at you. :D.
Date: August 02, 2007 10:21 am Title: A Favor
YAY! This was breaking my heart and you've totally redeemed yourself!
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2007 06:09 am Title: A Favor
Very nice ending. So glad I waited until the whole thing posted! :-) I didn't believe you'd keep them apart forever.
8 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 07:48 pm Title: A Favor
"They don’t let go the rest of the night." Wow, 4 chapters of increasing heartbreak and sadness, and one chapter with the sweetiest and happiest ending!! You do both angst and love so well. Totally awesome job.
Date: July 30, 2007 06:22 pm Title: A Favor
*Sigh*. I really wish I hadn't read that one comment circa chapter 3 that spoiled the ending for me, but I am very glad that you kept things a little ambiguous.
Now go change the drop down box to mark this as 'completed' so that the poor people who only read finished works will read it.
Date: July 30, 2007 04:37 pm Title: A Favor
That was terrific! I love the ending, and now I don't have to throw trash because they got together!!! Actually I would never throw trash at you, but it was the perfect ending. Really nicely done.
Date: July 30, 2007 12:05 pm Title: A Favor
Well that's just lovely and makes my heart smile. Thank you for a look at happily ever after even after they almost call it quits.
Or something like that. LOL! Wonderful job.
Date: July 30, 2007 11:18 am Title: A Favor
YAY! I was very hopeful that "to each other" was going to be one of the returns. This was very cute, and I think the angst was very skillfully done (at least, it made my stomach hurt, so it was realistic!)
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 08:22 am Title: A Favor
This story was made of awesome! I was so excited and anxious for this last chapter and you didn't disappoint at all!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 08:19 am Title: A Favor
it's 8 am, im exhuasted from working all night, and i'm reduced to a blob of tears and giggles. thank you so much. thank you. thank you. i loved the angst, but the way you brought them back together, gah.. just. yeah... speechless..
Date: July 30, 2007 08:00 am Title: A Favor
Awww! What a nice, heartwarming ending. I'm glad that the last thing they returned to each other was themselves! Great job :-)
Date: July 30, 2007 07:58 am Title: A Favor
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayeeee! Thank God! Now I don't have to kill you. I can't tell you what a relief that is! ;)
8 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 07:36 am Title: A Favor
Thank you! What a great ending. Now I'm happy!
Date: July 30, 2007 06:38 am Title: A Favor
I totally thought you would screw us... until the very end! Yeah! I almost didn't read this for fear of it not ending well between them... and I really needed it too!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 06:34 am Title: A Favor
Oh, whew! They did get back together. I was so sad and getting more and more worried. I am awed by how real and in character you kept Jim and Pam throughout the whole breakup, right up through the end. Thank you for the happy ending.
Date: July 30, 2007 05:06 am Title: A Favor
Wow...I don't know if there's been a final chapter of a story that I've been more anxiously anticipating than this one. I know the struggle you went through writing this, and I know about the re-toolings, the re-hashings, and the re-writes, and I have been wondering which direction you'd end up going in. And after reading this brilliant chapter, I have to say--wholeheartedly--"Mission Accomplished!"
There are so many things I love about this particular chapter that it's difficult to know where to begin. First of all, however, WOOT! for Post-it notes and shout outs! (How sad is it that when I read about the notes being in the box that I didn't even think of my 55 word fic? heh.)
I also love the play on words with the "return the favor" thing and the party horns/moving. It reminds me so much of "Cliche," and almost makes this whole story a sub-plot of that one. Brilliant stuff.
Oh, and this line: "She mistakes her embarrassment for bravery" absolutely owns me, as you said once. :)
Just a fabulous job all the way around, m'dear! Viva la Swifferina!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 03:43 am Title: A Favor
Amazing! You made all worthwhile. And You did this all in such in authentic way. Botht he pain of breaking up and th ejoy of getting back together felt completely real. Wonderful story. Thanks for this!
Date: July 30, 2007 03:30 am Title: A Favor
YAY! This was fantastic, and thank you, thank you, thank you for getting them back together. And in such a smoking fashion, too. hee Those two can't be apart, it's against the laws of God and man. lol
9 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 12:53 am Title: A Favor
Yeah! I love the way you got them back together in the end. Squee!
Date: July 29, 2007 11:25 pm Title: A Favor
I loved the ending! I had convinced myself you were going to keep them apart and then you pull this on me! haha
I love that Jim made a place for her in his house- that it became his way of trying to get her back into his life.
Loved reading this story! :)