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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Hot Girl

lmao quidich - nuff said

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Hot Girl

Its random mention time - but I like how you have them talk in lower case sometimes, and well, in general, its very chat speak - not the annoying how r u, im gr8, annoying stuff, but I am generally pretty lazy about capitalizing words and using punctuation, and so this feels really natural.

"jimhalpert: I don't even want to imagine a situation where he would possibly need to know that"
and i agree with Jim here.

and i am not a curling fan, i am with pam. it has to be a joke (even though i have seen it with my own eyes).

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 10:21 am Title: Hot Girl

Perfect, perfect banter, with a touch of jealousy. Really good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, that's what I was going for . . . a touch of jealousy from Pam.

Reviewer: Evan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 12:02 am Title: Hot Girl

Everyone knows curling fans are imaginary.



Author's Response: Hey now, I didn't say that ;)

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Hot Girl

ah this is so them

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Hot Girl

Nice.  I especially liked the part about cycles.  So Michael to ask, and it's wonderful how Pam made things clear.


Author's Response: If Jan's going to be living with Michael next season, then maybe we'll actually see him ask about cycles :)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Hot Girl

Oh how I'd love to go on a date with Jim Halpert.  Curling and metal detectors.  Perfection!

Nice work, ladama!



Author's Response: Yup, it would be perfection. I want to at least hear about some cute Jim Halpert style dates in S4. Thanks.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 09:56 am Title: Hot Girl

I love the banter and the tone you use here, and throughout. Of course, I imagine that Pam is an Olympics geek like me, so of course she knows what curling is! (It's surprisingly fun, too!).  Also, I can totally imagine Michael asking Pam about cycles. Hee.

Author's Response:

Well, on the one hand she does have general Olympic knowledge, but on the other hand she doesn't seem to be into sports of any kind, so I could go either way. Or she was just teasing to see what Jim would say.

And yes, I'm 99% sure Michael asked someone in the office about "cycles" :D Thanks for the comment.

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