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Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Casino Night

Ow, ow, ow...  I know the train is coming, but I can't seem to get off of the tracks...

These are great, BTW.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 06:05 pm Title: Gay Witch Hunt

I like how you played it out here.  I would bet that he did find out via e-mail or IM.  Ouch.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Casino Night

Oh, there was tissues needed that night, fo sho.

Another great one, ladama.



Author's Response: Thank, I was worried the tissue reference would be a little tacky, but people seem to like it.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 06:01 pm Title: Conflict Resolution

I like the eloping line.

Sounds like a little story that I know!



Author's Response: Um . . . are you refering to yourself maybe? Or many one of your own fics?

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 12:59 pm Title: Gay Witch Hunt

I haven't seen anything indicating when Jim found out yet on the S3 DVDs.  There's no Convention commentary, sadly.  So I think you're safe, there.

This is a really good chapter, and very interesting, since it fills in a gap and moves the story along as opposed to reacting just to whatever happened.

I love Kevin's reference to the gaydar. 



Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, I figured Kevin would love the gaydar ;-)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Casino Night

This line "well, there's always the eternal dilemma of whether I'm gonna eat in the breakroom or in the kitchen" sounds very Jim to me. :)

I like how you put in a Jan phone call... 



Author's Response: Hehe, he's just trying to make his life more exciting :-)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Conflict Resolution

Good chapter.  I love how they're still okay here and can talk about it.  I also really enjoyed that Pam was sorry about her Angela treatment and Jim acknowledged he should have told her sooner regarding that.


Author's Response: I just wanted to make everything right in this episode, it's still sad to watch.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 10:14 am Title: Casino Night

Oh, I love how you have Pam foreshadowing with the crying. And Jim's life of quiet desperation, where his only big question is where to eat the lunch he packed from home. Just great job with the angst.

Author's Response: Well, that and whether or not he should tell Pam he's desperately in love with her. Gotta love the angst.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 10:04 am Title: Gay Witch Hunt

Jim finding out on IM? Harsh. I like to think maybe someone called him to let him know, but you're probably right. I bet everyone assumed he knew so no one went to call him. And I love Kev's screenname. Very appropriate. I'm glad you explored this in IM, but I would have loved to see how Pam found out that Jim left. 

Author's Response: I think he at best got an email. Pam finding out Jim left/was leaving was probably an exercise in denial where she would tell everyone including herself that she was happy Jim got a promotion.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 10:02 am Title: Casino Night

Aww, these past two chapters are really well done, with Pam trying to make things normal and Jim kind of just going with it half-heartedly. Liked the mention of Jan, and Jim's quick brushing off of it. I'm really looking forward to reading the season three ones!

Author's Response: Season 3 will be a roller coaster for sure, but stick with it ;-)

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 02:54 pm Title: Drug Testing

This is the most adorable chapter of all. It is so COMPLETELY Jim, even without a word being said. If you wrote no other chapters, this would still be a winner. Thanks so much!


Author's Response: Ah, well, I guess I can stop, then . . . hehe ;-) Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Michael's Birthday

I laughed out loud at the "waxing" line, and Pam's last line is very funny. I am so enjoying these!


Author's Response: You literally lol'ed? I'm very excited about that.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 02:45 pm Title: The Secret

Oh, I LOVE the missed message at the end. Awww!

Author's Response: Yeah, I do as well. I like having my heart broken for some reason.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Performance Review

then he had to report Michael for something

You know, I've always wondered why Michael hates Toby so much, and this very simple, very believable explanation never occurred to me. Wonderful! 



Author's Response: Oh, poor Toby, he would have been fired about 57 times by now if he wasn't "Corporate"

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 02:37 pm Title: The Fight

the gears are already turning in your head, aren't they?

I love that line. So Pam. She knows him so well. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 02:33 pm Title: Office Olympics

Does anyone else feel that "The Job" turned Office Olympics from an okay, middle of the road episode to a pretty good one?

Hey, I never felt that Office Olympics was a middle-of-the-road episode. For me, it's always been one of the funniest, Jammiest, sweetest episodes. :) Loved your idea of what Jim does with his yogur-lid medal.



Author's Response: I shouldn't say it's bad, but nothing about it ever stood out to me, but now I love it.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 10:33 am Title: Drug Testing

OMG, this was my favorite one! How cute!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 09:40 am Title: Drug Testing

This is TOTALLY what Jim would have done regarding IM on that day. Hilarious.

Author's Response: Heh, thanks, it was one of my more inspired moments.

Reviewer: jrich82 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 08:22 am Title: Drug Testing

That is an impressive use of smiley faces!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 08:06 am Title: Drug Testing

Jim's smileys crack me up -- this was a great chapter!!!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 08:01 am Title: Drug Testing

Ha!  I love the one with the dollar sign.  I'm going to start using that.

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 05:43 am Title: Drug Testing

Excellent way of handling this episode, ladama.  Truly innovative.  But on another note, I love how Pam called him out and told him he probably could have purchased a coke by now.  Oh the games they play.

Author's Response: Yeah, I mean, come on, how hard is it to get a coke?

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 03:33 am Title: Drug Testing

HA! That was awesome. Best non-use of words ever. Of course Jim would be the master of choosing the appropriate smilies.

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 02:05 am Title: Drug Testing

Hee! Such a great idea with this one! I love this whole fic!

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Drug Testing

wow...that is awesome! I can't believe you pulled off an im conversation adhering to the unflinchingly ridgid rules of jinx! Well Done ;-)

Author's Response: Exactly, they are unflinchingly rigid . .

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