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Reviewer: Clover Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2017 11:54 am Title: Denial

Such a beautiful story! It's been almost 10 years since the last review, but if you are still checking, your gift is still be received all these years later. Thank you. Just beautiful!

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 10:26 am Title: Denial

Love love love this!  Can't think of anything else to say!

Author's Response: Well I love that you love it!!  Thanks so much for telling me so!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Denial

I love this.  It was sweet and perfect and the rythm of the whole story just worked in so many ways. 

Author's Response:

Thank you kells!  This one was fun to write - back when I thought maybe they'd get their acts together pre-Merger.

I couldn't have been more wrong - but that's what makes fanfiction so much fun!

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 06:11 pm Title: Denial

HEY, this is crazy, but during tonight's episode when Michael was describing the 5 stages of grief, I immediately thought of this fic. Yep..just thought I'd let you know...lol

Author's Response: HA!  Well that's impressive!!  I mean - I thought of it - but I wrote it.  I'm happy to know someone else remembered!  Thanks Winky!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2006 10:47 pm Title: Denial

First of all, have I been in a cave? No. I have no excuse for not having read + reviewed this. Bad, bad shan.

Terrific idea, great first chapter. The last two lines in particular are perfect.



Author's Response: I think you might have been away...dealing with that pesky thing called REAL LIFE. :)  No worries!  I'm delighted you've finally come around. ;)   Thanks Shan!

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 04:59 pm Title: Denial

Hugs - I love this story! The stages are believable and spot on. You're such an amazing writer. Can't wait to read the last chapter. 



Author's Response: Aw thanks TV_Buffy!!   You humble me.  I really think I'm just an overly obsessed Office fan with a keyboard.  LOL!  Next chapter soon!!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 10:50 am Title: Denial

Please tell me the next chapter is coming soon? This is almost as bad as waiting 4 months to find out what happens post- Jam kiss. ALMOST!

Author's Response: Yep.  As a matter of fact it's already there.  Just not the continuation of "Pam driving to Jim's" but I hope it'll do. ;)

Reviewer: meeeg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 01:01 am Title: Denial

i like it. i don't know what else to say except that I'll be back for more.



Author's Response: Thanks meeeg.  Glad to hear it!!

Reviewer: kath Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2006 08:53 pm Title: Denial

I love angry and passionate Jim.  I hope we get to see a little something of that this season.  I feel like singing your praises as a writer are a bit redundant b.c you know I love ya!  Keep up the great writing girl.  You know I am counting the minutes until your next update.

Author's Response:

Me too.  Me too.  HA!  It's ok - it never gets old.  Thank you - I'll certainly try.

Soon - I promise!!

Reviewer: halfbaked Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2006 07:38 pm Title: Denial

*slaps self in head* Please pretend that I know how to spell pretend.

Author's Response: Will do. :)

Reviewer: halfbaked Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2006 07:36 pm Title: Denial

Love it! Finally they have a grown-up argument that has the voice of real adults complete with sarcasm.
I must disagree with the I/me discussion. I think the correct choice would be "I." Prettend you're answering the question posed. "...who'd want him to leave..." Answer: "I wouldn't."

Author's Response:

I'm so glad!!  I know - the two of them really need to have this out. 

OK - the "I's" have it I guess.  heehee!  I should have just stuck with my first thought!!

Reviewer: agd300 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 06:46 am Title: Denial

Fabulous start!

Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 05:42 am Title: Denial

Yeah, some definite denial going on there.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks Lissa!!!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 03:52 am Title: Denial

This is a great structure for a story, isn't it? (I was inspired by the 5 stages for a Roy-fic once, myself). You have a knack for capturing Pam's inner voice. Lovely, as usual.

Author's Response:

It's awesome.  Because I am sure it's possible for her to do all of it. Deny at first, then get angry, make concessions, be totally depressed and then run like crazy straight to Jim.  (Are you listening to me writers???)

And thank you.  I'm so glad you think so.l 

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 11:59 pm Title: Denial

Absolutely fantastic.  Very realistic interpretation.  Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks Isabel!!  I'll try!

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 08:48 pm Title: Denial

so so fantastic. feels so true to pam's character...as usual :) can't wait to see how you work through this scenario again!

Author's Response:

This might be because I have this secret desire to actually be Pam. 

Ummm.  Did I say that out loud?  LOL!

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 07:14 pm Title: Denial

I love the way you did this without going overboard and using too many words.  Simple and to the point - very effective!


Author's Response: I was a tad nervous - so you almost got a sneak peek.  And then the 2nd chapter came so fast I was uber impatient.  I'm glad you thinks so - especially since this review reply is particularly wordy. LOL! :)

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 07:01 pm Title: Denial

I'm so excited for your new story :)  

Author's Response: I'm so glad!!!  Thanks Jen!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 06:50 pm Title: Denial

I don't really have any enlightening comment to make except:  Oh shiny, pretty new story. ;)  I really enjoy it.

Author's Response: Ha!  That's quite alright.  Comments like that are greatly appreciated. ;)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 06:24 pm Title: Denial

What an awesome beginning!  I can't wait to read more -especially the every other chapter fluff!

Author's Response: thanks kaystar!!!

Reviewer: proposals Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 06:06 pm Title: Denial

God, I love the way you write. I'm really really excited to see where this is going; it's already so good. Please don't keep us waiting for too long.



Author's Response:

You're making me blush. 

It seems my muse is incredibly impatient - so I don't think you'll need to worry too much about that. :)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 06:05 pm Title: Denial

This story has all kinds of potential, and I'm loving the theme of the 5 stages. I have a feeling Bargaining is going to be really interesting...

Author's Response:

It started with me wanting to see either one or both of them mad and then viola. 

And hmmm...we'll see. :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 05:32 pm Title: Denial

Keep writing. I want to see where this goes

Author's Response:

OK.  Will do. ;)

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