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Reviewer: trulisthetic Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2020 11:33 am Title: 8:00 PM

This has got to be one of my favorite fics ever, if not my number one. I can't even express how wild a ride you just gave me, this is EXACTLY my cup of -poured through a teal teapot full of memories- tea, and I can't thank you enough for writing it. Wow. I'm just.... so awestruck right now I can't write a bloody review. Thank you SO DAMN MUCH for this gem!

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2020 08:23 am Title: 8:00 PM

I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just discovered it, and it is brilliant. Truly, this was a beautiful masterpiece. I'm happy to see you have 18 other stories. I'm definitely checking them out.

Reviewer: Nummington Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2020 09:01 am Title: 8:00 PM

Wow, what can I say. I have spent my whole day reading this. I've loved every moment of it. Please tell me there will be more. Jim and Pam are just adorable in this!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2019 08:27 am Title: 8:00 PM

Well this is delightful. I can see why it's technically unfinished (you owe us another hour! Just kidding) but you did get to the key point. And it is a really amazing combination of completely original material and references to the show. Wonderful work.

Reviewer: OfficeGirl2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2017 03:54 pm Title: 8:00 PM

I loved this. Such a great premise/idea and flawless writing.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 08:43 pm Title: 8:00 PM

I'm so happy you updated this!  You're wrapping the story up perfectly.  I loved Roy's non-response and how it ticked Pam off so thoroughly that she realized it was over.

I'm too tired to leave a coherent review but I will say that I plan to re-read this in the next few days ... from the BEGINNING ... and enjoy the whole ride again.

Thanks so much for sharing this with us!



Author's Response: Thanks Vampiric Blood! This chapter was quite the beast to write so I'm glad to hear you think it's all making sense! Thanks again for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 07:12 am Title: 8:00 PM

My dear, dear Swiff. How fantastic is it to see an update to this story? Reminds me of the "good old days" when we would write and post with abandon and then sit back and revel in the heady elixir of reviews. 

Wow, wouldn't it be funny if I really talked like that? All full of pretension and snobbery? :D

Seriously, it does my heart so much good to see that you're this close to bursting the tape on this one. And this chapter was fabulous in so many ways. Even after all that's happened on  the show itself, and the ways in which the characters have evolved and changed, you've still managed to maintain that classic barely-post-casino-night angst and uncertainty that they had at this point. The dialogue rang true, and there were some genuinely sweet and tender moments. 

You're an inspiration to the rest of us who have allowed their own unfinished stories to wither on the vine. (Okay, me, anyway. :D)

Great work, my friend!



Author's Response: Mose! It was your encouraging words two years ago that helped me get this story off the ground. And it means so much that after all this time you're still top notch in the encouragement department :) Thanks for coming out of your fic hibernation to read the latest installment, it really really means a lot.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 06:25 am Title: 8:00 PM

::wipes tear::  Oh my goodness.  You're back.  Pull up a chair at the kitchen table and let's chat, k?  I love this.  Pam showed up at his door.  *sob*  She loves him, too *sniffle*  ...you deserve way more than just flirting for eight hours a day at a boring job. Damn straight he does!  Don't screw this up, sister!  (That's my internal monologue in case you didn't know).  You know, I think it's awesome that you haven't given up on this, Wendy.  No matter how long it is between chaps, I enjoy reading each one.  One or two more some time soon?  I hope so.

Author's Response: NanReg, your reviews actually make me laugh out loud :) Your support of this story means so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter after such a long hiatus. There's one more chapter in me and I'll try not to take too long in writing it. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 05:56 am Title: 8:00 PM

I'll forgive you for taking so long between chapters, as long as you update eventually.  

Hah, they did eat a lot -- another thing I love about Pam  ;o) 

Loved the turnaround on the Casino Night speech, and Pam realizing Jim was her 'stand-in boyfriend' and saying it out loud.  Nicely done, Wendy.  Don't be a stranger.



Author's Response: I think I was projecting my love for road trip food onto unsuspecting Jim and Pam :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing lisahoo!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 04:30 am Title: 8:00 PM

Wow, really excited to see a chapter on this story updated - and love the update itself! Yay!

Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 02:23 am Title: 8:00 PM

Ha, I so need to re read this as I only kind of remember what was going on, but this was great. I loved it loved it loved it. I really hope we don't have to wait another two years for the next chapter lol.
I loved how strong you had Jim being when all she wanted to do was snuggle and get dirty, very good.

Get busy pleaseeee

Author's Response: Yeah, it's been awhile, a recap might be a good call :) I'll try and get writing as soon as possible! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 11:48 pm Title: 8:00 PM

::hyperventilates::

God I love this story! Thanks for the surprise update! ;)

Author's Response: *hands you a paper bag* You're welcome! :)

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 11:23 pm Title: 8:00 PM

=]
that lame emoticon should say it all.

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 10:45 pm Title: 8:00 PM

Yay! I remember reading this ages ago, getting so invested in it and then it just....stopped. And I was so sad so when I saw you updated, all I could say was yay! I love the parallels drawn between Pam's confession to Jim's but my favourite line has to be "Hell yes". I know life is infinitely more important than curing my boredom, but please update again soon! You're so close to the end! :) Just to emphasize my point: Yay!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry I left you hanging for so long! Glad that this chapter makes up for it :) Thanks again for letting me beta your fantastic story and more thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 10:22 pm Title: 8:00 PM

What a nice surprise to find an update to this, one of my favorites.  And what a great chapter too!  Too often when WIPs take long to be updated I find that the latter chapters are not as good as the beginning of the stories.  This is not the case with yours.  I look forward to your next chapter, however long it takes. :)


Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you think it's not going downhill! The last thing I want is for the last few chapters to feel rushed. Thanks for being so patient and taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 10:11 pm Title: 8:00 PM

yay! go Pam! is there still one more hour to the day???

Author's Response: Yes there is! Don't know how quickly it'll be coming, but I'll do my best to write the last chapter in a much more reasonable amount of time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 09:48 pm Title: 8:00 PM

Oh I'm so happy you updated this! 

...like after Michael asks her to spend the afternoon researching the difference between Diet Coke and Coke Zero.

 Oh I've totally been at work with projects like this!  Love it.

And the last part about how they fall asleep together and gah, it's just great.  I hope we get the last installment sooner than later ;)



Author's Response: Hey, thanks for hanging in there WildBerryJam! I can't guarantee a super speedy update, but being so close to the finish line might just be the inspiration I need :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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