1 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2020 11:36 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Love this! Would love an update! You are an amazing writer love all of your work. Thank you for sharing
1 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2019 02:54 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I love this follow up, and ESPECIALLY the introducing backstory for other IRC folks. I get why you didn't finish, but this manages to live up to the original, and that's high praise indeed.
Date: May 08, 2011 05:58 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Oh my heck I loved this - and now it sits unfinished. I think I'm gonna cry. :(
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2009 06:54 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
oh my god! YES! please keep going with this! i love how sholva was like 'who's pam' - that was great and pam's intro to DWIGHT K. SCHRUTE. oh wow, that was a good chapter, nice recall of the rooftop scene. please keep going though, you left us at such a suspenseful note!
i'm rooting for you, just like i am with the phillies (only because jim likes them... i'm serious!)!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2008 09:12 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
yay yay yay for squirrel mcpants. but i was sad to see that this story hasn't been updated in a loooong time, unless i read the date wrong. sadness. more, please!
Author's Response: No, it hasn't been updated in a long time - but it is my intention to finish it. Life just gets in the way sometime. Thanks so much for all your kind words - it means a lot to me!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2008 07:30 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I'm guessing from the dates that this story is likely not going to be continued, but I really loved it (and the original). I hope you finish it someday!
Author's Response: Never give up on it - I do intend to finish it; I've been ruminating on the next chapter just this week, actually. Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
You better still be updating this lol
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2008 10:59 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I don't think I've told you, in depth, how much I love this story. And it's original nd witty and hilarious and just so cute. It's possibly the best fanfic, if not general piece of fiction, I've ever read. (I'm gushing. Oh boy.) The writing is phenomenal and the plot adorable, and so dorkishly Pam and Jim. I just love reading this, and I hope you update sooon! It's 100% perfect. Handfuls of gold stars and thumbs up and billions of points to you.
So yeah. You rock and you know it! I'm excited for Mr. McPants' next task! ;)
-Samaire
Date: May 24, 2008 06:16 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I know this hasn't been updated in six months or so... but I hope that you eventually find the time to finish it, it looks like it will be a very fun story!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 07:13 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Aww yay, there's a sequel to the Love Song of Squirrel McPants. The task Leikha gave them was so sweet, aww.
Are you done with this already, or is it going to go on? This is so good, I'd hate for it to be over now... Plus, I want to know how Jim deals with being nice to Dwight for a full day.
Please... write more? ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2008 08:58 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
These stories are wonderful. I have really fallen into the world of Fanfic. I love all the ideas. Congrats on roping me in!
Date: March 27, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I've just spent about 3 days reading "The lovesong of Squirrel McPants" and was SO excited when I found this!! I'm not used to waiting for the next chapter now so please don't make me have withdrawels now! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
I looooove these stories!! It's so original and just plain adorable. Love love love love love. And making the roof scene the moment he knew he loved her just made me say "Awwww" out loud. Damn Jim Halpert and his perfect/not realness!!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2008 06:12 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
lol, I love this ending. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Date: November 23, 2007 08:53 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Dear Moxie - I have spent my morning reading your squirrel mcpants stories and just want to say they are fantastic! In fact, I registered here just to review you.
You really keep the voices consistent with the characters, and honestly I have become intrigued with the people of #love-stinks. I am glad that you are weaving their stories as well as S4 episode scenes with your Universe. A complicated but realistic thing to do.
also i love your internal consistency w/the details like sholva saying "who's pam" at the end.
Thank you for this. Haven't been finding good ff lately.
Date: November 11, 2007 02:19 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
SO cute! nive tie-ins with S4. and I love Vexin's line--"don't forget about us when you become famous" ahhh... memories of S3 finale... anyways, great job. can't wait to read more!
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 04:42 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Well at first I wasn't sure i was on board with the in depth look at the other chat participants. But I really think it adds a whole new depth to the story. It's also nice to see other people benefitting from this bold chance Jim took. Awesome, of course.
Date: November 08, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
sholva> Who's Pam??
I love that. LMAO!
Date: November 07, 2007 08:37 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Delving into the world of the other chatters wasn't confusing at all. In fact, I really enjoyed this technique. It gave a fullness to the story and to the task. The parallels to Leikha life and Jim's were really illustrative. I think you're on to something here!
Date: November 06, 2007 11:03 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
That was awesome and such a funny ending.
I really enjoyed learning about Leikha and am looking forward to learning more about the other chatters.
And, again, how you intertwined the show into the story was flawless. Just really perfect.
Date: November 06, 2007 07:45 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
haha i love that in jim's distress at the end he calls her Pam! I really loved getting to learn more about the other people in the chat, and seeing how Jim and Pam have inspired Leikha to continue pursuing her dreams. I like the kind of flashback feel, and the task was, of course, preciously awesome! I can't wait to see what you have in store for/with Dwight!!!
Author's Response: I was worried the task might have seemed a bit lame, but it just tied in too well with why in the world they might have gone up to the roof that night. Thanks for the review - they really do encourage me to continue. :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
This is so much fun! I love that you are delving into the lives of other characters.
Can't wait for more!
Date: November 05, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Nice tie in with the actual show!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so, bebitched! Thanks for reviewing. :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Also, forgot to say I really like going into the worlds of the other chatters. Very cool.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was hoping people wouldn't mind reading about some characters that *aren't* really in the Office Universe....
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 02:45 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
HA! Most hilarious last line of a chapter EVER. Hee hee!
Author's Response: Wow - thanks!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I love the seamless way this fits into season 4. I am really excited to see a little more into the minds of the other chatters and their true take on the route Jim took as Squirrel McPants. Also, awesome ending. Fantastic job, as always!
Author's Response: Thanks - keeping in sync with season 4 has been both helpful and challenging! I just hope the writer's strike ends soon, or poor Squirrel will be left in limbo as well! Thanks for the review, WIL!