9 [Report This]Date: December 08, 2010 02:53 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
You are a fantastic writer... with the description of the painting you gave, I can actually see it, vividly!
Date: February 19, 2010 11:05 am Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
You paint a beautiful picture with your words, VB. I can see Pam's painting in my mind
Date: October 27, 2009 05:42 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
oh my goodness. that was the most beautiful thing i've ever read. and honest to god i'm serious. how are you such an amazing writer. the best possible situation just pops into my head and you read my mind and write it down. that was so beautiful. you're description of the painting was breathtaking and the details added later were amazing. i can't wait to see how jim will react to this or what pam will do next. this was the most perfect thing i've ever read. fantastic job. i'm seriously speachless.
Date: October 16, 2008 11:01 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
Awesome! That was very gutsy of her after all this time, but how much clearer could she be?
Date: September 20, 2008 10:59 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
HOLY. FRICKING. CRAP.
Pam got like, a thousand times bolder.
No, a billion.
No, a trillion.
Okay, I have to keep reading.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying.
Date: August 21, 2008 10:30 am Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
VB, this chapter is just lovely. Thank goodness Jim didn’t use the return shipping label – I can say for sure that this would have killed me off! And, I just love Pam in this story: “I just needed you to know. Once” – gulp!
And this line: “The composition was kind of dynamic, with the hands and the legs pushing their way into the frame.” You my friend are an artist. BAx
Author's Response: Thank you! Your reviews always put the biggest smiles on my face!
10 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2008 10:13 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
WOW WOW WOW! This was so perfect in everyway shape and form. I'm completely in love with this story now. The painting was so beautiful. I love that your Pam has so much confidence :D
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, raspberryjam! What a nice review. I'm kinda partial to this chapter, myself. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: August 17, 2008 09:49 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
I L-O-V-E this story! I have to admit, however, I am having a hard time picturing a white stick with a red plus. What is that?
Author's Response: Thank you! The stick is an over the counter pregnancy test. The red plus indicates POSITIVE.
Date: August 15, 2008 07:57 am Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
Your description of Pam's vision of the life they should be having together made me teary-eyed. Very, very sweet. I also love Pam's jittery wait to find out his reaction.
Author's Response:
Ah, you hit the nail on the head. It is the life they should be having. That exact thing will come up soon.
Thanks for leaving a reveiw! Have a good weekend.
Date: August 14, 2008 07:58 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
OooOOO, I'm really liking this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up on Monday.
Date: August 14, 2008 07:58 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
I really don't even know what to say. I closed my eyes and could see the painting. You did a perfect job of describing it. It took me a few minutes to figure out what the mug said Brillant! I honestly don't know which story I want you to work on first this or Cardiac Care. I love them both equally.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm really happy that the painting is being received so well. This is addictively fun!
I plan to finish this story first and go back to Cardiac Care. This one will be done in 2 - 3 more chapters.
9 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 07:02 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
This story is great. You are now one of my favorite authors. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I feel honored! Thank you.
The next chapter won't be up till Monday. We're going away for the weekend tomorrow and I won't have access to a computer.
Date: August 14, 2008 06:16 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
this is awesome :) this sounds like a beautiful painting - awesome descriptions.
Author's Response: Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 06:16 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
As I told you (hope you got my email!), I love this, sorry I didn't have time to beta for you! I think the picture is perfect; not too cheesy, just cute. I could definitely see Pam painting this.
Really, bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks, ditp! Like I said in my email response, callisto had a chance to look it over and give feedback. I appreciate the review.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 06:08 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
Keep going.....this is an awesome perspective!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: August 14, 2008 05:55 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
"LD’S
T
DDY"
Way to kill me, VB. I actually sighed out loud. Loved the details in this chapter. I didn't expect something so bold from Pam.
Signed, Anxiously Awaiting More
Author's Response: Thanks, NR! I almost didn't make the painting quite so bold but I decided to go for it! I am really having a fun time with this one. It's a nice change of pace after all the hospital stress in Cardiac Care.
Date: August 14, 2008 05:50 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
one of the best, most imaginative and original stories i've read in a long time! the idea of the painting and all the detail that captures both of them, is just brilliant! please please keep going, it's beautiful!
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments.
Date: August 14, 2008 05:47 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
I really like this fic. I'm wondering what will happen now that Jim has the picture. Hopefully call her??? Maybe?
Author's Response: In a couple of chapters, we will see what Jim does. Thank you for leaving a review!
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 05:45 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
Let me just say, wow. You totally blew me away with this. The picture was so much more than what I had envisioned. This line "...he felt a wave of contentment wash over him". And the mug. Wow. It brought tears to my eyes...
By the way, my 15 year old son now thinks I'm a total nutcase to cry over a story, so thanks for that!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thank you! You actually cried? Now I am blown away!
My 18 year old son KNOWS I'm a total nutcase, sitting here typing away every night. But thank you so, so much for this review. You really made my night!
Date: August 14, 2008 05:44 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
Wow that picture says so much!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: August 14, 2008 05:32 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
Oh, I love the details of the painting :) Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks, JITC! I was kinda happy with the way the painting came out, too. I can envision it in my head, even if I can't draw a stick figure!
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Next, we will see more of Pam.
Date: August 14, 2008 05:22 pm Title: If You Could Say It in Words...
I'm loving this fanfic! Can't wait to see how Jim responds.
It may sound silly, but what does
"LD’S
T
DDY" stand for
Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi, Noodles:
I didn't want to blow the surprise for anyone who might read reviews out of sequence with the chapter (like when you view all reviews) , so I answered your question in an email.