Date: April 08, 2009 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
I cannot tell you how much I love this story. I've been following this story for a while now, but I just got around to posting a review.
I'm not sure, but I think Ryan must be up to something not-so-good. But maybe I'm wrong. I was wrong about who was following Pam.
Anyway, this is one of my favourite fan-fictions I've read, and I cannot wait for you to update.
By the way, Voldemort's an adorable name for the dog. Even if it is just temporary. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much iJam, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate your taking the time to review. I've been out of town, but I'm hoping to get cracking on the rest of this, and the pup will end up with a name.
Date: April 01, 2009 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
ANOTHER surprise?!? Wow. I love this story, though! And NoFirewoeks here might just have an idea about what Pam needs to tell him...we shall see I guess.
Author's Response: Thanks NoFireworks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. We shall see, indeed. Your review is much appreciated.
Date: March 31, 2009 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
I have been waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting for this update-I literally went "YES!" when I saw it.
Awesome job as usual, you really had me on the edge of my seat with the last chapter and it's nice to see everything come together. I'm really looking forward to see how this story finishes!
10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2009 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
What the heck is up with Ryan?
And ugh, I hate Alex. He's such a brown-noser.
Reading on.
Author's Response: Ryan is a little egomanic of a jerk. But poor Alex, he just wants to help.
10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2009 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
So I just got into this and I love it! I'm a sucker for suspense and I'm so anxious to figure out who the stalker is! And you know. For Jim to be okay. Yeah. Anyway, I hope you update this soon because it's so awesome! Seriously. :)
Author's Response: Thanks oobadnama, I'm having a really good time writing this one - I do enjoy twists. I have some time at the end of this week so I'm hoping to get the next chapter up by then. (Don't worry, I've already killed Jim off once, I wouldn't do it again - or would I?) *maniacial laughter*rnrnMany thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: November 25, 2008 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Wow, what a fantastic story you have here. I love the angst/suspense and can't wait to see where you're going to take it. Please post more soon. :)
Author's Response: Somehow I missed this review before, my apologies. Thanks for the encouragement, and for reading and reviewing. Hope to have the next one up in a few days.
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2008 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Yikes. So, is this a nefarious evil plan where Ryan and Alex have teamed up to ruin Jim and Pam? (Sorry, I just finished reading Dennis Lehane's "Darkness, Take My Hand" which features a crazy triple villain scenario and my mind is just going crazy). Please have Jim shoot Ryan to death at some point, will you? Cool story and great title, Jazzy! I love that song...
Author's Response: Ryan and Alex? Wait, how about Kevin?
Date: November 10, 2008 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Oooh I am SO sucked in right now. So glad you've already posted chapter 2! Oh man when Jim told her to call Alex, I literally put a hand to my heart...he loves her SO much! Uh...ok, on to chapter 2.
Author's Response: Oh, you made my morning. I'm so glad you "got" that about Jim sucking it up and telling her to call Alex. It was my favorite part. *SapsRUs*rnrnThanks, LoveFool.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Wow! Awesome. That gave me the shivers reading that! I can't wait for the next chapters. Ryan seems creepy, maybe he knows something, and Alex was suspiciously close by!
Author's Response: Ryan is always creepy. LOL I'm excited that it gave you the shivers, though. The thot plickens.rnrnBig thank you for the review, Noodles.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
I hope it isn't Alex lmao :(
Author's Response: I didn't think Alex was such a bad guy in the episode either, what can I say? There a lot of people in New York. A lot of people. /KevrnrnThanks for reviewing, Hannah_Halpert.
Date: November 10, 2008 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
ooh...I have certain suspicions.
Author's Response: Hah! As well you should.rnrnThanks for the review, andtheivy.
Date: November 10, 2008 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Whoa! Nice work! I didn't take a breath the whole time! You did a great job building and maintaining the tension and I can see this going a number of different ways - all of them really exciting and twisted. Looking forward to an update!
Author's Response: Thanks Sweetpea, I'm glad the whole tension thing worked for you. Hmm, which way will this go? LOL I appreciate the review!