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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2009 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was unbelievable! you are SO AMAZING when it comes to writing about Jim and Pam, i can't believe it!

this was perfect. that's all i'm going to say.

Reviewer: Blind Assassin Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2009 04:58 am Title: Chapter 1

yanana, this so lovely. Would say more but I’m off to read the rest of your posts!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2009 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

SO lovely. I hope it ends up like this in the show eeep

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2009 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Very realistic, I could see every bit of this. I especially liked this exchange:

"We're good," he says with a simple smile, hoping the reassurance will drop from his body to hers. "I know it might not sound like anything, but I think we are. And when we hit a bump in the road somewhere along the line, we'll be fine."

She smiles and that's working.

He presses his thumb against the ring again. "There's not anything, really... there's not much I wouldn't do for this. And I know it sucks, I know it's hard. But, Pam--"

"I know," she says, closing her eyes and nodding with her hand still in his. She squeezes his fingers and bites her lip when her eyes flutter open. "I do, I know."

He can stop then and he breathes out. He must have held it in, because it's heavier than they both expected. They both sigh and laugh lightly.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was lovely.  You took us right into Pam's heart to feel her sadness over her parents and into Jim's with his loving assurances of his devotion for her. 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ican totally see this being sort of how it goes down. Its gotta be shocking for parents to have issues after so long, but also, I know Jim and Pam are totally meant to be together :)

Reviewer: variella Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

I knew I was going to spoil myself by reading this, and I did. The fic is so good I don't even mind :) Serious!Jim came through very well at just the right time.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1

oh, so sad.

but I like this, really I do (:

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1

This was so tender and sweet. I loved it. You could just feel the stillness and comfort in the situation though all the angst. Unfortunately, I have a feeling they’ll bypass these type of personal moments in the Super Bowl episode and just go for laughs (please, please let me be wrong about that). Anyway I’m not sure how they’re planning to hook all the football fans on the show, but throw in this type of sweetness and they’ll grab all their wives!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1

You set such a lovely scene here, yanana--Pam's sadness, the snowy backdrop, the cold, Jim's warmth.  Fine job, as always.  Plus, you've gotten me even more excited for the new ep (possible angst and all).

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