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Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

I *love* this chapter- seeing how Jim affected her life, in the small and the big ways. So great.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

So, so, good!  I'm really enjoying this.  And... Google, anyone?


Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: justy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 03:19 am Title: Chapter 3

Okay, so I realize the last time this story has been updated was sometime in October, so chances are it won't be updated again. But, please, please, please (yeah, I'm begging) update. 

This is sooo good, a refreshing change from all the other fics out there. Now I'm wondering, where is Jim? How would he act when he and Pam finally met? Would he feel the same, eventually? Would Creed be able to turn things back? 

Gah, please don't make me beg anymore than I have to. I'm adding this story with all things that are crossable, crossed that you'll update. 

 

 

Please? LOL. 

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2006 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

Nice realizations on Pam's part here. Enjoyed Creed's explanation, too. Looking forward to chapter 4!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2006 07:13 am Title: Chapter 3

Love it! Pam is taking charge. Go out there and get that boy! I really like what you've done with this story. More please!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2006 09:14 am Title: Chapter 3

"Sam".  Hee. I love the surreal quality of this, and the way that Pam is slowly putting the pieces together. It's really a wonderful, creative idea. Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait to see if the magic that is Google will be assisting Pam in her upcoming search for Jim.

By the way, this fic is amazing. Alternate/parallel universes are fascinating.

Author's Response: Well, Google is very powerful, isn't it?;) Thanks for the review;)

Reviewer: moofoot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 3

...guh. Wow. I'd say something, but there are no words. =P I love this, I love the idea, I love the implications behind it, I love how you've thought of a lot of things [like the different version of the Dundies, and how Pam realises she was probably different in the Jim-less world], I love Creed [obviously], and...I can't wait. I can't wait for her to find him, I can't wait for him to go uh, who are you? [or maybe you'll have him remember Pam, too!! I mean, chances are low, because that'll make it unbelievable, but still...], I can't wait for them to be happy together, because I've been waiting for that since the start of the show, and it certainly hasn't stopped since then.

That's it, I think. Keep updating, because you know I love this! =P



Author's Response: Wow, thanks. I'm flattered:) I'll try to post the update soon:) (There are going to be about 11 chapters in total, btw)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

Absolutely loved this chapter!  You have Creed down so perfect - especially his calling her Sam. And the kaleidescope analogy was so perfect! I especially loved the last line. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I think that's the chapter I like most so far, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it too:)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is such an enjoyable story!  I love the analogy of the kaleidoscope. :)

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Muppet Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm really loving this - it's such a cool concept.  Update soon!

(Creed repeatedly calling Pam Sam - hilarious) 



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Token Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

wow - Normally I'm not a big fan of AU-type fics, but you've really grabbed my attention with this one. It's well written and thought out and I can't wait to see where you go with it!

Author's Response: Thank you:) I'll try not to disappoint:)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love how you write Creed. He's too funny.



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 11:26 am Title: Chapter 3

I love it!  The way that things are different now is really heartbreaking, as well as the thought that Jim won't know her now.  I loved Pam saying that Creed sucks at his job!  Because, well, he does!



Author's Response: Thanks:) I tried to show how Jim influenced her life even if she wasn't fully aware of it.

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 11:18 am Title: Chapter 3

i love this story! this chapter was sooo painfully good :) the kalediscope analogy is a great idea! but, how is pam gong to find jim if he could be anywhere :(  i need more!

Author's Response: Maybe she won't? No, I'm just kidding;) Thank you for the review:)

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