Date: April 06, 2007 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ahhhh it just gets more intriguing! I love that Creed is somehow involved- he's just weird enough to be part of something like this. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: March 28, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
AWESOME! On to the next!
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: March 28, 2007 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah man Creed is MAGIC!
Author's Response:
Indeed, he is:D
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, fantastic! And Creed as the Clarence figure - perfect. Love Pam's conversations with Kelly and Phyllis, and her frantic search for anything Jim. Gave me a sinking feeling in the gut. Off to chapter 3...
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 07:08 am Title: Chapter 2
Aha! Creed has supernatural powers? Very interesting turn of events! On to the next chapter...
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, great chapter! The kaleidoscope explanation was actually quite... pretty? Even though it was sad. And I love how Creed, even in his mysterious wise man role, is utterly clueless. ("Sam," ha!) And "Whatever your job is, you totally suck at it" was laugh-out-loud funny. And the scene in her apartment when she truly realizes how significant Jim is to her was so wonderfully done. And that last line was just right!
I hope she finds Jim SOON!
Author's Response: Thank you. I tried to make the scene in her apartment rather intense, so I'm glad it worked for you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god, this story is amazing! Such an original premise, very well-written and I'm loving Creed's apparent role in all of this.
Author's Response: Thanks:) There'll definitely be more of Creed;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, no! Not different like that! Change things back, Creed, change things back!
Author's Response:
Hm, I think that's what Pam should say in the next chapter:D Thanks for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Didn't expect that. A world without Jim is not a world worth living in. Great job at creating the creepy/crazy feeling of a topsy-turvey universe. Can't wait to know exactly Creed's role.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks, actually creating that feeling was rather difficult and I thought I made it too chaotic and failed. So I'm glad you liked it:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Man, this is so amazing. I love that Creed has a hand in this, the weirdo. Creed!love
Author's Response: Yeah, Creed seems to be the highlight of the fic:) Thank you for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
A world without Jim, say it isn't so! Can't wait to see what lies ahead.
Author's Response: Heh, thanks for the review, kaystar:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG, it's "It's a Wonderful Life." Except with Creed as the angel, it makes everything freaky! This is amazing, both parts. I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Woah... a universe without Jim.
I'm intrigued and sad. Damn that Creed.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review:) If a universe without Jim is what makes Pam fully appreciate him, I'll do it;)
7 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Gah! Why would Creed think that was what she'd want to be different? I only hope this is a "Jim never worked at Dunder Mifflin" universe, and not a "Jim never existed" universe! Still intrigued...
Author's Response: Intrigued is what I'm going for:) Thanks for the review;)
Date: October 10, 2006 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this made my heart twinge sadly! How horrible would it be to realize she imagined it all? I can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH..... OK, what the... I'm totally intrigued but a little bummed at the same time! Is that what you were going for??
Author's Response: Yes, I think your reaction is quite correct:D But don't be too bummed, there's more to come:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
A world without Jim! What a cruel thing. Creed as the angel (Very "It's a Wonderful Life) is quite funny. I'm looking forward to reading some more!
Author's Response: Oh, yes, it's cruel and hopefully Pam will realize this sooner rather than later:) Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this story is so interesting and Creed being cast as the "powers that be", perfect...so is this just going to be like A Wonderful Life, and she gets Jim back? Ooo and what is Jim doing in this Alternate reality? I can not wait to find out!
Author's Response:
I've never seen It's a Wonderful Life, so... I don't know:) Yeah, I immodestly think Creed is the perfect choice for that part;) Thanks for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
No ever make a wish (learned that from
BtVS) cause they do come true. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you:) Ha, maybe Pam never watched Buffy;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm sensing a theme. I think we all need to meet up and clobber Pam over the head so she gives us a clue that she realizes what she's missing.
I'm so intrigued by what you've written so far. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I am all for clobbing Pam over the head:D Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh, no! this story is really different, and i'm really enjoyihg it :) this creed's kinda creepy, but i could really picture him saying that at the end
Author's Response:
I think Creed is always creepy, that's why I picked him to be, well, whatever he is:) Thanks for th review:)
8 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
"She tried not to run from the breakroom to her desk, she knew Phyllis was still watching her and she didn't really want people to start thinking she was crazy. Especially since she apparently was."
This is an intensely scary place. But in a good way!
Author's Response: Without Jim it's always scary:D Thanks;)