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Reviewer: Weetzie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow, this story is breaking my heart. Calling him to hear his voice when he doesn't even know she exists! This is so unbelievably good and intriguing. 

Author's Response: Sorry for breaking your heart;) It will get better eventually;)

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG!!! You must continue this, soon!!!

Author's Response: Well, if I must, then I will;)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 10:34 am Title: Chapter 4

very nice twists!  I look forward to which possibilities you have her grasp at.  :-)


Author's Response: Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 09:12 am Title: Chapter 4

I am SO happy to see this back again!  I was always wondering what happened!  Please update soon - you're doing a great job with this!

Author's Response: Thanks;)

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 07:13 am Title: Chapter 4

Great update! Glad to see this story continuing...it's really fascinating!

Can't wait to see what Jim's been up to in this pattern, and how Pam meets and gets to know him. Graphic design internship, perhaps?

I'm with Pam. There will be no forgetting.

Looking forward to more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review:) Who knows, we might get a glipmse of Jim in the next chapter;)

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 02:02 am Title: Chapter 4

LOVE THIS. I love the concept of this already - the pieces are there, they're just in different places - and the way everything's working out...just awesome. I loved her thought process as she typed his name in - FBI! The Paperclips! You are good

And I loved the occasional nameslip from Creed, too, the Sam and stuff, and I love - a lot of things, actually. 

However, I won't love it if Karen Filipelli existed in this universe, because I'm feeling like Pam isn't going to through quite a lot of crap now, anyway.  Bah.

Can't wait for an update!  



Author's Response: Thanks, your reviews are always SO nice:) As for Karen, I'm not going to lie, back when I started this story, I did plan for her to be in it... But now, after 5 months of JAM angst, there's no way I'm writing Jim/Karen in an alternate universe. I've had enough of them in the canon one;)

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!
I'm so happy to see this!! I honestly am. I can't wait for Jim and Pam to meet again!
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ooh! I was thinking about this story recently and wondering what happened to it! I'm really glad you updated. And that Pam has tracked down Jim. And that he's accessible and not in the military in Timbuktu with no knowledge of English or whatever. I'm just generally very glad about this chapter :)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks:) I'm glad you're glad;D I'm not all that happy about this chapter, but I guess I need to get back into the groove;)

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'd almost forgotten about this one.  I'm glad to see you're still writing it.  Slowly.  I mean really, that was pushing my hiatus record lengths.  You don't want that.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm writing it quickly, it took me only two hours:D But honestly, yes, I know, it's been a while:) Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: Tasha the Cookie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this is great! Please, please, please don't take as long as the gap between 3 and 4 was. It's a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks:) And... I'll try:)

Reviewer: colorblind Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

I absolutely love this story!!!  Pam finally realizes what her life would be like without Jim.  Update, update, update!!!  Please?

Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

I had forgotten how much I enjoyed this story - thanks for the update! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am so happy to see a new chapter for this story! It's such a great idea and I'm loving it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 4

    Wow!

This is a cool idea, I look forward to more! 



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm very curious to know if/how this Jim is different...


Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews:) Hope you'll like the rest of the story:)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

So, so, good!  I'm really enjoying this.  And... Google, anyone?


Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 4

This I like!  I am very intrigued!  Please update soon ;)

Author's Response: Thanks:) I hope to update soon, but the gap between Chapter Three and Four was like four or five months:D I'm not good at updating;) I'll try, though;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

AWESOME!  On to the next!


Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oo, oo!  Is it a Groundhog's Day thing?  Does Pam get a do-over?  (I do believe in do-overs, I do believe in do-overs, ...!)

Off I go to the next chapter to see if I'm right... 



Author's Response: Not really Groundhog's Day, but hopefully you'll like the idea anyway:)

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ah man Creed is MAGIC!

Author's Response:

Indeed, he is:D

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love your Stanley and Creed.  But I guess they aren't really the point of this fic, so I have to comment on that as well, in which case I'll say quite the novel concept (and terrifying for someone who'd just had to go through what Pam has gone through) and I'm eager to see what you do with this - so I will by clicking the button here...

Reviewer: HemlockMartinis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2007 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my, this is awesome beyond words. Although I loved Pam's realizations, the unique Creed interpretation was easily the best. Please update it soon!

Reviewer: justy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 03:19 am Title: Chapter 3

Okay, so I realize the last time this story has been updated was sometime in October, so chances are it won't be updated again. But, please, please, please (yeah, I'm begging) update. 

This is sooo good, a refreshing change from all the other fics out there. Now I'm wondering, where is Jim? How would he act when he and Pam finally met? Would he feel the same, eventually? Would Creed be able to turn things back? 

Gah, please don't make me beg anymore than I have to. I'm adding this story with all things that are crossable, crossed that you'll update. 

 

 

Please? LOL. 

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2006 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

Nice realizations on Pam's part here. Enjoyed Creed's explanation, too. Looking forward to chapter 4!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2006 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, fantastic! And Creed as the Clarence figure - perfect. Love Pam's conversations with Kelly and Phyllis, and her frantic search for anything Jim. Gave me a sinking feeling in the gut. Off to chapter 3...

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