10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 03:40 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
Ellie dancing on her Dad shoes was so sweet!! I remember when my Dad did that with me and I loved it. You know I never realized how comical JAM's story sounds. When you watch the story play out, it just seems nomal, when you try and recap it... well I'm just glad Pam saw the funny side right away. Again, you write the best last lines, I had a Awww moment just reading this one.
P.S What was the snippet?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. The image of Ellie dancing on Jim's shoes was one of the first scenes, including Jim dancing with Pam, I had planned for this chapter. I also remember dancing with my dad too!! JAM's story IS very comical. Writing made me think about ALL they went through. Kind of made me appreciate the weddign episode much, much more. And I had to make Pam see the funny side of it. I couldn't write her angry, they are together now, right? The snippet is the last line of the chapter where Pam whispers "I Love you" into his heart for safe-keeping.
Date: September 23, 2009 08:49 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
Guh you kill meeee!
Author's Response: Ii just want to give you a hug. I've been reading the progression of your reviews and I feel all warm inside! Thank you so much! I'm happy that you are enjoying that story. It is awesome writing Pam falling in love with Jim, it's win, win, win situation...lol! Thank you soo much for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2009 07:35 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
WOW! I have to admit, i'm not a huge fan on anyone being sick, but this story is amazing! keep it up! YOu're a very good author!
Author's Response: OMG... I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story. To be honest I like fluff too. But I want to see Pam fall in love with Jim again. So... after watching 50 first dates I came up with the idea. I can happily say that the awkward moments are somewhat over now... On to the good stuff! Thanks for reviewing
Date: September 21, 2009 02:57 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
omg this was just. omg. no words...breathtaking. i guess? sums it up. can't wait to see more =]
Author's Response: Thank you soo much for the review! It was one of my favorite chapters to write, so I'm glad you liked it. There will definitely be more to come. Thanks again!
Date: September 21, 2009 12:16 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
Hm... the book question has me stumped. But you already know my thoughts, so get writing on the next chapter missy!
Author's Response: The last sentence where Pam's whispers in his heart "I love you" is somewhat an idead from the book. And I will be writing more... School has gotten the best of me lately and it's been a bit hectic! Soom you'll be receiving an email from me.. You're the best..
Date: September 21, 2009 12:03 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
Gorgeous. Will Pam still start to gain more memories in future chapters?
Author's Response: Pam will indeed start to regain more of her memory back and Jim will make sure she does! Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2009 10:45 am Title: Because I never stopped loving you
WOW! such a great chapter!
i DO think that the rating needs to be bumped up to T now. and that's a good thing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter, I really liked writing it! And thanks for reminding me about the rating... I changed it! I totaly forgot for a moment there. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: September 21, 2009 09:33 am Title: Because I never stopped loving you
i love this story so much. i look forward to your updates! i really liked this chapter, especially the end, that was wonderful. i hope maybe they'll have a big discussion about that in the next chapter though, because it was kind of a huge leap. i trust you have all kinds of good stuff planned for then, though. =) great job!
Author's Response: I'm really happy you're liking the story. This chapter was fun to write, specially the end. The events of the previous night will be mentioned, but not in detail... it will definitely affect how they are around each other because it just broke down so many barriers for them. I like to thinks as the turning point, whrere the awkwardness is behind and we can get to the good parts! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: September 20, 2009 11:17 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
I am really liking this story!
Just one sidenote. Jim was in StaMford. Not Stanford. :-)
Author's Response: I'm happy you are liking the story! I always get confused with the StaMford vs. Stanford thing. Geez... I had 50/50 chance and I got wrong... lol! But thanks for letting me know and thanks for the review.
Date: September 20, 2009 09:43 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
GREAT chapter. Not at all surprised that they got to this point finally. Cannot WAIT to see what happens. next. Ellie and Ben are SO cute. Hopefully a smutty parent-only weekend is coming up :)
Author's Response: Jim andPam are finally passsed the awkwardness of it all, on to good things. I think I had this chapter written in my head before chapter one was on paper... lol! In the next chapter you will see more of Jim and Pam...But the next one will be kid centered, more like Ellie centered if I continue with my current train of though. Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: September 20, 2009 04:06 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
Beautiful. I have to admit the beginning was hard to get into, and I wish I had a clearer picture of their kiddos and what they look like, but the end was just so beautiful. Great, great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I promise to paint a beter picture of the kids and stuff next time. I think I was way to focused on the end and I might have left out descriptions here and there. But, I'm glad you still enjoyed it.