Date: December 20, 2009 10:17 am Title: The Job - Money
I've been thinking of this timeframe lately, xoxoxo. Loved this, these early days. They're soo romantic. I really can't wait to read more. Oh, and it's so nice to actually have stories to read again!
Author's Response: I'm trying to add on - but it's tough to get my mind back there. I'll keep working on it!!!
Date: December 19, 2009 04:43 pm Title: The Job - Money
Love this part: Before she used to think she was simply too needy, but it turns out she only needed one thing.
There isn't enough written post S3-pre S4. And there certainly isn't enough from you. I would love to read more of this ;o)
Author's Response: I would love to write more of it. I'm too focused on baby things to get back to it but I promise to try again soon!!!
Date: December 19, 2009 07:14 am Title: The Job - Money
xoxoxo, i am always so excited to see something posted by you and this was no exception! gorgeous. please keep going! i think you should dig around on your hard drive more often :)
kaat - you are very sweet. And we'll see if there's anything else lurking!! Thank you so much.
Date: December 18, 2009 11:36 pm Title: The Job - Money
My dear xoxoxo, what a lovely thing to discover in your digital Christmas stocking. I can never get enough of the early days of Jim and Pam's relationship, probably because we didn't get to see it on the show. There are so many ways to go with it, and I really liked your choices here. Short and sweet. You've still got it.
For what it's worth, I don't think I've read this before, and I've read all of your stuff. Hmm.
Author's Response: Thank you dear Blanca. Me either. Someone should write a fic about the early days soon. :)
Date: December 18, 2009 04:19 pm Title: The Job - Money
wow, that was beautiful, nice job seamlessly flowing through such a large part of their relationship in snippets - i didn't even realize that was the title until i had written that word!
i also loved the way you didn't use their names or have the story come from a certain perspective. i was very impressed at how you didn't slip at all! i especially liked the first part, as it seemed to have the most content, the rest were not as great, excluding the final part at dwight's home.
my only critique, i saw a couple of spelling mistakes - and i'm having a hard time relocating them, but there were i think two of them in the same paragraph - if you find them and fix them you'll be all set!
Author's Response: Thanks pmh! I'd like to do more of these but the mood hasn't hit me quite yet. Also - thanks for the tip on the typos. Sometimes I catch them after I post - but I appreciate your letting me know.
Date: December 18, 2009 02:36 pm Title: The Job - Money
i'm pretty sure i've seen this before.... either that, or i have a really bad case of deja vu
Really?? I looked through everything I've posted here and I couldn't find it anywhere. I didn't write a lot of S4 fic and most of my stuff was speculative future fluff. If you figure out where you've seen it before just let me know.
Another reason I was pretty sure I hadn't posted it is that it was unfinished. But still - let me know!
Date: December 18, 2009 12:37 pm Title: The Job - Money
Instant favorite! What else you have on that hard drive? LOL! This was really great, so well written, so sweet, and so vivid. I love it! Hope you do continue!
Author's Response: Who knows!! I'll keep looking! Thanks Deeldee!