9 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2008 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was SO cute, I loved it. I loved her covering his hickey up with her makeup and then Phyllis catching them at the end, classic :)
Date: February 05, 2007 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
well, phyllis may be able to keep a secret... now if it was kelly, it would be all over even before they lef thte bathroom
Date: February 03, 2007 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute, and so adorable!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! (And I love your penname! lol)
5 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2006 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I haven't thought about hickeys since I was in high school... this brings back a lot of memories! OK, not a lot, but some. (Cute story!)
8 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw! So cute. Guess their attempt to eliminate the evidence backfired!
Author's Response: Thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
cute.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: October 25, 2006 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the line about the supply closet!!!! And the line about her breath on his neck is HOT!!! Great job, keep on writing & posting!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
HA HA HA! The supply shelves in the middle of the office don't give nearly enough privacy.
Brilliant! I love Phylis - but sh'es known all along, hasn't she? ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 09:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Adorable. So so cute. And yay! for Phyllis.
And what do you mean? No supply closet????
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Hehe I know, all those famous supply closet fics... but really I've never seen one on the show. Just the supply shelves, and I thought it would be funny.
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
That's so sweet. Although, I think that Phyllis would probably be someone who'd keep their secret...Kelly, on the other hand...
Author's Response: Hee yeah, I don't worry much that Phyllis would tell everyone, but it's still not the same because it's not just Jim and Pam's little secret anymore. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, your title is a pun! Yay! Actually, I really, really like this. I love Jim being paranoid about his hickey and Phyllis finding out. Adorable!
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
ha! I can just imagine the little smile Phyllis would be wearing all day. It would be BV,VR who'd end up spilling the beans, I think. Anyway - you can tell I love it if I'm already riffing off ideas. Maybe you should make this a series on how different characters discover their 'secret'?? Hmm? Because that would be awesome, and I know you'd do it justice. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Hmm... maybe I will think about making it a series. Awesome idea!
Date: October 25, 2006 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad it was Phyllis who caught them in the act (so to speak.) So sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Phyllis seemed like the best choice to be the first to find out about them. She's always been rooting for them, and I don't think she'd necessarily blab it to everyone in the office.
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1
So sweet! I've always loved the idea of them finally being together, and having these little intimate moments throughout the office. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I can't wait to witness sweet moments like this between them when they finally get together, whenever that will be.
Date: October 25, 2006 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet, Puff! And I hope it doesn't take anything away from your story to say that this author's note This contains what some people (if they've been living under a rock) might consider a spoiler made me laugh before you even got started!
Author's Response: Thanks!! And I'm glad the author's note made you laugh. It's good to know I'm funny even when I don't really try to be. :o)