8 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2012 04:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story very much. Good job writing Pam and Jim as we wish they actually talked. Very nicely done.
9 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2009 10:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Great writing. The conversation is so realistic. Well done and thanks
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute story. I really like your characterizations. Very true sounding!
Date: July 29, 2008 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so amazingly sweet and well written--I love it :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2006 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
::sigh::: If only....
Thanks for the break from reality. It was much appreciated.
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 05:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the body language in this one; especially when Pam finally chooses to "do something." Really sweet and realistic. I'm anxious to see them hash it out like this on the show.
9 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, I wish this was really the reason Jim went to Cooper's to meet Karen!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, why couldn't it be so??
*Sniff*
Date: November 20, 2006 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you :)
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1
"We're not just friends. We've never been just friends."
Love that line!
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Date: November 20, 2006 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Technical note: This is a mistake everyone makes, but I am completely anal about it, so forgive me. "Everyday" means "ordinary". It is not the same word as "every day" which means "each single day". So when Pam says she has to stare at Karen "everyday", she is saying that she has to stare at Karen "ordinary". Which is not, I think, what you wanted to say. Forgive me for wanking on this. It's just one of those little things I trip over.
"We're not just friends. We've never been just friends."
Amen. High time they realized it!
Author's Response: Oops. Thanks, and thank you for the review :)
7 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet :)
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7 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1
that brought tears to my eyes. Can't wait for more.
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Thank you :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 03:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm all for a bit of instant satisfaction. ;) I thought you wrote it well, and I liked that Jim was still miffed and somewhat defensive, but they could still talk about it all. Well done! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm all for pretending, so this was great. Your characterisations are great: I love that Jim still remembers what kind of tissue Pam likes, and he has them in his car! And I love that Pam still didn't have the guts to kiss him, and just kissed his hand, instead; it's just like her.
I've wasted too much time waiting for things to happen instead of just doing something. Ah, so, so Pam. And Does she do this to you? is exactly the reason Jim and Karen won't work: she isn't Pam, from the way she doesn't play pranks to the way she's a lot more confident of herself. And Jim fell in love with Pam. IN LOVE. Geez.
Gargh. I really shouldn't be so emotionally invested in a fictional couple.
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Date: November 19, 2006 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. This is so, so good. I'll echo Colette and say that I loved that line about the lotion - in fact, your entire characterization is spot on, with just the right amount of angst.
I can't wait for more!
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10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning. I can pretend all sorts of things to get to a happy ending!
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10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahh. Big sigh. Love how you have Jim articulate all that he's gone through. And be a little irritated, but clear...and he still loves her! Hooray for that. (And the bit about him remembering she likes the lotion tissues was somehow just so sweet and so Jim.) Happy now.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww. I love this.
It could only be better with a few descriptions of the specific movements of Jim and Pam. Other than that, it's beautimous.
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Date: November 19, 2006 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
This line sums up Pam so well: "I've wasted too much time waiting for things to happen instead of just doing something."
And I sure as heck hope Jim realizes really dang soon that Karen just does NOT do to him what Pam does. For all our sakes!!
Author's Response: Me too! Thank you for the review :)
8 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Does she do this to you?" - I think this is what it'll all come down to in the end. Jim was in love with Pam. In love. Whatever he might have with Karen, it'll probably never be what he has with (for) Pam. Very perspicacious of you.
Author's Response: Thank you :)