10 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I loved this! Jim's reaction seemed very realistic, and I could picture this perfectly. Nice job!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
sooo good...well done
Author's Response: thank, katie - just trying to keep the Jam hope and love spirits up until The Powers That Be make it really happen!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
So much to love about this - how you titled it like the titles of the Friend's epsiodes; Pam wearing that raspberry blouse; and her best bra; dedicating the song and then finally getting to the happy ending. Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks, Kaystar - glad you liked it so much!!
5 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm..I like the concept, but not sure if I like the execution/resolution. Why does sex have to be the ultimate solution? I'd like to see them explore their relationship more..but you have a good start.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. I purposely ended it where I did so the ending is open to some interpretation. I don't think given their history that it is an unlikely direction, but I wouldn't imagine it would just be sex, anyway. But I do appreciate your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story, with such a happy ending! I loved reading it, loved how bold Pam was, how she was finally taking matters into her hands and *doing* something about what she felt.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for that bright JAM spot in my day. Still depressed over last week's show so this helped a bit.
Author's Response: Oh I'm glad - I knew I needed some Jam positivity - last week's episode hurt so much!!
Date: November 20, 2006 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, you tease! Is there more?
Author's Response: hehe - actually I thought of you when I decided to end it there. Maybe I'll write more later, but for now it's done. :-)
Date: November 20, 2006 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Hooray for pro-active Pam, stepping up to the plate. And for Jim taking some of the responsibility too. And for putting a far nicer scenario in my head than the dreaded ones I've been torturing myself with. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks - you know, I actually felt Pam's stress as I wrote it, and I knew (well, had a good idea anyway!) of how it was all going to end. Too much angst around here anymore!!
Date: November 20, 2006 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Moxie! Finally, someone uses a song I have actually heard in fanfic! I'm loving bold and brazen Pam -- the perfect antidote to angst is to take some freaking action, girl!
Author's Response: I know what you mean - I often don't know the songs other stories mention. Glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 10:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm first, all hail the Queen! Hee! Two things. One - anything so you can work out your angst and get back to NaNo (!!!!!!!). Two - anything to make ourselves a nice little happy ending before the writers are ready to give it to us. Thanks!
Author's Response: Hail to the Queen, indeed. I shall have to send you a Beta crown to wear. :-) I will work on NaNo tonight, I swear!