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Reviewer: a little teapot Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2023 02:06 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

This was such a cute story, and seeing Jim and Pam get together is always a treat.

Thank you for writing and sharing!

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2009 05:51 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Seeing god... That was amazing LOL

Reviewer: variella Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2008 04:20 pm Title: Ten: Lords a Leaping

Nice chapter. And by nice I don't mean 'here's a throwaway adjective', I mean you really struck a balance between exploring Roy and Jim... and it didn't seem far-fetched at all for Roy to ask what he did. Personally, I'd think Jim would be one of the first people Roy would go to for advice or information because he has the inside track on Pam. And imagining Jim playing basketball is always a winner ;)

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 10:08 pm Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Made of cute!  loved the Sasha chapter!


Author's Response:

Yay for you reading Christmas fic in March!!!

Thanks so much!!  The Sasha chapter is my favorite I think!!

Reviewer: jandjsalmon Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 01:38 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

It was a wonderful ride! Really Really wonderful!

 

*wipes tears away*

 Til Next Christmas then?



Author's Response: hee!  OK.  You've got a deal.  LOL!  Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 04:29 pm Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

What a lovely way to conclude. The key-exchange was very cute, the couch interactions very hot, and the ending very sweet. I loved this story the whole way through!

Author's Response: YAY!!!  I'm so glad.  Thanks for reviewing all along the way Semby!  It means alot. :)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 02:40 pm Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Wow, what an ending and what an....interesting euphemism ;)! Although I'm seriously so sad that this story is over as it's definitely one of my favorite's of yours, and that's saying a lot. Thanks for this wonderful Christmas present!

Author's Response:

I know.  I know.  But honestly - it wasn't even like I had a choice!!!

I'm sad it's done too and I'm so very glad you liked it.  You are most welcome!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 01:21 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

"Time to raise the bar Beesly."

And we have our slogan for season 3, folks.

Also: partridge in a pear tree? Definitely a euphemism.

;)

Lovely fic...



Author's Response:

heehee!

TOTALLY.

Thank you muchly Shan - for unleashing your inner fangirl to tell me so. :)  It was a lovely way to start the New Year.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 01:06 am Title: Two: Turtle Doves

He leans against the counter, crossing his feet at the ankles.  He looks at her over the rim of his mug.  "So I can watch you leave."

Hee. And the doves. Yay.



Author's Response:

I had this discussion with my best friend last night at dinner - she's well aware of my obsession but only has a passing interest in all things re: The Office.  She was saying that it'll get boring if (WHEN) Jim & Pam get their acts together and I was like - NO!  Cause we'll really only see them at work and there'll be all these little moments and I almost cited that one before I realized it hadn't really happened.

But now - it totally HAS TO.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 12:55 am Title: Three: French Hens

mmm :)

Author's Response: hee! :)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 12:30 am Title: Four: Calling Birds

OMG he kicked her door closed!

I think I just... you know... a little.

*hurries off toward "tomorrow night"*



Author's Response:

Not to..you know...like freak you out but um...me too.

I have this little list and DeterminedImpatientTurnedOn!Jim sort of tops it.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 12:05 am Title: Five: Golden Rings

Pam.  WTF?

Hee!! Love her glee in this chapter, 'cause YEAH.

"Let me in."

Um, hot?



Author's Response:

Yeah.  Umm...uh huh.

and...yeah. :)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 11:49 pm Title: Six: Geese a Laying

No! Yes! What?

Now I'm all flustered. She kissed him!

And duck, duck, goose?  YES!!!

But before that, the Awkward on the couch, and then the bigger Awkward outside? Just yay, Krissy. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

She totally did!!

The geese thing was awful.  Just awful.  When ABC aired I almost went with Dwight's little Christmas offering but then I was inspired.

Oh the Awkward.  Will it ever end?!? 

Thanks so much though.  I was all kinds of nervous about this one. 

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 09:48 pm Title: Seven: Swans a Swimming

I can just see Sasha going, "Duh, Jim." after that last line. Or maybe that was me.  ;)  Nice correlation for swans!

Author's Response:

Oh she did.  Glad you heard it too. :)

Thanks!! 

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 03:33 pm Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

*clears throat*

Dude. I see what you mean about reading the "tamer" version before.

Seriously. Think about upping that rating there, buddy, lest children wander in here by mistake looking for a wholesome x-mas tale. ^_~

Thanks.(again)

cheers.

--Lex 



Author's Response:

I couldn't help it.  In the light of a new day the fairy was still hanging around. ;)

See - I never see myself as "your source for all things MA related" but I'll take your suggestion under advisement.

You are more than welcome!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 01:52 pm Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

I just loved this story! Such a unique idea and you just stayed so true to who the characters are. AND managed to give us a great big happy ending. LOVE IT! Thanks so much for the Christmas gift that kept giving. hehe

Author's Response:

Aww thanks LoveFool!!  So glad that you enjoyed it. 

My work is done. :)

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 09:51 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Is it sad to say that I will probably never listen this song the same way ever again?  ;-)  I LOVED this chapter!  What a freakin' creative way of portraying a partridge in a pear tree.  Oh my God.  

Author's Response:

You and me both noodles.  You and me both.  :)

Seriously - when I stumbled across that little explantion of the lyric I was like...hell yeah!!

And then my only problem was trying not to make it resemble a bad porno movie.  Glad you think I succeeded!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 09:21 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Woohoo!

 Wonderful use of your theme throughout. The pacing, style, and content were beautifully balanced. A Christmas classic!



Author's Response:

A thousand thank yous Lis!  I'm so happy you liked it!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 09:14 am Title: Two: Turtle Doves

Ohhh! Of course those are the doves! How perfect and sweet!

Author's Response: From the moment I wrote the first words of this story - that's what the doves were going to be!  C'mon now.  Nothing else would possibly do!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 09:09 am Title: Three: French Hens

My goodness. :)

Author's Response: Hee!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 08:45 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Hooray for the Smut Fairy!  he's quite sure he's seeing God.

And yes, this is how it's supposed to be.  Sorry to see this story come to an end, but what an end it is  :o)



Author's Response:

She doesn't stop by often - but when she does...watch out!!

I'm sad to see it go too. :(  Thanks for sticking with me through it all!!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 08:33 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Wonderful story and really enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thanks gotkona!  I'm so very glad you did!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 07:23 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Ahhhh, xoxoxo, this chapter was - hands down - the best in the series.  (And that's saying a lot.) I love the way you illustrate Pam's complexities here - so many people, I think, try to either sorely overestimate her (look at FNB go!) or sadly underestimate her (FNB's still a passive sap!), when really neither of those descriptions does her justice.  You've nailed it here - captured her struggle with her past & the insecurities that stem from it, while at the same time really celebrating the way she's moving forward, being brave with Jim. 

And the smut....?  Whoa - very, very, very hot.  So good. [/Jim]

BTW: Heh heh, you slipped into a bit of forearm/wrist lust there, didn't you??  Loved that she was distracted by the way he checked his watch and especially loved your description of it.



Author's Response:

You're making me blush girl7!  I'm with you.  Pam's a walking contradiction and Jim (at least my version of him) totally gets that. 

Who me?  Wrist lust?  I have no idea what you're talking about. ;)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 07:10 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

This was a great fic...a blast to read, well done and surprisingly on theme. I hope you'll have more Jam fics for us in the New Year.

Author's Response:

Umm...Luna?  More Jam fics from me?  Is the Pope Catholic?

See?  I can't help myself.  It's inevitable. 

Heathen?  Party of one?  Your table is now available. :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2006 07:01 am Title: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

Well, if you're going to hell in a handbasket, I'll save you a seat. A happy ending indeed. And a happy thing for me to wake up to this morning!

Love how Pam confounds Jim's expectations (and not just re: administering torture.) I think  it's part of what he loves about her - he's always seen the Pam-within-Pam. And her finding him doing mundane things - the wrist action - so hot. The essence of Jim's sly sexiness right there. 

Time to raise the bar Beesly. Perfect. This is precisely the way it's supposed to be (you know you'll get no argument from me there!) And you built so beautifully and colorfully to the point where she finally gets that.

Okay, I could ramble (oops, already have,) but I love how you've subverted this old familiar song and made it such an utterly delicious template for their story. The only thing about it that bugs me is that it's over. Know any traditional Easter songs? 



Author's Response:

Cool.  We can totally do lunch. :)

I adore your rambles...so feel free to ramble anytime!! 

Thanks for continuing to cite specific things that worked for you.  I'm so glad to know what I envisioned made it's way to the page.  It means more than you know.

Easter songs?  Sorry.  I'm stumped!

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