9 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Truly great (i.e. uncomfortable) Kelly/Ryan. I don't get the sad as much as some of the other reviewers - I just get the poor, poor Ryan... Though he did bring it upon himself.
Date: December 18, 2006 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the paragraph about her wanting the biggest baby shower ever and comparing Ryan to Tom Cruise. Poor Kelly and her rose colored glasses. Very nicely done.
Date: December 14, 2006 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love Ryan/Kelly fic! We get so few details about what is gong on behind those eyes of his ~~ like why IS he with Kelly?
Date: December 14, 2006 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
So he decides he'll start wearing condoms again.
I hope so. Because the idea of Kelly as a mother just makes me want to call Child Services. *shudder* God, what an awful fate for a child.
But that doesn't take away from your writing, which is good. I, like, totally channelled Kelly during her interior monologue. :D
10 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this.....but, I love everything Ryan and Kelly. Their relationship fascinates me, so I like to read how others see it. Even though it's sad, you've voiced their positions very well. There aren't enough Ryan/Kely fics. Thanks!
Date: December 14, 2006 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I haven't seen the deleted scene, but this is oh so scary and irresponsible and this is why there needs to be a test before you can become impregnated! Well, if you're Kelly anyway. I love all the justifications you've written for why Kelly would love a baby and all the reasons Ryan can keep on in this unhealthy relationship. His manhood has a mind of its own indeed!
Author's Response: You should see the scene. It's short, kind of funny but very dark. And that's what I was going for here. Thanks for the review!
8 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1
This manages to be funny and cute while also utterly depressing with just how unhealthy this relationship is. Very well written - you said a lot in those four short paragraphs.
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree about the relationship being unhealthy, even though I love Kelly and Ryan together.
Date: December 13, 2006 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love Kellyfic -- good job with these two silly kids!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love to write Kelly....except afterwards I usually end up talking like her for hours...haha!
9 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww, this was sad and cute and, ok, mainly sad all at once. I was hoping someone would take that deleted scene and write something, I had an idea but this is about ten million times better. You've captured their relationship really well. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I wanted it to have a sad tone because even though the deleted scene was funny, it was kind of dark too. And so is Ryan, which is why I love him and Kelly together so much. I'd still love to see you write something on that scene, though!
Date: December 13, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah! Awesome. My favourite line: Even though he always falls asleep right afterwards.
Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't decide whether I wanted it to be falling asleep or watching TV. So I figured Ryan's probably the type who just passes out!
6 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Kind of a sad story. Like it much.
Author's Response: Thanks! Sad was what I was going for. I never know whether I feel worse for Kelly or worse for Ryan.