Penname: nomadshan Real name: Shannon
Member Since: July 09, 2006

Bio:

I'm neck-deep in novel-writing now, hence the lack of fic-age.

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Summary: Past Featured Story

I have decided to expand on the idea of Codename: Chicken Plate.  This will be my take on the emails, phone calls and conversations we missed over the summer and for the first part of Season 3 (until Pam and Jim actually communicate themselves)  My idea is that Jim knows exactly what happened between Pam and Roy and knows exactly what is going on in Pam's life right now even if WE don't see it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: In Stamford, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9879 Read Count: 28968 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2006 Updated: October 09, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: October 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6--The end of the backstory

Nice - very realistic, I think :)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: October 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 "The Convention"

Great voices in this! And, yeah, looking forward to the filling in of the blanks  ;)

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128465 Read Count: 418390 ePub Downloads: 126
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2006 Updated: September 23, 2007
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It just made her face the fact that she was living two lives - one with him in the office, Monday through Friday from 8 to 5, and then the other one that involved getting married to Roy.

Nice observation!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

And it was so classically Pam. Play detached – play like you don't care – and then see if it gets a response. That way if he didn't reply, she could act like she never expected one.

Another great observation.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice lead-in to the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: October 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

time4moxie!  I just mainlined about 7 chapters because I couldn't stop. Your characterizations are spot on. Your pacing of their emails and phone conversations is great. Their reunion was perfect (aside from the vision of Jim in brown cords and a green sweater, which was just fucking YUM). And I laughed out loud several times, one being when Pam called him back (which was also perfect, btw) and he asked if she knew what that meant to him and she said, "That I'm unstable?" You don't need me to retell your story to you, but that moment was so real and so funny, I had to point it out. As for the sex, I love that you started with a hand job because it allows for a progression that just jumping into intercourse doesn't allow (*is guilty of said transgression*).

I'm sorry I didn't have the will power to stop and review each chapter. Know that I'm looking forward to each update. Awesome work!



Author's Response: Wow [/jim] - thanks SO much for your comments.  I've been pretty pleased with how it's turned out, but it really, really makes my day when writers I admire tell me they liked it.  :-)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: October 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great way to end this chapter. (I wonder if they'll ever mention Jim's trip on the show again?) And "unstoppable at 16"? Awesome :)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: October 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

BNL!!! YES!!! I'm literally crying for joy after reading the karaoke scene. Yes. Perfect Jam song. And one of my 10 faves, too.

Nice postcards, great phone conversation, and again, great flashback. Give the whole thing just a little once-over for spelling and extra/missing words, and you're all good!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed
Date: October 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nice - very awkward sitch for Jim - good dialogue w/ Jon; I love "Hey, hot stuff" from Jon. Um, thoroughly enjoyed the shower scene and rejection of Wendy ;)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: October 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good nightmare! And I like the phone conversation. Jim's "Oh, Pam" made me swoon a wee bit. Looking forward to the resolution of some Issues ;)

Summary:

Pam has a bit too much to drink at Jim’s BBQ and ends up being the last one to leave. JAM smut inspired by the deleted scenes from Email Surveillence.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7123 Read Count: 7877 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2006 Updated: September 24, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uh, yeah, I'll have the angst, with a side of smut. Does that come with fries?

I don't usually care for drunkPam, so I liked when she felt the alcohol was fading, allowing her to be fully engaged in the moment.

In Between by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 18
Summary:

Post GWH.  Pam's POV.  No real speculation for S3 - just what I hope is going through Pam's mind at the moment.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 887 Read Count: 1441 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2006 Updated: September 24, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: In Between

[Roy,] who had failed, in the weeks after Jim left to make her remember why she’d been so caught up in marrying him...

I know this story is mostly about Pam+Jim, but I loved that.



Author's Response:

I love me some Roy Shan.  That boy is smokin'.  But I know that he wasn't when she called off the wedding.

I want him to find a nice girl.  I just can't bear it to be Pam however. :) 

Summary:

This might turn into something like my Away From the Cameras (in that I'll try to do one for every episode).  This is, of course, assuming that those sneaky writers don't reveal something totally the opposite of the assumptions I'm going on here.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31727 Read Count: 13608 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2006 Updated: October 22, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Convention - part I

Great POVs for Jim and Pam here!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Convention: Part II

Oooo, terrific angst - you didn't lie. These two broken people need to mend one another.

No Idea by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 20
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim's past comes back to haunt him in a way he never expected.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star-Crossed Lovers
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238 Read Count: 3630 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2006 Updated: September 25, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10
Date: September 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this scene! You've distilled conflict, revelation and resolution into something short and sweet. Terrific!

Author's Response: "Short" is what I excel at, apparently. :)  Thanks, shan!

Meet the In-Laws by Par5 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 38] 31
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe Halpert's daughter is in love. But who is this boy she brought home? Is he good enough for Jim's little girl? Hijinks ensue...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Humor, Married
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Star-Crossed Lovers
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6246 Read Count: 7460 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: September 29, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Oh my god, Halpert, our kid is in love with a Schrute!"

That made me laugh out loud - glad to know the rapport's still there. Nice premise!



Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh! And it makes me happy to think they'll still have that rapport someday. Sort of alleviates the current angst...

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: September 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was fun ;)  Loved this:

"It's superheroine, son. And that would be very cool..."



Author's Response: She'll need a cape and a costume and a bobblehead! And as he trails off, I'm pretty sure Dwight is picturing Wonder Woman...

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"I'd better not see anything that's going to traumatize me. Again!"

Love that both older couples are so into each other :)



Author's Response: Thanks! I think I've been influenced by all the Dwangela friskiness these past 2 episodes! And I'm just plain hopeful for Jam...

Summary: Past Featured Story

But almost. ;)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 602 Read Count: 2915 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: September 26, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Swaying Isn't Dancing

Awesome.

His voice was low and husky in her ear, his breath tickling her skin.  "Song's over."

Eeee!

Thank you, Fairy Godmother of JamFic!

Squeeing aside, I can see this happening  :D



Author's Response:

So could I.  The picture in my head manifested into this.

Not like it's a bad thing. :) 

 

Thanks Shan!

Summary:

The children of Halpert and Schrute meet and fall in love as only 5th graders can...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star-Crossed Lovers, Daddy Jim
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5706 Read Count: 12113 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: June 14, 2007
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Laura

Excellent!  Love that Chrissy has four little sisters to Patrick's one, and the image of Patrick checking the box on the note. And, of course, Dwight  ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I love the thought of Angela having five girls instead of her pair of well behaved boys!

Summary: Just like everything else in Jim's life, it all evens out in the end.
Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 340 Read Count: 2946 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: September 26, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 10 Things Jim Hates About Stamford

Nice! Every single one is true to Jim.

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Casino Night" talk.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 779 Read Count: 1643 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2006 Updated: September 27, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First: congratulations on being our 100th author!

Your characterizations here are terrific. This scene could have happened just as easily as the one that actually did. This was tense, funny and sweet. Great job!



Author's Response:

Yay!  I win at life! :)  Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.  And sorry again for the category placement.  I know now...I hope!

Summary: Jim is homesick, but he harbors a secret.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford, Romance
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1098 Read Count: 2540 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2006 Updated: September 27, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: September 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The letter

Wow - great insight into both characters. Jim missing his grocery store? Perfect. And this is so true:

In a truly messed-up way, you were the only thing keeping me and Roy together.



Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I love that you always zero in on my own favorite parts.

Author's Response: And I must give myself a TWSS! after that reply *sigh*

Okay by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 34] 33
Summary: Past Featured StoryInspired by the premiere’s melancholy whiff o’Jam. Except with a happy ending, because…I felt like it. Contains a possible SPOILER – nothing you wouldn’t know unless you’ve avoided even those tiny tidbits in the mass media. Just saying, to be fair.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3082 Read Count: 6465 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2006 Updated: September 29, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

He could be lost in someone else by now.

That line got me early on. Then there were so many more.

Beautiful beautiful beautiful.

And real.



Author's Response: Thanks so much....had a hard time parting with this one, so it's especially nice to hear that!

Author's Response:

Addenda to my response: just glanced at TWoP and saw your recommendation - how lovely of you to do that! Much appreciated.

Summary: Kevin's band finally gets their big break.  For the "5 Elements" challenge!  Spoilers through "Gay Witch Hunt" and my own S3 speculation.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Kevin
Genres: Humor, In Stamford, Travel, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: The Five-Element Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3258 Read Count: 6810 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2006 Updated: October 01, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: September 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

Dwight had said “a breast”!

Nice!