Dinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.Lovely! Even the brief double-date isn't too over the top. Looking forward to more...
Wow!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Wow. I think you did a GREAT job of describing the aftermath of Casino Night through Pam's eyes.
This mini-story takes place the night of Phyllis' wedding.
I have thought it might be this way between Karen & Jim with her misinterpreting his ardor. You write it well.
Thank you muchly for reading and reviewing :)
55 words after Jim and Pam finally get intimate.
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VERY cute! Great interchange.
11 The Scranton Business Park is holding a charity auction, and Michael makes it mandatory for all the men to participate. Set sometime after Season 3. This was inspired by some comments on TWoP in the "Series Wishes" thread.
This should be good! Looking forward to some Meredith bidding!
So poignant! Thank God the girl finally woke up, eh?
Author's Response: Thank God indeed. Some never do. Thank you for your review Vampiric Blood, and cool name.
It was the fourth time she called and the fourth time he missed it.
What if Pam called Jim two months after her cancelled wedding?
I like the tone of your story. Very nice.
Since you asked for constructive criticism ... you did do a bit of tense jumping toward the end of the chapter. Most was in past tense, then some present, then back into past.
Thank you :)
And thanks for letting me know, I was afraid that my had happened. I'll see what I can do about fixing that.
Very nice! Keep it coming! Just no peeing robot babies, PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I assure you, no robot babies. ;)
Love it, as always! You always weave a fabulous tale.
Marrakesh?? There's one of those near Scranton, too? Did you read the rest of my chapters or is that a bizarre coincidence?
Jim and Pam try to find their way back. Hopefully without a national audience. Spoilers up to The Job. Pam takes charge! I like it! This is a fun piece.
Wow. Now that is intense! I could see Jim's being so intensely consumed with Pam's being his. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
OUTSTANDING dialog! Favorite lines?
I'm not a big fan of panties.
In general?
A very nice job for your first fanfic attempt!
Very interesting take on Angela Martin — I like it! I like how you examine the different types of fears she has: fears of inadequacy, of trust, of being alone. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I think a lot of people have a lot of those issues anyway, but they seem very overt in Angela. I'm glad you liked my take on her, I know its pretty "different" but I hope it was interesting. Thank you for the review Vampiric Blood.
This is a lovely chapter. It's unusual to see Creed treated with this much dignity. "...eager for another hour of quiet humanity." So nice.
A series of vignettes inspired by random song clips from the iPod. No chronological order, so sit tight. It might be a bumpy ride through time.10 This is OUTSTANDING! You did a great job with this dialog only chapter. Impossible to pick a favorite line – it's all so good!
Author's Response: *blush* Thank you so much! It was very fun to write because I basically had to imagine being in bed with Jim after we, uh, you know. It was a chore, I'll admit, but it's just a small sacrifice to bring happiness to others. :)
Just re-read all these. What a fabulous series of song inspired vignettes. Just love your writing!
Author's Response: Oh, you're a sweetheart, VB! It was such a thrill to start writing again with these vignettes. So great to have internet access (at least for the weekend) and be able to respond to reviews. Thank you!
This is really good! I think you're handling the shock and tension really well.
What if Pam had gone along with Michael and Dwight to the convention? Was she ready to see Jim? Was Jim ready to face Pam?10 I must tell you I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter so far. I love this idea Jim has of their writing to each other. It actually reminds me of the "Engaged Encounter" my husband & I went on shortly before our wedding. You could write all your thoughts & feelings and have them "heard" without interruption. It's a great communication tool.
Can't wait to see what Pam has to offer in return!
Brian is my hero!
9 What a great wrinkle! I love this. Post again soon, SOON.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. I'll do my best to post as soon as possible.
A collection of brief everyday moments: sleeping, showering, working, eating...(sounds exciting, huh?)
Each part is a mini-one shot (i.e., not a WIP with one ongoing narrative); no spoilers.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Most of the stories here are of Jim doing for Pam. I liked seeing an image of Pam taking care of Jim.
Author's Response: I wanted to see that too - so I wrote this! Seems like we may see a bit more reciprocal support between them this season (if, we ever see this season, that is)...so hooray for that. Thanks so much for reading/reviewing Vampiric Blood!
How the events of Casino Night effect Pam emotionally and how she digs herself up and out the hole of despair to be the Fancy and New Beesly of Season 3.
Completed 8/06/08
I liked Pam's conversation with her mom. I felt it was very realistic and haven't read any other stories present it quite this way. That plaintive "What did he expect of me, mom?" is just what I think Pam would've felt.
And this progression was very nice too:
I didn't know, he never told me before. Well, maybe I knew. I don't know what I knew. I had felt it…
Very interesting back story for Karen & Andy. Nicely done.