"It seems odd, in the ironic, slap-in-the-face kind of way that since her incident, it’s been easier to let him go."
Something bad happens to Pam. Very Dark.
Have I left a review yet for this story? *thinks* No, I don't think I have. This is an unusual story -- it's sad, dark, but also has moments of brightness and light. I love it. You've taken Pam and Jim to places you hope people will *never* have to go and you've made me love them even more. Great pacing, dialogue . . . everything!
WYDM is Scranton's local radio station, with our favorite paper-pushers as DJs. Kelly gossips, Angela gives advice, Toby does traffic, and there's a new guy doing the morning show that's causing quite a stir...
Yayness! An update! I caught Cousin Mose's review -- ditto on the 'bringing the funny'. 11 stars out of 10! And I really enjoy stories were the author captures a) the group dynamic, b) individuals, and c) Michael so well. Yours does it all. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you liked it so much :)
Loving this story, Wendy Blue! I finally registered here just so I could comment on it. It's AU, but you've done a great job of capturing the key parts of these transplanted Dunder-Mifflinites, but you've changed it up enough to not make it predictable.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so flattered that you would go to that trouble just to review :) I'm so glad you're enjoying this, thanks for reading!
A collection of brief everyday moments: sleeping, showering, working, eating...(sounds exciting, huh?)
Each part is a mini-one shot (i.e., not a WIP with one ongoing narrative); no spoilers.
Awww -- what a sweet way to end such a sweet story. It was fun, this peek into what ordinary life could be like for Jim and Pam. Thank you for not only writing this, but for sharing it with us. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, call me boring, but for me these characters are most interesting at their most ordinary, lol. Glad you enjoyed too. Thank you for your lovely review, House Calls.
Fantastic! Yup, that about sums up my review for your story. :-)
Author's Response: one word review for a 55-word fic? yeah, i'll take that ratio. :-) thanks!
Pam wishes she had loved Jim all her life, and Jim rises to the challenge. Pure fluff.What a fun, sweet, yet somewhat dorky (just like JAM -- lol) story. It's very well-written, moves along nicely and is a pleasure to read. Thanks!
Perfection. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Appreciative. Thank you!!
Christmas time at Dunder-Mifflin means two things. Romance, and celebrating African-American heritage. A script-based take on the Season 4 Christmas episode.I love this story! #1. I could so see it playing out on my TV screen. #2. You're spot-on with the characters. #3. It's so funny! Looking forward to more. :-)
Author's Response: That's very kind of you. The whole idea, basically in my opinion, is that you can see this actually happening, so I'm thrilled that you've been able to. Thanks for the review House Calls.
The only thing I'm not looking forward to is the end of this story. You're doing a great job with the character, dialog and script format. Me thinks you should get a Dundie for this one or, at the very least, some Schrute Bucks.
Author's Response: I could really use an extra five minutes of lunch, so I would definitely appreciate the Schrute bucks. I'm glad that you liked the script format (or at least could read it), I've never written in that style before. Thanks for the review House Calls.
"I sort of turned into Barrette Girl." Why Pam let her hair down.
Love, love, love it! :-) You do such a wonderful job of capturing Pam and Jim's relationship -- it's always a treat to read your stories.
You don't want to wake up one day and realize that both of you are unhappy because you weren't the person he thought you were. There's no way you can compete with Fantasy Pam.
What a sweet story! And I can see Pam feeling this way. I mean, to have someone admire you from sort of afar for so long . . . what if the actual 'you' isn't enough? Wonderfully done.
Author's Response: Thanks! If I was Pam it would certainly be something I would worry about. I'm glad you liked it!
I *loved* this line:
His fingers flew like lightning as he typed a response, and then another when she didn't answer back within three minutes.
It just seems to be so *Jim* in this moment.
And I like The Police, so really this story is a win-win-win for me.
Awwww! So fluffy! So sweet! I could *so* see Pam falling off the couch while making out with Jim. ;-) And props to Pam for telling Jim he just didn't give her enough time figure everything out.
And I'm feeling the urge to listen to The Police . . . hmmm . . .
A story of death, love and Mose. And lots of beets. Spoilers to the end of S4.
*Loved* this story! So glad I checked it out! And I love your backstory for Mose -- so sweet. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting, House Calls!
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