Jim and Pam are Jim and Pam, only...not really.
10 i love everything about this story but this line "Not even his own, which sounds weird but really for him it’s not outside the realm of possibility. "
made me have to stop reading and review immediately i was laughing so hard.
great interesting idea and its like my new crack.
Author's Response:
haha! I know, I love that you loved that line because it makes me laugh every time too! Glad I can be your drug dealer? I guess?
10 i seriously felt a punch in the gut when pam was going off on jim. you can understand her anxiety with your amazing description (LOVED the whitney part lol) and even knowing hes been a jerk for as long as they've known each other you still really really feel for him after enduring that.
can they just do it already? im feeling as much tension as they are at this point!
great chapter as always. eagerly awaiting more!
10 wow. wow wow wow wow wow.
you broke my brain. most definitely. i have no words left but wow. and this was amazing. like quite possibly the most amazing thing ive ever read on this site.
wow.
10 this story is so much love. the characterizations are absolutely brilliant. the dialouge is funny and real and being that my name is heather i really got an even bigger joy out of this chapter.
im selfish what can i say.
anyway. great chapter as always. i will be so sad when this is over.
Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.10 i love love love you for this. i hate when people make jim out to get walked all over so thank you for not doing that here. even with someone he loves as much as pam, this is very very realistic. :)
Author's Response: I hate that too, waltisafox. I like a guy with balls (that goes without saying, right?) -- not some pantywaste (or is it pantywaist?) who just moans and hangs his head forever. Even Jim on the show got some cojones eventually. So thanks for agreeing with me on that! And for your review, of course.
10 how is everything you write freaking amazing??
another fantastic chapter. Eagerly awaiting more!!
10 um you should definitely continue this!!!!! i love it, along with everything you write, and am eagerly awaiting more :)
Author's Response: Thanks waltisafox! (Who\'s walt, by the way?) Truly appreciate your reviews!
10 "So while Kim had felt like an exotic vacation where he was always a little out of place, Pam felt like coming home. And as everyone knew, Jim was no world traveler. He always preferred the comfort of home."
this line is perfection. i really liked this whole chapter but this line especially is brilliant.
Author's Response: That seems to be a popular line ;-) I\'m a homebody myself, so I like the idea of Jim finding that feeling of home in pam. Thanks so much for your review!
NOW COMPLETE!!!
"Jim, why don't you tell Pam how you really feel?"
Jim and Pam deal with the stuff that comes with being on a hit show...talk shows, radio call-ins, and press junkets. They say there's no such thing as bad publicity, but is that really the case? Watch as Jim and Pam deal with being in the public eye and under the thumb of manipulative network producers. The story is told through interviews, transcripts, web pages and photos.
10 I am so ridiculously hooked on this. Your little hints of whats to come without really hinting at all are driving me crazy! LOL
Eager waiting for the next installment :)
Author's Response:
Sorry for driving you crazy. I hope you aren’t disappointed by what the hints are leading up to. Thanks so much for your review.
Ryan/Karen, some Jim/Pam.
Karen has her own season of self-discovery. Only it's a little more subtle than coal-walks or love declarations.
10 gorgeous writing and excellent characterization. i thought it was very realistic as well. loved it.
Jim's been acting a little strange these days.10 LOL the entire end part about painting the room not being necessary was great.
You certainly have a knack for building up the tension! Everything you have written here is so believable.
And I think for the first time ever I can say with complete honesty I'm looking forward to having my ass kicked! :)
10 Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. You always absolutely nail the characters (and twss) and this kinda made my tummy hurt with how much Jim's been through this season. They really havent made his career go smooth at all, have they?
Great work as always :)
Author's Response: Totally agree waltisafox. Jim\'s been making my tummy hurt, too, this season. And I wouldn\'t have predicted that given all the Jam happiness we\'ve had. But he\'s sure been struggling lately (career-wise). Hopefully happier times are ahead. Glad you liked this, and thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 This was FANTASTIC!!
So many wonderful lines but these really stood out:
"She cries for Jim, the man she turned down right before she needed him most"
"But maybe this wedding was meant for them all along."
So beautiful. Great writing!
Author's Response: Thank youuu!
"After all the years, Pam had to admit that part of her wanted a little perfection."
Pam rethinks her definition of perfection. Spoilers through "Goodbye, Toby."
10 lovely. simple, sweet, and very them. i loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you Walt! I'm glad you loved it, I enjoyed writing it.
10 this is brilliant. i adore this so far and cant wait for the rest!
(or, Everyone Else Wrote It, Why Can't I?) If you aren't sick to death of tales about such an historic event, here's one more version - told to you by the daters themselves.10 I am amazed at how in character this entire thing was. It was funny, sweet, romantic and even a little sexy. I LOVED this so very much - and to me, it trumps all the first date fics and THIS is how it happened in my head.
Looking forward to more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! A little sexy is about the best I can do (luckily if anyone needed more after that it\'s easy to find here)! :) I\'m really flattered...that\'s all I can manage to say!
10 This was beautifutl...I loved the text messages and his inner thoughts while driving.
Very sweet and well done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 Stunned. I am so stunned it took me like five minutes to type that word correctly.
This was GORGEOUS. The end line was perfect and turned me into a sap as well.
Amazing job.
10 Hi my JK buddy.
This was fab and I really reallly enjoyed it.
This part "Thank God for stolen thunder. Thank God for the lack of fireworks or hot air balloons. Thank God for no rings stuck in hot sauce packets or Jello. No sentimental trips to Cuginos. Thank God for natural ass kickings - like summer rain storms. Things I could not have orchestrated on my own. For lighting effects and soundtracks that were much bigger than candles or iPods." BRILLIANT. It captures everything and is so true.
Love to see you back with writing :)