I love this era in history and you've added Jim and Pam into so seamlessly it's astounding. You're one of the best writers on the archive and I can't wait to read more of this. :)

Author's Response:

Aw thanks! I was hoping not to make it sound too weird and out of place.

And you totally made me blush! You're the sweetest. :) 

I love this idea! Can't wait until you update again!

I loved this chapter. I'm so glad Pam is doing something for herself and actually thinking about Jim in that way instead of denying her feelings. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah this is definitely Fancy New Beesly I\'m writing here, and I\'m glad you like her. Watch for another update soon!

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This story does not have enough reviews. Seriously, you've given something we've all watched countless times a fresh spin and that's rare. I just hope we don't have to wait 3 seasons for these two kids to get together!Can't wait for the next update. :)


Author's Response: thank you so much for your feedback!  i'll be posting the new chapters soon, once i take a good crack at them.  but it's all done!  

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Heathus Christ! That was great!

^that was my reaction to my dinner^

This story makes me feel like the ugly Jonas brother....sad and oh so needy for more attention.

Once again you slay me, Colette. Your stories always provide me with such vivid imagery yet you don't take 3 paragraphs to describe a feeling and I appreciate that very much. I can't wait to see where you take this and I'll be following every step of the way!

Author's Response: Thanks, elly! Love hearing the feelings come through for you without too much verbage. Much appreciated ;-)

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I'm an AU whore, so when I checked the archive for updates today and saw and AU by you, I felt like Dwight at a Battlestar Gallactica convention. I love how much emotion you put into so little words. This is such a beautiful piece of literature and I think you should get paid to write fanfic all day long. I'll put that on my Christmas list. ;)

Author's Response: elly, I hope you've been very good this year, because how awesome would that be?  Paid to write fanfic?  Only the best dealio of all time.  And Dwight at a BG convention?  Shut your mouth!  Thank you so much for such a fabulous and fun review.  I hope you keep reading!

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This may be my favorite chapter of this so far. I love how you seamlessly incorporated the talking heads and brief interviews. I also love the individual personalities you gave each of the secondary characters. I've never reviewed every chapter of every story that I've loved but I'm going to try to change that with this. Because of this fic and the website you linked on the boards, I've been buying copies of DFW's work wherever I can find it and I can't wait to read all of it. Thank you for writing and posting this.

Author's Response:

Elly, thank you so much for this!  I'm thrilled that you're enjoying this, but this is going to be very small, rotten potatoes (that smell like old tomatoes and dirt) once you start reading DFW.  Have fun on that journey.

Chapter 4 is percolating in my head right now and should be bubbling over and into Word today and tomorrow.  I hope you like it.

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I love this story so much. I know I tell you that in every review but it's true. I love the intricate details you weaved into this story and you are truly talented. This story has made me go back and read all of your work and leave the reviews you so deserve. I will definitely read this again. I may not trust Phyllis, but I trust you with whatever you choose to write. I'm all for a Sweetpea, Lisahoo, Colette, and Lovefool joint project and I hope this isn't the last one I see!

 P.S. Who's the guy in the drawing? I feel like I'm missing something vital to the story!

I really love a good AU and this seems to be joining the ranks of my favorites. I liked how you didn't present the typical obstacles between Jim & Pam and you also didn't have Jim fall over himself to date Pam either. I also like how Pam seemed more courageous in her exchanges with Jim & yes, Facebook is a ridiculously huge part of my life, being a college student and all.Hope you update soon!


Author's Response: Aww, thanks, elly! :) I like to think the Jim in this story is a neat little cross between Jim the character and John the actor. I love both equally. Haha.

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I love that you provided the songs to listen to while reading this chapter--it really helped get into Pam's mindset. I usually can find one or two things wrong with any fic I read but I can't find anything that stands out to me & I can't wait to see where you take these two. Is it weird that I can't wait until they change their relationship statuses on facebook?

Author's Response: Well thank you, elly, I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it. I\'m my own worst critic I guess, because I\'m always finding something wrong with the story, and I\'m sure the moderators on this site hate me because I probably send each story into the queue 30, 50 times before I\'m just sorta \"ok\" with the final result. Haha. And may I just say that \"Everything I Can\'t Say\" is one of my favorite stories on here. Ever.

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I really liked the ending of this chapter. Obviously, I talked about it in a previous review. Wow...I just got excited over 2 fictional characters changing their facebook statuses.

If you feel the need to post any more 'mindless Sunday morning drabble' to this story, please don't hesitate. ;)