Penname: Cheeb Real name: Olivia
Member Since: November 25, 2007

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You Never Even Saw Me Coming by Binxbaby Rated: M [Reviews - 25] 17
Summary:

It's a little AU, with Jim still working at Dunder-Mifflin, but attacking his job issues and his journey with Pam from a different direction. What if Jim worked in the warehouse with Roy when he starts to find the office receptionist way too attractive for his own good?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24878 Read Count: 10421 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: August 12, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: August 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Seven: You probably should have kept your big mouth shut

Was that okay? Wow! You're breaking my heart binxbaby! *sigh* You make me want to pull my Season 2 DVD out to rewatch this episode, but it's damn near midnight. Please don't make us wait too long to see what Pam does. In the meantime, I'll just rewatch Casino Night over, and over, and over (in the light of day).

The Bullies; or, How to Fall in Love in Seven Easy Steps by Lynzee005 Rated: M [Reviews - 17] 10
Summary: Submitted for the "Jim to the Rescue" challenge. Jim rescues Pam from awkward situations at different points in their lives, from grade school through the present day. JAM AU
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Challenges: Jim To The Rescue
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12701 Read Count: 13663 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: June 27, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: On the Playground

Aww, this is cute. Just noticed this today. Am looking forward to catching up on the rest.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 9
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: On the Fieldtrip

Pop Rock Pam :) Perfect description of the way ten year olds behave. These two are just meant for each other. Very cute.

Author's Response: I thought so too! I teach 12 year olds all day, so I kinda took inspiration from them. It was so much fun to write in the mind of a fifth grader!!! Thanks again for the reviews!!!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 9
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: In the Library

I like that Pam takes the initiative with the physical contact. And Jim is such a sweetheart. I'm really enjoying this story. Good chapter.

Author's Response: I kind of wanted to push Pam a little bit OOC because she\'s always so shy but I think with Jim she can be herself a bit more, and come on... who DOESN\'T want to get physical with Jim?! Am I right? haha Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: At the Prom

Wow! Even with the Chapter Notes at the beginning, did not expect THAT! Poor Jim. I could just smack Pam. No worries about having gone too far. Very good chapter. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Phew... yeah, I thought I would take more slack for not having Pam and Jim get together at the end of this one, and worried that maybe the physicality was too much for high schoolers... but I\'m glad it\'s going over well! :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: In Their Bedroom

Perfect ending. I enjoyed this very much.

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! :D Thanks for reviewing!

A Better Version of Me by Talkative Rated: M [Reviews - 94] 59
Summary: "Oh, mister, wait until you see/What I'm gonna be/I've got a plan, a demand and it just began/And if you're right, you'll agree..." Let's have a bit of fun with our dear girl before TPTB let us know what she really did with her summer vacation, shall we?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 21582 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Second Month

This is just beautiful. Look forward to the next chapter.

Up the Ladder to the Roof by untherapy Rated: K+ [Reviews - 11] 3
Summary: SO, this is me sticking my neck out there on my own story, rather than just enjoying all of yours! Let me know what you think ;-) There have been far too few proposal stories that fit the way I want it to happen! Spoilers up to Chair Model
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3779 Read Count: 10424 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2008 Updated: June 11, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Motion

Cute! Love their banter. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks! That\'s always the easy part - my bf and I talk WAY too much like J&P...

Week's End by Talkative Rated: MA [Reviews - 47] 38
Summary: That must have been one heck of a week, hm?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7722 Read Count: 18492 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: June 10, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Week's End

This was absolutely wonderful. I could not stop smiling while reading this. Loved the ending, both of them so sure about where they are headed. This is being added to my favorites.

The Player To Be Named Later by toomeyism Rated: M [Reviews - 19] 10
Summary: Philly Jim and America's favorite pastime
Categories: Jim and Pam, Crossover, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8434 Read Count: 3682 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: July 02, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Swing and a Miss

Okay, you've got me. I enjoyed the first chapter and this third chapter. I love Bull Durham. My favorite baseball movie, but still. I'm having a hard time believing that Pam would be Annie's daughter. But I'm going to keep reading you're updates because this chapter was very good.

Author's Response: You know this just makes me want to \'sell\' you the idea of Annie as Pam\'s mom even more. It might be my new mission in life! I proud that you\'d still read, even with the doubt. Thanks for saying that- and thanks for the honesty about what\'s not working for you. It will make the story better in the long run.

Just You and Me by lostfox555 Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 9
Summary:

With the cameras around, no secret can be kept for too long.  What if things went a little differently after “Chair Model?”  How will the office react when one of our favorite couples does something drastic?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1803 Read Count: 5250 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2008 Updated: July 13, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, this was so sweet. I'd like to see this happen in the opening episode of Season 5!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Me too.

Sometimes She Thinks About Him by malaz85 Rated: K [Reviews - 20] 10
Summary: Pam lies awake at night. What's going through her head?

Sometimes Jim lies awake at night, too...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 950 Read Count: 4749 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: June 27, 2008 Updated: July 07, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: June 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: What Pam is thinking about...

Yes, after ten years of Roy, I can believe that Pam thinks like this. This was very good. I'd like a Jim chapter, please. :)

The Summer of Harold Moran by Stablergirl Rated: K [Reviews - 46] 25
Summary: Jim and Pam battle through the summer after Season 3, with a little help from some friends.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10546 Read Count: 10197 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2009
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Bow

Interesting... baseball, Jim Halpert and kids. A few of my favorite things. The grandpa sounds like a tough nut. If anyone can bring Harold out of his shy shell, Jim Halpert can. Looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Keel

Stablergirl, this chapter was just gorgeous. I could picture everything. It is so believable that Jim and Pam would be scared and cautious in the beginning. I never believed that Pam was not good with children. She's such a gentle soul. I'm looking forward to Jim and Pam bringing Harold out of his shell and growing closer in the process, yes? Look forward to more.

J-Kol by RomanCandle Rated: M [Reviews - 8] 5
Summary: Jim and Pam see a movie starring Pam's favorite actor. Pam loves it, but Jim is less than impressed. Sequel to "Josh and Polly".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Pam's Favorite TV Show
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1151 Read Count: 1926 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2008 Updated: July 08, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: George Clooney Should Stick to Acting

This is very funny. And yes, I'd watch JKras read a phone book too. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

The Documentarian and the Paper Salesman by morethanthat Rated: Private [Reviews - 34] 24
Summary: Pam Beesly, Associate Producer of the reality show “The Office,” meets Dunder Mifflin Scranton salesman Jim Halpert. An AU retelling of season one. Rated T
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5884 Read Count: 15239 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2008 Updated: December 11, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: November 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: The Alliance

I'm really enjoying this and am always checking for updates. I am a fan of AU stories, so this was not hard to like. I've been very bad in reviewing; just know that this is one of my favorites from you. Really looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: thanks so much for your feedback!  i'm happy to supply you with your AU fix.  be on the lookout for more soon!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Basketball

Who can resist sweaty basketball playing Jim Halpert? Not me. Loved that she punished herself by walking away from the warehouse because of her reaction to him. This chapter may have been short, but your point was made perfectly. I can't wait for your version of the Hot Girl episode. Jealous Pam. Should be good.

Author's Response: who can resist?  no one. thanks for sticking around for the series!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Hot Girl

I so enjoyed this. Sorry to see it end, but you picked a good episode to end your story with. Great line:

“I was saying that it was time for the crew to hear how I’m not enjoying Michael’s latest tragic fixation.”

I've favorited a few of your stories, but this one I think is my favorite of them. Thanks for posting it!

Author's Response: thank you - a favourite among favourites!  wow, thanks so much.  i had a great time writing and editing this; it was my pleasure to share.

The Trial by dundiefromgod Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 5
Summary:

The Second Episode of the Fifth Season in Script-fic. A Sequel to "Stars."

Amidst interest from several of the office workers, Ryan's trial begins in New York City.  The rest of the office, however, is far more concerned with his replacement, the newly hired Corporate Manager, and the changes it might mean for the branch.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: The Office Scripts
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3734 Read Count: 3129 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2008 Updated: July 27, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Cold Open

I liked this and I don't usually read script stories, just skip over them. This one intrigued me. I just hope this is not what happens in season 5! Look forward to where this goes.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you decided to give this one a chance Cheeb. I know that a lot of people don't even consider reading script-fic, and I don't really understand that. Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it.

Feuilles by Paper Jam Rated: T [Reviews - 17] 6
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story of death, love and Mose. And lots of beets. Spoilers to the end of S4.


Categories: Other
Characters: Dwight, Mose
Genres: Childhood
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10562 Read Count: 6222 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2008 Updated: July 27, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: one - roots

This was so moving. Brought me to tears, sad and happy. Just lovely. Am adding to my favorites. Thank you for posting it.

Author's Response: I'm so happy I could share something that moved you. Thank you so, so much for taking a moment to comment, Cheeb!

Philly Jim by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 380] 118
Summary: Past Featured StoryIs there life and love after Jam?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64237 Read Count: 83859 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2008 Updated: September 05, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My heart hurts for Jim already! I like that you start each chapter with the present and end with his reminiscing on his relationship with Pam. I remember JF's quote. I sure hope the writers of the show pay no attention to her! You've reeled me in wendolf. I'll just brace myself for the angst.

Author's Response: I hope the writers ignore her as well, Cheeb (although, as you might be able to guess, I\'m always okay with a little angst as long as there is a happy ending). Hold on for the ride, though. It\'s going to be a bit bumpy. My heart is aching for Jim, too, but he\'ll be okay. I promise. Pam too.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like Emily and I like that you're writing her point of view. I hope that now that she's found out she can "look Jim up" she really does wait to hear about Jim's past from Jim. I'm looking forward to Jim and Emily's budding relationship playing out. Something tells me I'm going to be mad at Pam in future chapters. Oh well, I've already braced myself. Keep up the excellent writing wendolf!

Author's Response: Thanks, Cheeb. I was going to try to write the whole thing from Jim\'s POV, but it didn\'t have the two sides to a new relationship that I wanted -- the \"what would it be like to be the girl who dates Jim after Pam\" angle. So I\'m glad you like that. I hope you won\'t be mad at Pam -- I\'m not, really. Just disappointed that it sometimes takes her so long to figure things out. Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: July 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay this is getting hard to read now. But I can't stop. You've written something totally believable here. Jim was absolutely correct to give Em the DVDs, for the reasons that he did. And Em's reaction to season 2? I'm afraid to see how she'll react to season 3! Pam's growth from her summer in NY is believable too. Making friends; knowing for certain that she absolutely can do anything she wants to with her life. Jim starting to get insecure because of the changes in Pam. Damn you, wendolf; I wanted to be mad at Pam. But I can't. And that's because of your excellent writing. Good work here. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Cheeb! I\'m glad you find it believable -- I know to some it\'s a bit of a stretch, but I do know for a fact that true love does not always solve the pesky problems of poor communication and horrible timing (which these two have in spades). And you\'ve pinpointed how I feel about Pam\'s summer -- I totally think it\'s like a teenager going off to college and just going \"Wow . . . this is different. And I like it!\" Plus she spent all those \"fun\" years in her 20s with Roy, so . . . maybe she\'s feeling like she missed out (ooooh, foreshadowing!). Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed
Date: August 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I can't remember the last time I reviewed this story, but that doesn't mean I haven't kept up with it. I do love it and have just added it to my favorites. Like another reviewer has said, this story ranks right up there with Stablergirl's I just wanted to be famous. You're doing a wonderful job. I look forward to each update.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: August 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

If you ended this story with this chapter, that would be okay. I'm so happy for them both! The only thing that kind of stung was when she called him Halpert. But I quickly got over it with the banter between the two. Love this.

Author's Response: yeah, it would be a good place to stop, wouldn\'t it? But I just have a bit more I want to cover. We\'re nearing the end now, though... Also, I didn\'t think her calling him Halpert would be a big deal because Pam rarely did that. If Jim called Emily by her last name or something, that might sting... hence, why I haven\'t done that. Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and a belated happy birthday to you!