Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.
10 Oh my gosh. I love this story. You are doing a wonderful job! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!
10 This story is such a fav!!! I love how true you are being to the characters. After all, you've still got several hours left! Keep up the good work. I can't wait to continue reading it!
I was so excited to see a new chapter! Keep up the good work!
10 I'm so happy read this. Amazing as always. Thank you!
Oh. What a perfect song. It's one of my favorites--so full of meloncholy and hope. I feel like you really captured that here. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I think this is such a wonderfully fresh angle to examine a familiar dynamic. What is more powerful or more revealing than the words we choose to represent the people and things we care about. I wish that I had written this!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you found it a fresh angle because so often with a much loved pairing like this, finding a fresh angle to write from is the hardest thing. Thanks!
She couldn't be sure exactly when he ceased to exist, but the first day she suspected something was the day after she canceled her wedding.
Very interesting idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Jim and Pam are Jim and Pam, only...not really.When I began reading this story, I had no idea where you could possibly go with it. I am totally loving this ride!
“Are you awake?”Â
A Tuesday morning someday in the future.
I have only have one warning about this fic: not everything is how it first appears.
I kept on writing and deleting this review. I have no word. It was beautiful!
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad you submitted one ;) Thank you!
10 I love the moments in the show when Dwight becomes human. I love how you gave the impression of such vulnerability. It was heart-wrenching and still felt almost fleeting, like it was just a moment in time and when the sun comes up, Dwight is still going to be Dwight. Bravo!
10 I love the mood you've captured here, how they're both alone in a whirlwind. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you so, so much!
What if Pam had a different response during the Merger to Jim's overture in the parking lot?
Jim: Oh, nothing. I just feel bad. I feel like things were a little weird today... or something.
10 You did a great job with Pam's inner monologue. Loved the twist at the end. I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, carebear! This is actually just a one-shot. Your review and the one before it were what reminded me to mark it complete. It's just one of those moments that could have (should have, would have in real life) gone differently. If you like that sort of thing, my story The Truth is along the same lines (although, frankly, maybe not as realistic as this one.) It's only 55 words, so it's a super-quick read.
Thanks for pointing out the monologue. I haven't done much (if any) of that sort of thing, so I'm so glad you think it worked! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.
Is there life and love after Jam?10 I LIKE IT! You've made this so realistic and respectful. I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Author's Response: Thanks carebear47! I figure there are a few of us that can at least read about an alternate ending for our couple (doesn\'t mean we actually want it to play out this way!). Thanks for reading and reviewing!