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Oh, this was SO good. Beautiful and angsty...I could really picture something like this actually happening. I really wasn't expecting the ending; I guess I expected more resolution, but the way it panned out worked, too. Everything you write is so good and this is no exception...thanks for sharing :)

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Another great chapter! There's something about this story that I really love (I mean, apart from all the incredible hotness, which is a given), and that's the connection between Jim and Pam. Their dialog isn't filled with huge declarations and whatnot, it's really simple and kind of quirky but thoughtful and loving at the same time, and I think it's really hard for some authors to capture that element of Jim and Pam, but you do it exceptionally well (wow...run on sentence!). The characterization was great and spot on. I really see Pam as having learned to "hold back" with Roy, and Jim helping out of her shell as just a really caring and assertive guy. So...well done, I love all your stories! And btw, I almost melted during that little "I want it together." Oh Jim, how we love thee!

Author's Response: Thanks so much honey (do you mind that I call you honey?). I really have a soft spot for this story too, short as it is. I mean, I\'ve written other fic where Pam is much more comfortable in her own skin and more confident, but I\'m not sure that rings true, even with FNB. I think there is a core layer in her that just wouldn\'t change that quickly, especially sexually. And I love the Jim and Pam dynamic. It\'s so fun to try to recreate, and I\'m glad I\'ve done it adequately. Thanks so much, as always, for your comments! Glad you liked it! (Yeah, and the \"I want it together\" part? Guh. I wrote it and it still makes me melt. Odd, but true...)

This was so beautiful...I love your descriptions. Nicely done!

I've been awaiting some post DP fics...and this was really cute! Good job...I loved the naturalness of their actions; the foot massage was adorable.

Author's Response: Glad the story came off sounding natural, honeypioneer.  I'm always concerned because I don't feel that I can write their "banter" as easily as so many other great writers out in fanfic world.  But it's a bit easier with just a quick oneshot.  Thanks a bunch for taking the time to review!

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Sweet and sexy and just all around adorable! Oscar worthy indeed...good job :)

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So...I just want to clarify that you can write as many of these as you please! Learning a little more about Jim's past sounds enticing, and hell, if you'd want to throw in a little about Pam's past too, I don't think anyone would protest. Anyway, I loved this...very cute. I love the familiarity of Pam and Jim in your fics. You really get their dialog and characters and everything just flows really well. So, everything turns out really believable, from the making out with the little conversation breaks to Jim urging Pam to tell him what she wants. I'm gonna stop rambling right now, but great job, as per usual!

Author's Response: Honey, you can ramble any time you like! I love your reviews! Thanks for them, as always... Glad my Jim and Pam seem real to you.

Only a good writer like you can incorporate Jan and Michael's creepy bedroom antics and make it completely Jim and Pam. Good job! That was totally awesome :)

This was great...short and sweet and beautifully worded. Great job!

Author's Response: thank you! I always love a little short and sweet for a change.

So beautifully written and surprisingly believable. And I don't mean that because of your writing (which I absolutely love!) I mean because of the idea. Heartbreaking- but wonderful.

This was so beautiful...I don't really have any other thoughts. The details were meticulous, and overall it was just a wonderful piece.

Author's Response: I can't tell you how rewarding it is to read this after struggling with this piece, honeypioneer.  Thank you so much for telling me and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Wow...this was so good! I love the whole situation of them being in different parts of the country trying to achieve their dreams together- but apart. Very bittersweet and I loved the changing perspectives, too :)

Author's Response: thanks!  what really complimentary feedback!

Author's Response: thanks!  what really complimentary feedback!

So beautiful...honestly. You've captured Pam so well in this, too...kudos!

Author's Response: It\'s so great to hear that I\'ve captured her character--she can be tricky like that. Thanks!!