Reviewer: GoIrish Signed 10
Date: April 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: One
I really like it so far - a new place/event always gives a bunch of new opportunities for interaction between Jim/Pam and everyone else. Since Karen's dressed like a ho... it would be so amusing if Jim and Pam found out why she was dressed that way while they're on the plane. And it's not because that's Karen's normal vacation attire either - she could be dating Michael (scary, huh?) in an attempt to connect with her inner freaky-diki-ness to try to forget about Jim. You could always have the two of them rooming next to Jim/Pam's room and torture Jam with Karen and Michael's in-cabin antics. Creepy, hilarious and filled with opportunities for Jam banter and Jim's amusing faces.
Author's Response:
You know, that has actually struck me with a great idea! I'll be sure to be thanking you when it appears in an upcoming chapter! You're review is just the kind that I love; with suggestions AND praise. I'm so glad to know that you are enjoying it and your feedback is awesome! Since you happen to have great ideas, I'll be willing to let you see my next chapters if you're willing to beta for me because you seem like you would be awesome. My email is rawrrxxmattie@aim.com (please, don't ask) but if you don't want to that's fine too!
Thanks again for you're awesome review!!