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It would be great if Pam were to seek Jim out after what happened in last night's episode.

Good job!

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This chapter is amaaaazing. Just so hot, and emotional, and so full of what we hope Jim and Pam will be someday soon.

The following sections made me say "guh", and made my toes curl: 

...he applied gentle pressure to one side of her neck with his thumb while at the same time languidly trailing his tongue down the other side.

She cried out when he began to move slowly, so he fumbled for one of her hands, clutching it tightly in his own as he felt himself slipping under

He'd drawn back to hold eye contact with her even as he moved inside her, their hands pressing tighter and tighter as the intensity mounted.

And I loved Pam saying his name just to hear what it would sound like to say it in that moment, and hen her saying his name for the other reason soon after.

And "This is really it". Perfect!

ooohhh, I love this.

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Hee, so cute! Awesome job with the 5 elements! The crab funeral reminded me of "Garden State" when Andrew and Sam gave the hampster funeral.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it, and thanks for the fun prompts! :)

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Oooohhhh!! This is so good!! Sasha is the perfect person to bring Pam and Jim back together. I loved her conversation with Jim, and that she has a bond with Pam now, too. Eee, this was so cute.

Author's Response: aww, thanks! i know, i *love* sasha. and she's just too cute, and not in enough fics, so i figured i'd give it a go. i'm so glad to see it's working out!

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Aaaah!! Jim's digging himself into a deeper hole every second!! I can't imagine how Pam will react when she finds out about what Jim's been doing!

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I love this story so far.
This was adorable:
“Oh.” She snuggled further down in her blanket so just her eyes and curly hair were visible. Her hand would occasionally sneak out to snag a cookie and then disappear as she munched away. Jim chuckled softly.

Heee! So cute!

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Oh, I'm crying now! I can't believe Jim could just leave her after that!

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Oh, this is so beautiful!! I love when she climbs into bed with him, when she wakes up with his arm around her, and when she lightly traces all of his bruises. And the... act itself is so perfect. So much a healing moment for them.

And this is actually my favorite part:
<i> He carefully gathers her to him, as if she’s the injured one.</i>
It really gives us a glimpse into what Jim might be thinking, because up intil that point, he was so closed off. But this just perfectly shows us how much he still loves her, how he's baing cautious like he might be afraid that he's misinterpreting things again, that maybe it's not real, like when Pam woke up with his arm around her and was afraid it was a dream. And maybe he's so careful with her like this because she's not physically hurt, but he knows she's been emotionally hurt for months by their whole situation. Plus, it's just a beautiful image by itself.

Bravo.

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Ooohh, this is so amazing. Beautiful and intense.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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So sweet! I love this!

Author's Response: I'm so glad! I love those two crazy kids....
Thanks for the review!

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Oooohhh, this is so, so good. I have a serious lump in my throat right now.

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I'm loving this story soooo much. Very original and executed well.

Author's Response: Thanks PuffingNoise!!!

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Oh, I was just thinking of this story yesterday, but I couldn't remember the name of it! I'm so glad you updated! I love this story. I hope you update again soon!
One thing, though, you might want to proofread this- I saw a bunch of spelling errors.

Author's Response: I'm glad that great minds think alike!    Thank you.  Acutally, I did proofread it, I was just so tired that I must've missed them.  Trust me, there were a LOT more.  LOL.