Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.
Ha. Ha. Dwight. Classic. Awesome. Great.
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Ah, Darryl and Stanley... they could really do some Michael damage if they teamed up. Likin' it a lot.
Author's Response: I wish they would pair up on the show... I would love that. Thanks!
Hee. Kelly's lines in this one were great. Loved it.
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Hee. That's very Pam, telling Michael a fake gift. Nice job.
Author's Response: I had fun with this one... thanks!
10 I loved this. I really did. I loved the way you got into Jim's head and explained everything... and how he was totally freaked out by the whole situation. I can imagine he would be. Great, great work. The JAM at the end was sweet, too. :D
Jim, Pam, and a series of bedroom conversations.10 "So when I met Jim, it was almost like I rediscovered my own existence."
How true is that? It's a line that stuck with me on this one. I love that you were able to encompass so much of Jim and Pam's relationship in that one line. It's so powerful. And I love that they don't "Hate" anything about each other, but the things that bother them turn into revelations and such instead of arguments. So sweet. Excellent work.
10 I liked this one a lot. You're right, it wasn't as happy as the first one, but it was completely realistic and satisfying to read. I like that you had the encouraging Jim conversation, because Jim does so much to encourage Pam and her dreams, and I loved that you allowed Pam to reciprocate on this. Great work. :)
10 I love that you can give us the angst without making it painful. I mean, it's gut twisting, but I'm not screaming at the computer. It's realistic and it's sweet. It's fluffy angst, I like to call it flangst. It's excellent, whatever it is. I'm looking forward to reading more of what you've written. Great job!
10 I loved this. I loved it a lot. I like the deep conversations and how they can turn into silly and sweet ones. You did a great job with this one. Nice work!
10 Oh God, that last line killed me. I loved the rest, and the way they opened up to each other, but that last line. Gah, that packed a punch. Man, you're good! Keep it up!
Aw, this was cute. The banter is great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Jim and Pam are already so perfect I\'m always nervous I\'m going to make it seem fakey, it\'s very hard to keep it real. Haha - I just seriously used to word keep it real. :D Thanks for the review!
Cute chapter. :) The STD parts were cute.
Author's Response: Haha thanks so much. I don\'t even know if ten STDs even exist, but I\'m sure Jim could make some up. ;)
That was cute. I liked the jail part. Ha.
Author's Response: Yeah too bad Pam turned down Jim\'s offer to rot together. x] I very much appreciate that you took the time to review!
Aw, now that was adorable. I loved that Jim asked Pam's dad for permission to marry her... and her reaction! Although if Jim sneezed, I'd probably have that reaction. ;) Great job.
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Aww. Thank you! And I think so too. :) I'm so glad you liked it!
Simply adorable! Love the way you write these two. Great job!
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10 I love this. I think I now have to read everything you've written. The banter between them is so natural and so sweet. I love it.
10 This was completely and utterly fantastic. I loved the inside thoughts on the proposal. This pretty much makes me love Jim even more. Great work!
10 That was awesome. I loved the interaction between Jim and Pam... and I loved Jim deciding he needed to see if Dwight was immune. Haha. Great job. :)
Ahh. Loved it. Why wouldn't they be mad at Dwight? Hee. Great job!
I loved this. Toby has gotten creepier as the show has progressed. I used to like him until he decided to be a creeper with Pam. Anyway. Great work, loved it.
Author's Response: That\'s me exactly. Thanks for the review!
Cute. Really cute. So much emotion for a short one. Great!
77 The title says it all.I love the buildup to the end of this one. It almost makes us feel like Jim is feeling. He's been waiting so long to say it, we're going through it with him, and when he finally says it (and hears it back), we all feel happy and relieved and excited... and in awe, because he's just plain amazing.
Loved the emotion you put into that one. Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was working for that building tension and discomfort, so I\'m so happy you thought it came across. I\'m really glad you enjoyed it! :)
Oh wow. The ending had me in knots. But in a good way. You wrote it so perfectly. I loved the progression of this one. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! This was definitely more angsty, but I was trying to shine a light on why Pam would have been scared to just be honest with Jim about her feelings on that fateful night. I appreciate you reading and reviewing! :)
I love Pam's side of all of this. You've got the perfect grasp on Jim and Pam. He loves whatever she does because she does it, and she wants to make him happy. I'm in awe. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, his love is absolutely unconditional, and it fortifies her. Just the fact that someone thinks she\'s good enough is almost enough, for better or for worse. Thanks for the kind words!
Just a little something that the lighting in that last beautiful scene of Business Trip inspired. Some nice, flufftastic jaminess for you to munch on. ;-)
Spoilers through Business Trip obviously.
No copyright infringement is intended.
Ooh, interesting comparison. One I never thought would work, but I gotta hand it to you, you made it fit. Good job. :)