Reviewer: Penguin_jammies Signed 10
Date: November 21, 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It feels like a thick barrier, suddenly, and when she tries to tangle her fingers with his, he pulls his hand away and places it on the small of her back, instead.
Like her or hate her, you gotta feel for Karen there.
Beautifully written. Your vivid descpriptions of the awkward and uncomfortable moments these characters share are spot on.
And Creed would totally ask for Karen's panties. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Creed's definitely a perv.
I really do feel for Karen, I think she's a great character to fill the time. Thanks for the review, Penguin_jammies!