10

Sweet in a sad, sad kind of way. I love that it's real, and so very in-character; I could completely see Pam facing things but not having the guts to change the things she needs to face. Does that make sense?

Either way, great job! Can't believe I missed this before.

10

I don't know if this was intentional, but I loved that the only word spoken aloud throughout the entire course of the fic was Jim saying Pam, at the end - I love that because it doesn't kill the mood of the rest of the fic, and I love that because it actually goes with the rest of the fic, and that's great.

I love this story. I love the idea that Phyllis sends e-mails to him because let's face it, she would, probably, if she had the chance, because that woman is one of those sweet old matchmakers we see in old movies and things.

And I love the bits in italics!

I love a lot more but I'm not very coherent when I start rambling about stories I really liked so I'm just...going to stop now. Yes. I'm going to read more of your stories now too. =P

10

Just started reading these one-shot drabble-things, and I think this last one is definitely the best. I love the style, the use of the parentheses to detail the otherwise simple sentence. I've always loved stories that are written in different styles, and this is as different as any other. =P Lovely, awesome, lovely job.

I love...hmm...she twists the key to turn off the car (permission), and skin contact (electric) shocks them, because that can be read in a couple of different ways. (She wants him closer.) after the line about invasion is brilliant, too.

And this has to be my favourite line - She catches her breath at the expression there and knows she is (already) his (wife) choice (and has been time after time after time). It's gorgeous how that sentence alone basically shows Jim and Pam. JimandPam.

There's so much more I can say, but this is already (incredibly) long and I think (know) I should shut up. Wow, I feel so inspired...I need to write something. Now.

Can't wait to read more! 

8

Loved this. Totally in-character, and sweet, but not - uh - too descriptive...something I can imagine coming the show, and something I hope does come in the show. Definitely.

Seriously looking forward to seeing more from you!!

10

I love you. Six fingers. Oh my God.

Oh, and thank you for mentioning Karen, and making her decent, but still not ZOMGJimLovesHer!-ish.

Stupid JimandPamandToddandAndy. Grr.

I'd say more but I want to read this again. =P

10

Loved it! Something always told me it was Jim from the beginning, because I'm a fluff and I read too much fanfiction, but it didn't make the actual wedding any less rewarding. ;) Loved it! The only tiny peeve I have about it is the fact that Jim didn't help her from the beginning, because he seems like the kind of guy who'd do that.

Either way, though, it was brilliant and perfect for a rainy morning. Thank you!!

10

Oh my God, how absolutely delicious. I already love this story to bits, it's gorgeous, it's lovely, and I burst out laughing in the middle and near the end and wow, you, you are a geinus. I love the CocaCola reference [it is in truth just like them, or at least, just like the Jam I've allowed a space in my mind - they live in the apartment directly above my Sceience notes], and Jell-O! Jell-O.

Good Lord. How absolutely awesome.

I'm going to read it again and love it. WOOHOO.

Absolutely lovely - as the story progresses, I get more and more optimistic, and at the end? Plans of leaving Roy, because she's with Jim [the best man she's ever known] and this line: Sometimes, when no one else is around, Jim likes to hold her and trace the words on her skin with his fingertips and sing the lyrics back to her.

Unbelievably fantastic. I love the idea, the story, Jim is a man of words, proving in more ways that one that they are meant to be with each other. Poetic, lovely prose, and possibly one of my favourite stories here on MTT. 

10

It's fics like these that make me want to slap those two idiots a few hundred times. Seriously.

But then some of the actual episodes make me want to slap them, too.

I think you should see that as a compliment. =P It's real, believable, and sometimes I can imagine that happening, on the show. [Those times I quickly read Jamfluff, instead. Quickest method to get rid of such sad thoughts.]

Great job!

10

The Jamness of my soul loves you.

The second line was my favourite. I can totally imagine Jim saying that - in fact I can imagine this entire story happening, which is what I love best of all.

I'm favourite-ing this for a rainy day. Write more!

10

...guh. Wow. I'd say something, but there are no words. =P I love this, I love the idea, I love the implications behind it, I love how you've thought of a lot of things [like the different version of the Dundies, and how Pam realises she was probably different in the Jim-less world], I love Creed [obviously], and...I can't wait. I can't wait for her to find him, I can't wait for him to go uh, who are you? [or maybe you'll have him remember Pam, too!! I mean, chances are low, because that'll make it unbelievable, but still...], I can't wait for them to be happy together, because I've been waiting for that since the start of the show, and it certainly hasn't stopped since then.

That's it, I think. Keep updating, because you know I love this! =P

Oh, the heartbreak, the silly, silly heartbreak. I love how you're taking this, where you seem to be taking this, and the pace, along with the amazing plotline and the unbelievable Pamness you've got in every line of this, it's just amazing. Brilliant. 

Also, yes, thank you, NO KAREN! HALLELUJAH. Our Beesly's got quite a bit to work around, already - what with Jim being quite Jim from what I've seen [I refuse to think that any Jim except our Jim would be so incredibly nice when talking to a slightly silly-sounding person on the phone who doesn't even know who she called :P] but still not being the Jim we know because we all know that our Jim is part Beesly, too. It'll be interesting to see how he's like without the added Pam-ness to him, if that makes sense. I'm interested to see how you take that - not that I'd be worried, because you've gotten all of them perfect so far. :D 

Yes, anyway, Pam has enough of obstacles to get to Jim, and put Karen in would just be unfair. Not just to her, but to us. Those cursed writers!! ;)

OK, yes, so, I love this story, and I can't wait for an update, at all. At all. 

10

Well. Usually I have lovelylong reviews, but this has left me reeling, because for the first time ever, I want to give Jim a resounding slap. I love him to bits, seriously, but sometimes...!!!

OK, sometimes I forget this is fanfiction and I can go watch him in episodes and other stories [even those by you!] and love him again.

...ayeeeee, I'm rambling, because it's eleven at night and I need to sleep right now. I don't like being mad at people this late, it makes me feel sad. ><

God, someone shut me up.

I loved the first chapter, actually, because there's something about your writing that always gets to me, it's just lovely, and it makes me feel warm all over, except when crazy!Jim makes an appearance [aahh], when I just skim over the chapter [like this one]. Maybe I'll come back and read this one after you put up the happy ending.

I desperately need someone to make me shut up. [Well whadya know, this came out long, anyway! Just not lovely.] Update quick. Please? I'll promise never to review again, or never to ramble again, or something.