Fanfic is a fun outlet for me after a long day at the office, but it's also a chance to work on some writing issues: character development, style, pacing. So thanks to anyone who gives me reviews! Summary: He wants to ask her if they are doing this because she doesn't like to be alone. Pam/Toby; slight Pam/Jim
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam, Toby
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1141 Read Count: 1655 ePub Downloads: 0
Penname: NeverEnoughJam Real name: N. E. Jam
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[Report This] Published: December 27, 2006 Updated: December 27, 2006
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: December 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: I've been closing these doors for days
Author's Response: That wasn't my intention, but it does sound a little bit like that. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it--even if it was a little heavy on the angst.
Date: December 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: I've been closing these doors for days
"Do you love him?" His voice is low
Oh, God. Jim realizing he's losing Pam again. How AWFUL. But I wondered about her answer:
"I think I could."
Sounds a little like the end of John's reading of Brief Interviews. Coincidence? Am I reading too much into this?
I like that Toby is the first to realize this is not working. He's so sweet. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: That wasn't my intention, but it does sound a little bit like that. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it--even if it was a little heavy on the angst.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3971 Read Count: 10741 ePub Downloads: 2
A few light bits and pieces I'd accumulated (have written enough angst lately, thanks.) Since they were just languishing, I figured I'd resurrect Vignettes and send them out into the world. Each is a stand-alone, NOT a chapter in a work-in-progress, so feel free to jump in and out. (I'm thinking there will be 3-5 pieces, but will have to see how the mood strikes me.)
If I owned these characters, would I be writing this stuff? Seriously. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3971 Read Count: 10741 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2006 Updated: January 02, 2007
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Date: December 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Rebound
Author's Response:
Date: December 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Rebound
That was about sheer physicality and movement and raw competitiveness
Oh, yeah! The boy is breathtaking to watch. Like many lanky men, when he hits that long stride you can see that power unleashed, see that body doing what it was meant to do: cover long distances, jump higher, reach farther. Walking around in a suit all day just does not give that lovely long form the scope it needs.
I love Pam openly appreciating that physicality about Jim, and (ahem) acknowledging it on the way home in the car. I don't think I could keep my hands off a sweaty Jim, either.
‘God, I love you.’
‘I love you more.’
‘You are so fucking competitive.’
Brilliant Jam dialogue. Dead-on and funny and reminding us that Pam, too, has her competitive side.
And the line about getting him home into a bath? Echoing "Basketball"? You witch. :D I hope Pam scrubbed him really, really well.
Thanks for reminding me of one of the best Office eps EVER.
Author's Response:
So glad to hear that I'm not the only one whose practically fetish-ized that boy playing b-ball. And fear not, it was a very 'thorough' bath. (And I know my hands would know no shame.)
Glad this struck your fancy...I so needed a break from torturing them. Thanks much for sharing my silliness!
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Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Engagement Party
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, nej. These are all about going to the happy place, I make no apologies. If you went up in smoke, my job is done...but please rematerialize soon! We need you. Thanks, as always!
Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Engagement Party
when you kept screaming ‘Yes!’ about an hour ago, I kind of took it as an affirmation
That line is SO Jim. :D And SO hot.
He doesn’t let her hands go until he’s slid too far down her body to reach them any longer.
*Foom* That's me, going up in smoke.
And they absolutely should elope.
Colette, as always, you delight me with these little vignettes. :) Thanks for sharing them. Love their conversation in bed, their maple syrup kisses, and their concern for making sure their communication (now!) is as clear as possible. Thanks again.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, nej. These are all about going to the happy place, I make no apologies. If you went up in smoke, my job is done...but please rematerialize soon! We need you. Thanks, as always!
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Date: December 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Birthday Cake
Author's Response: Glad to provide a PSA for Jamminess, nej. And also glad you picked up the 'Diversity Day' call out...wondered if anyone would catch that. Thanks for stopping by for a piece of cake - always a pleasure!
Date: December 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Birthday Cake
I love how you encapsulate Jim's rotten day into one paragraph; excellent detail. Totally believable. I'd throw myself under a train.
The evil twin prank is so good I want to kiss it. I want to see this!
Pam cut him a ridiculously large piece. He responded by taking a ridiculously huge bite. He was ridiculously in love.
Awwwwwwwwww. How wonderful. CookingPam!
Pam had somehow managed to bake this elusive gift right into a chocolate cake.
Awwwwwwww pt. 2.
Not a bad birthday.
Ah. An echo of the ending of one of my favorite episodes, "Diversity Day".
Colette, this was so sweet and fun and Jammy! Thank you. I needed this after all that angst.
Author's Response: Glad to provide a PSA for Jamminess, nej. And also glad you picked up the 'Diversity Day' call out...wondered if anyone would catch that. Thanks for stopping by for a piece of cake - always a pleasure!
Summary:
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23126 Read Count: 68727 ePub Downloads: 21
Per nomadshan's planting the irresistible notion in my head of writing an Out of Control Jim story (along with encouragement from other posters at TWoP - you know who you are).... This is an exploration of what could happen if (when?) Jim and Pam were pushed to the point of losing all control.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23126 Read Count: 68727 ePub Downloads: 21
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2007 Updated: January 07, 2007
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Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ohh. Rage. Good fuel for an out of control Jim. You're building this well, harvesting those little, telling moments. I really like him getting angry in the vending room because Pam was giggling over the tension and he thought she was oblivious to his pain. Good moment there. Looking forward to more.
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Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
He hadn't given up so easily; he hadn't let go and begun "kind of seeing someone."
Thank you for acknowledging this in Roy. We can call it stubbornness, or we can call it faithfulness. How you see Roy depends on what you call that persistence of his.
I also like how you don't let Pam off the hook for having sex with Roy. She should feel guilty and anxious; she's taken advantage of him (ooo! BeardedRoy -- can't really blame her), but at least now she's owning her actions.
And I can only imagine the incandescence that will ensue once Roy learns the truth about Jim. Oooo.
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
"I'm done with this."
Omg. omg. *squee*
SO hot and anguished and desperate. Poor Jim. Oh, poor Jim.
And he is SO not done with this. Not by a long shot.
Summary: Karen's more of a replacement than she knows. No spoilers unless you don't know who Karen is.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Angela, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam, Stanley
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 576 Read Count: 2620 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Angela, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam, Stanley
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 576 Read Count: 2620 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2007 Updated: January 04, 2007
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Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: January 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
What an interesting take on Pam's relationship with Karen. I like it. And I loved the "exfoliating" remark. Hee! And Jim's confusion...because ConfusedJim is always so interesting...
Summary:
Categories: Alternate Universe, Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Challenges: Sleepless In Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1189 Read Count: 17608 ePub Downloads: 0
Obviously a response to the Sleepless in Scranton challange, no one responded and I felt bad, so here's my attempt.
It's 3am, what is going on in the lives of our favorite Dunder Mifflinites?
Categories: Alternate Universe, Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Challenges: Sleepless In Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1189 Read Count: 17608 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 06, 2007
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Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Angela
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Angela
OMG! Dwight getting married in Klingon! Wonderfu! But wouldn't that invalidate the marriage? :D
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Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Toby
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Toby
He closes his eyes and prays that he doesn't die alone.
Ooo! Nice callback to "The Initiation".
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Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Andy
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Andy
Of course he would check himself out while he's peeing. In fact, it's probably a magnifying mirror! LOL!
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Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Creed
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Creed
Oh, this is TOO funny! I love this image of Creed. He's my third favorite character after Jim and Pam. Thanks for including him.
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Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Karen
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Karen
Learning to live with SnugglingJim is hard? Is this woman crazy?
Thank you for the image of him snuggling and warming up the bed. I'll just bet he'd warm it up...
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Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Roy
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Roy
Oh, sad Roy. All that wasted beard. I like how he associates wine with Pam. Not beer, but wine. Good call.
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Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Michael
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Michael
Sometimes you just have to let someone know how you feel before you can fall asleep properly.
Awwwwwww.
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Jan
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked them. They were so much fun to write!
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Jan
Yeah. Crazy.
Michael or Jan? Or both? Don't care. Love 'em together!
Thanks for these little glimpses. It helped me get past my own 3 AM.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked them. They were so much fun to write!
Summary: Just a little response to last night's episode.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 548 Read Count: 3406 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 548 Read Count: 3406 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 05, 2007
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Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OUCH! Oh, Pam. You shoulda told him the truth. Because the two of you will never be together until you two stop LYING to one another.
You wrote her so well, so believably. I totally believe she would say and do this. Dammit.
Your last line is a killer!
Author's Response:
Oh, I know. My first dream of him finding out was of course an overly-hopeful scene of him confronting her, her admitting it, yadda yadda yadda, babies. But then I realized this would probably be closer to the truth. They repress so much. *sigh*
And thank you!
Summary: 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2901 Read Count: 3258 ePub Downloads: 0
A patchwork quilt story of Pam and Jim, S3 and onwards, told in ones and twos.
No spoilers, unless you haven't watched a second of the third season.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2901 Read Count: 3258 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 05, 2007
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Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Two
Author's Response:
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Two
All of these little moments are wonderful, but being the Jammer that I am, this one really wrecked me:
Their first guiltless, completely sober kiss is raw and passionate and long; the culmination of a thousand missed chances.
Sometimes they wish he didn't inherit their criminal genius.
Oh, boy. A JamKid would be a real Dennis the Menace.
He gets it: he is who she is.
Ain't he ever.
Thanks for all of these. Great insight, and just enough "story" to glue them all together.
Author's Response:
Dennis the Menace!! See I was trying to come up with a way to illustrate just how horribly naughty a JamKid would be while talking to a friend but I just could not find the words! Thank you.
Thanks for writing a review, too; I've seen some of your other reviews and I like that you're honest, and everything, and you write just so well, so this review makes me feel good. ;) And thanks for thanking me, even though I haven't a clue where that came from.
Summary: Started out as a mildly fluffy ficlet featuring Pam and her hair. Then it turned into a Five Things. Each one is based around a simple, everyday object that changes things (however slightly) for the better.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1909 Read Count: 6042 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1909 Read Count: 6042 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 12, 2007
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Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Shampoo
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked (most) of it, lol. as for the fingers through hair thing, i really should have described that better. in my head, he's only playing with the ends of her hair. my boyfriend does that a lot, and i never notice it. most of the dialogue is actually based on a late-night conversation i had with him. re-reading it, i totally agree with you, so i'll probably change that a bit to get the visual right. thanks! :0)
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Shampoo
Their relationship right now was a badly xeroxed copy of the friendship they’d once had.
Wonderful line.
Sometimes, when you weren’t paying attention, I’d run my fingers through your hair a few times
I don't think this is physically possible. There's no way someone would NOT feel that.
“Come on, Beesly. You know me how well? And that’s the thing that tips the scale towards perv for you?”
Ah. Wonderful Jim line. I can hear him saying this.
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked (most) of it, lol. as for the fingers through hair thing, i really should have described that better. in my head, he's only playing with the ends of her hair. my boyfriend does that a lot, and i never notice it. most of the dialogue is actually based on a late-night conversation i had with him. re-reading it, i totally agree with you, so i'll probably change that a bit to get the visual right. thanks! :0)
Summary: The long delayed Office/Firefly crossover. The crew of Serenity meets the crew at Dunder Mifflin.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Crossover
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5378 Read Count: 3916 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Crossover
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5378 Read Count: 3916 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2007 Updated: January 12, 2007
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Date: January 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: A River Runs Through It
Author's Response: Hee! This was the fun chapter. Hardest thing? Not having them all in a starring role. But as you pointed out, at least Wash is alive in the AU... Maybe the Inara slap was a cheap device but Angela did screech it loudly and we could assume that Inara had to endure some other Angela-isms prior to the name calling that added to the provocation. Mal/Jim? Big time parallels there that I never even considered until I started writing then they seemed perfect together.
There's a lot of River hate out there - I think the problem was they didn't get to her kick-ass abilities before the show was cancelled and there was a bit too much whining on her part but I thought her childlike naivete would work well with Dwight's. And as usual, I shamelessly use whoever is available to get Pam off her butt and moving towards Jim.
So glad this came across as plausible and thanks, as always, for your extensive feedback! See you 'round the 'verse.
10 Date: January 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: A River Runs Through It
Phyllis thought it would be fun to serve moon pies and Tang
I'm laughing so hard my co-workers think I've lost my mind.
That girl talks too much. And the other one is afraid.
That is SO River.
Meredith's reaction on seeing Jayne, Michael's reaction on seeing Inara...just dead ON, Par5. "Sooooo....you bunk alone?" Heh heh heh.
OMG! River putting Michael in a headlock! And then putting Dwigt in a headlock! Thank you!
The Inara/Angela slap seemed a tad harsh, but I understand why you put it in. I think Angela would be more intimidated than outraged, and Inara is used to Mal calling her a whore, so why would she object to Angela doing it?
The Mal/Jim interchange re Inara, "How long have you been together" is a classic. Two guys who are experts in lying to themselves/hiding their feelings but who can immediately spot that the other one is madly in love and can't express it..., oh yeah. Hot. (BTW, it's "backpedal", not "backpeddle".)
And your ENDING! With Pam suddenly being inspired by River to make a move with Jim....wonderful! I usually hated River, but here you made her mysterious and deadly and intriguing and ... and useful!
This story is so rich and so completely true to the characters of the whole Firefly crew! I envy you.
I seriously could not imagine HOW anyone could combine a paper supply company office in Scranton with a space ship, but you did it. Congratulations.
Author's Response: Hee! This was the fun chapter. Hardest thing? Not having them all in a starring role. But as you pointed out, at least Wash is alive in the AU... Maybe the Inara slap was a cheap device but Angela did screech it loudly and we could assume that Inara had to endure some other Angela-isms prior to the name calling that added to the provocation. Mal/Jim? Big time parallels there that I never even considered until I started writing then they seemed perfect together.
There's a lot of River hate out there - I think the problem was they didn't get to her kick-ass abilities before the show was cancelled and there was a bit too much whining on her part but I thought her childlike naivete would work well with Dwight's. And as usual, I shamelessly use whoever is available to get Pam off her butt and moving towards Jim.
So glad this came across as plausible and thanks, as always, for your extensive feedback! See you 'round the 'verse.
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10
Date: January 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Mr. Cobb Goes to Scranton
Author's Response: Thanks neverenoughjam! Knowing you're a Firefly devotee makes your words even sweeter! Michael as the cunning businessman is a little OOC but every now and then he does do something right. The transition was abrupt - it was one of those things that got short shrift in my zeal to get it (finally) done. Might go back and work on that. Using Creed - since he already spoke Chinese on the show - was a no-brainer! And Michael with the lingo - always trying to be one of the cool kids. Glad you enjoyed it!
10 Date: January 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Mr. Cobb Goes to Scranton
I was only five lines into this before I was grinning like an idiot. How WONDERFUL to hear Mal and Jayne's voices again! I have missed them so much, and here you have PERFECTLY captured the way they speak. Joss Whedon would be so proud.
And THANK YOU for giving us back Wash. I love that guy. And his relationship with Zoe.
I gotta admit, the idea of Michael Scott as interplanetary entrepreneur takes a little getting used to. But then you added CREED as the facilitator, the guy who knows smugglers (of COURSE he does) and it was absoltutely perfect!
"Live long and prosper!"
Oh My God! How hilarious!! That was so unexpected, and yet So Dwight! I was (excuse the expression) ROFLMAO.
Only thing I found out of character was Jayne leaving Vera in Michael's office. I can't see Jayne letting his weapon get out of arm's reach for any reason, pretty ladies notwithstanding.
"You're reading that upside down," he said with disdain.
LOL! Yes, I imagine Creed actually CAN read a paper upside down and make perfect sense of it. And cursing in Chinese! Of course he would. Wo hen xihuan Creed (I love Creed!) His internal musing about never having met a species where men bore children was a little confusing: in the Firefly 'verse there are no aliens. But his speculation on Jayne is hilarious: is he thinking Jayne is a former lover, or maybe his son? Wonderful either way.
The transition to the beet farm seemed a tad abrupt, but I totally believe Jayne's turnaround after blowing away Dwight's target. And you got Mose into the story! Extra points for that! :D
And I love Michael picking up the Firefly lingo at the end.
Too funny! Thanks for this!
Author's Response: Thanks neverenoughjam! Knowing you're a Firefly devotee makes your words even sweeter! Michael as the cunning businessman is a little OOC but every now and then he does do something right. The transition was abrupt - it was one of those things that got short shrift in my zeal to get it (finally) done. Might go back and work on that. Using Creed - since he already spoke Chinese on the show - was a no-brainer! And Michael with the lingo - always trying to be one of the cool kids. Glad you enjoyed it!
Summary: Pam gets an offer she has to refuse until Jim gives her an alternative.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3269 Read Count: 6227 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3269 Read Count: 6227 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2007 Updated: January 14, 2007
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Date: January 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: January 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Pamelangelo? What a great name!!! I love it. Love Jim in Italy. I think he'd be scared to death on the streets, with the crazy drivers, but he'd love it.
Any chance Pam will get him to pose nude for a sketch in the style of David? :D Just sayin'...
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1772 Read Count: 8382 ePub Downloads: 3
Jim and Pam discuss cohabitation on a Sunday morning. Written after Back from Vacation as an antidote to Pam's crying scene. Just couldn't leave it alone, now could I?
Disclaimer: Own nothing related to The Office. Sad, but true. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1772 Read Count: 8382 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2007 Updated: January 15, 2007
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Date: January 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: January 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"If you don’t count the three or four years that you owned me"
Oh, yeah, did she ever. I love this line. Jim has that insight into himself, had it all along probably, but it didn't change anything. I like how you get all of that into that one line.
Loved the all too brief fantasy of a three way with MARK that you conjured in my head. You witch.
I loved Pam needling Jim about her crying on Dwight's shoulder. That's precisely the kind of thing that would make him squirm like a cat on a hot stove.
Sometimes she thought she’d be happy living in his pocket,
Hell, yes. Right there next to his. Um. Well. You get the idea.
‘I still can’t sleep without you,’ he murmured,
This is just all kinds of awwwwwwwwww. Lovely. As is this:
‘I only have…one chair in my living room.’
‘So what? You can sit in my lap…or I’ll sit in yours.’
And "frankly, the whole living in sin thing is kind of hot" sounds just So Jim. Perfect.
Wonderful last line. Well done, as always, Colette. Thank you for sharing this.
Author's Response:
NEJ! As always, you tuned right in to a couple of my personal favorite lines. And really, could I possibly have been thinking such a thing when I mentioned living in Jim's pocket? Moi? You know how innocent I am.
I agree - I think Jim was always painfully aware of the situation, but it was a force bigger than he was...hence his current defense system (you know, the one with the really bad make-over?) Anyway, this was just a light snack, but so happy you dropped by to share it. Thanks, you!
Summary: Jim and Pam. Tropical elopement. You do the math.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6502 Read Count: 23892 ePub Downloads: 5
Jim and Pam. Tropical elopement. You do the math. Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6502 Read Count: 23892 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2007 Updated: January 19, 2007
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: January 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Be In Love And You Will Be Happy
Author's Response: Hmm, I guess I was going for a way for her to preserve her dignity in front of her parents. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Be In Love And You Will Be Happy
Can I get you anything? Hairspray? Peeled grapes? I could totally see Jim saying this.
Maybe Jim will have private signals with their own daughter. The thought makes her stomach flutter happily. Flutter. Yeah. Bet it would. (grin)
She even fakes a yawn, but her cover story fools no one. Not sure why a bride would think she even needs a cover story on her wedding night. This was the only slightly false note in this, it sounds like a much younger Pam here.
I love that you always give me something to untie. It's like unwrapping a present every day. Ooh! I love Jim saying this. Soooo erotic.
He's all hers and wearing nothing but a gold wedding ring. And a smile. Don't forget that smile. Great line.
Looking forward to coconut oil....
Author's Response: Hmm, I guess I was going for a way for her to preserve her dignity in front of her parents. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: January 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Sand
Author's Response: Hey, good to see you! Coconut oil? Wow, good one. I'm going to have to work that in somewhere, if I can. Thanks for stopping by. Next chapter will be up soon!
Date: January 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Sand
Oo!! Tropical wedding! Honeymoon on a desert island! Do we even have to ask what movies they'll bring? And I want a scene involving Jim, Pam, and a bottle of coconut oil! Please?
Thanks for this lovely distraction from the angst of last week.
Author's Response: Hey, good to see you! Coconut oil? Wow, good one. I'm going to have to work that in somewhere, if I can. Thanks for stopping by. Next chapter will be up soon!