"My daughter, the birth of my daughter, gave me life." - Johnny Depp. (And a bit of grief mixed in as well.) Cecelia Halpert, through her father's eyes.I LOVE that this kid said "That's what she said"...HILARIOUS.
::sigh:: I like you and this and the them that you created here. Just great.
5 things that never happened to Jim Halpert.Oooh this is a nice jaunt into"what if" land. Thanks so much for this! Creative, really well-written, and fun!
She wants to know that she'll never have to watch him disappear.
Pam can't help remembering befores, even after so many afters. Set in early season five.
10 Kaat, sorry it took me so long to review this. This is gorgeous. What a beautifully woven trip back in time. I loved this.
Author's Response: Always great to hear from you, lovefool! thank you for your sweet review!
He wakes up with a jackhammer in his head, cotton in his mouth and a swirling vortex of something awful in his stomach. Set just after "Diwali."YOU ARE A ROCKSTAR. OMG...
I'm sorry, that's not a coherent or appropriate review for something so wonderful as this! Has this ever been thought of? Because seriously....when it was going to be karen who came out of the restroom (and I totally thought it was - you had me), I already thought this was revolutionary. Maybe it's my naivete, but it had never occurred to me that maybe Diwali night was "the night" for Jim and Karen. ...But then you took it a step further and blew my mind with it being Pam! AWESOME. I am just SO excited about this. Haven't been this excited about fic in a long time my friend!
Or...don't slow down. Especially you...Blanca -- write quickly please. :-) I'm officially addicted.
Still absolutely loving this story! I love that even though Pam is there, she's still hesitant about how much she can really give...right now, and Jim's slight annoyance is right on target too. This continues to be great stuff.
He thinks back to the night before. Their first night together, and despite a few glasses of wine with dinner he remembers everything. Well…obviously that, but the little details too.
10 Um....sorry this took me so long. HOT DAMN. This was super hot. I'm on Fire, indeed ladies. I love it when two great writers produce a scenario that I have never thought of and write it just so...excellently. I can't wait for your next installment. I am REALLY looking forward to this series.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! I'm on vacation so I apologize for the delay in responding. We're very glad you enjoyed it.
More to come when we're both back from vacation.
Oh I'm sorry to see that this is a oneshot! I was hoping this would be a series of sorts.
This was delicious and sexy! Thanks you!
This is excellent. Just so, so sweet and sexy. Thanks for this.
Most of the time she's happy.Oh I'm real sorry I'm just seeing this, because this is fab. I've missed your writing! This is so real, and so Pam. I also like the peak into Jim here with his wanting so badly to take her somewhere...to give her an adventure that is not just a fantasy but a reality. Lovely.
"It'll be okay" had always been Jim's mantra. Was it true? Now complete.I love just so many things that this chooses to be, Jazzfan. First off, this is named for one of my absolute favorite songs - and so clever, you! Paper Moon...ha! Also, my dear your turn of phrase is incredible in this piece: alphabetic misfortune...really? That's awesome. One of those turns of phrase you wish you would have wrote yourself. Speaking of phrasing, your Jim voice is perfect here. I can absolutely hear him thinking these things...and I'm sorry but were you a fly on the wall during my student teaching assignment last year??? I kid you not there was a fireman, a zoologist, AND a guy who worked for Marvel Comics at this 1st grade career day.
This is the fic I've read in quite some time...I'm so glad I did. Looking forward to the next installment.
Aw out of the mouths of babes, huh? Oh Jim, you ARE the bestest dad ever, if only you knew!
I love your CeCe here this is exactly how I imagine her to be this age. Fairly precocious and innately sweet. Then there's Daniel who is so cute as well. Glad this has turned into a three parter and can't wait for the rest!
"That's Michael, you're out with Michael?!"
"Pam, it just happened. "
pre-marriage fluff. Pam gets a late-night visitor the night before the wedding. Spoilers for Niagara.
10 Ah I missed you! This was just sweet and sexy and...great. There's almost nothing I love more in the realm of fanfic than drunk Jim. I think all of us have this idea in our heads of how kind of adorable he'd be. This hit just the right note for me! Thanks so much!
Author's Response: ah lovefool! always fabulous to hear from you! I am so glad you enjoyed this - and I hope to see you around more! :)