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Dwight and Angela Find Out by Too Late Kev Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 3
Summary: Dwight and Angela see some footage and find out who knows their secret.

Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight/Angela, Other
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256 Read Count: 2692 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2007 Updated: July 21, 2007
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 9
Date: July 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Dwight and Angela Find Out

That was fun and I was glad to see the documentary format being referenced. We all probably don't do quite as much of that as we should.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Swedge.  I liked the idea that the camera crew would want to shake up the hornet's nest a bit!  I could definitely see Angela blaming Dwight for everything, until she got to see him 'in action' in The Negotiation.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  

Expressions in Emoticons by NobleLandMermaid Rated: T [Reviews - 514] 98
Summary: Past Featured Story

A glimpse into the instant messaging history of Jim and Pam. Written with the intention of expanding on what we see on the show, as well as to tie up some loose ends. There will be a conversation for each episode through Season 3.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Helene Beesly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Larissa Halpert, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Instant Messaging
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16909 Read Count: 314151 ePub Downloads: 23
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: December 27, 2016
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: September 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 47: The Negotiation

Fun read once again.

"I mean, not like how he went after Jim, I mean like, dating him I guess"

Ha!

But one little thing: where larissa says "Here we go...", it seems like maybe you had intended that to be from Jim not her.

Author's Response:

Gah, my proofreading skills are so lame! I need a beta, but I also I need home internet, most I just want some some Mexican food, or a big juicy steak!

But thank you for reading, and I was hoping someone would like that line, oh, Pam, you're so adorable.

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 44: Phyllis' Wedding

That was better than the real Phyllis's Wedding episode.

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 41: Traveling Salesmen

Hah. Jim's keeping his distance. Poor guy feels like he's being watched, which he is.

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 40: Back From Vacation

It works. I like how he noticed her being missing the day before.

Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 34: Initiation

Loved it, especially the part with the different kinds of paper.

One tiny thing: when he says lunch time I think you intended an "s" on the end of that oop.



Author's Response: I actually mean for it to be "oop" since he's not make a mistake or anything, he's just exclaiming that it's already lunch time, but thank you for being my ever diligent typo detector ;-)

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 38: The Convict

For some reason I like the part where Jim tells her about how Andy literally called him.

Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: September 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 36: Branch Closing

His bitterness seemed realistic to me and the idea of Larissa being his sister works.


Author's Response: Thanks, I was worried there . . .

Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: August 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 20: The Secret

I just discovered this story. It's fun to read and feels in character and in the spirit of the show. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Yay, thanks, that's what I'm aiming for.

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 31: The Convention

That was believable and I liked her mom's username. Seems very 'mommish'.


Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it would be appropriate :-) I'm not sure why I think her mom's name is Jean . . .

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 32: The Coup

His apartment is remaining neutral! Great line


Author's Response: Hehe, I liked writing that line :-)

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 30: Gay Witch Hunt

I'd wondered how you were going to handle it now that they couldn't talk for a while. That was a good way to go.

Especially:

jimhalpert: so, what do I need to do

jimhalpert: for the fantasy football

 



Author's Response: Yep, gotta love that avoidance behavior ;-)

Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 29: Casino Night

You meant decide, not decided, at the start. Don't worry though, it was still enjoyable. Well done.


Author's Response: Argh! Damn this sporadic internet access, and of course, my always sub-par proof reading skills. .

Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Before The Cameras

I enjoyed both the latest chapters, keep it up.

But now I have the eternal dilemma: to point out typos or not?

You meant faces OF scranton and you meant looked not looking, near the end.

It didn't spoil things though, it was a fun read.



Author's Response:

Ah, dang it! Thanks for pointing it out, I have to post these kind of quick so my proof reading isn't as good as it should be (it's not really that great to being with).

Paper guy by Stablergirl Rated: M [Reviews - 7] 1
Summary:

Ryan gets an email from a friend.  In response to the 55 words leaving scranton challenge.  Ryan does not belong to me.  Neither does his promotion.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ryan
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 819 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: August 05, 2007
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: emails

Hah poor Ryan. Still a "guy".


Author's Response:

yep. haha

Stanley, Off to the Poconos by Too Late Kev Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 3
Summary: Stanley heads off to the Poconos for a much-needed break from life at Dunder-Mifflin. (It really is only 55 words...)

Categories: Other
Characters: Stanley
Genres: Travel
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59 Read Count: 1850 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 06, 2007
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: August 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Stanley, Off to the Poconos

Ack, poor Stanley. But unlike Michael I'm guessing he can change it. And at least he got a few miles away. He can probably breathe easier.

I wonder if Poconos is like Scottsdale. Where was he really going?  Maybe we need a sequel.



Author's Response:

I think he was really going to Scottsdale, and planning a nice, relaxing time with his wife.  No work idiots, no sex-pot daughter to worry about...Although I think Melissa could get into trouble anywhere.  Late night swim over to the boys' camp?  There's the sequel.  All yours, Swedge. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Six Feet Under by larrymcg Rated: T [Reviews - 198] 63
Summary:

This is an idea I've had for a long time. It is inspired by the very end of the Six Feet Under series finale (hence the title), and it seems that the 55 word style would be perfect for it. Each chapter will focus on a different Office character. 20 chapters are planned.

I do not own these characters, and would not do this to them if I did. No copyright infringement intended.


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1154 Read Count: 66101 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2007 Updated: November 15, 2007
Reviewer: Swedge Signed
Date: October 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Calm

I liked it but who was holding the gun?

Author's Response:

I don't know, but they were also holding an "I am Swedge" sign.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: November 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 20: Pictures

Nice job wrapping it up, the last three were very effective. I for one would definitely like to see you flesh out this storyline more.

Beet Mail by Too Late Kev Rated: K [Reviews - 26] 12
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam and Jim are engaged and planning their upcoming wedding, but Jim has a peculiar temporary living arrangement. This story is one week of at-work emails surrounding the situation. Please note that Fancy New Beesly is in full bloom; she takes a hard line with Michael these days.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight/Angela, Jim/Pam, Michael, Mose
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8237 Read Count: 18660 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: September 26, 2007
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Monday

You added a bunch of things I hadn't seem before. Beardy! How surprised I was when he was thrown into the mix in a subtle way. Good job, fun story.

Author's Response:

Our good friend Bob Eardy.  Won't it be fun if Beardy's name really turns out to be Bob Eardy?  Or maybe Brandon Eardy, so his email can be BEardy.  We can only hope.

Thanks for reading a time or two, Swedge, and for reviewing! ;)

Simple by Morning Angel Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 2
Summary:

Things don't always have to be complicated. Answer to the 55-word challenge.

Slightly spoilery for Fun Run.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55 Read Count: 3243 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2007 Updated: September 29, 2007
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like she's really hungry. Glad to see something by you. :) Nice little moment.

Author's Response: Hee.  Thank you, Mr. Swedge. This first episode seems to have inspired me so hopefully, I will continue to write little stories. :)

No More Cats by nomadshan Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 8
Summary: Past Featured Story

Aftermath of an a capella phone serenade.  Spoilers for Launch Party.


Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Mose
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 696 Read Count: 2890 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 13, 2007 Updated: October 13, 2007
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: October 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was fun. :)


Author's Response: Thanks, Swedge!

Martin Luther King, Jr. Day by Too Late Kev Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 8
Summary: Past Featured StoryMichael Scott has a great plan to honor Martin Luther King, Jr., but no one else is happy about it.  It's up to Jim to fix it. Part of my holiday series -- "Holiday: Just One Day Out Of Life."

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael, Phyllis, Ryan, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Holiday, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: Holiday: Just One Day Out Of Life
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4684 Read Count: 5039 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: January 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Friday, January 18, 2008

It turned out well, good job.  You've always been great at doing Stanley.

Author's Response:

That's what he said. ;)  We don't really get much Stanley action or Stanley dialog, so I'm just sort of altering slightly the things he's said and done in the past, and trying not to give him any speeches.  Not a big talker, our Stanley. 

Thanks for (re-)reading and reviewing, Swedge! :)

Groundhog Day by Too Late Kev Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 5
Summary:

On a future Groundhog Day, Jim and Pam watch the movie Groundhog Day and discuss what days they'd like to repeat.

This is part of my series 'Holiday: Just One Day Out of Life'.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Holiday: Just One Day Out Of Life
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1745 Read Count: 3819 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2008 Updated: February 02, 2008
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: February 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the first time I've seen the finished version. Thumbs up.  Even if it is cuddle porn.


Author's Response:

Disclaimer:  There is no porn in this story.  Swedge is making up genres. ;)

It's above and beyond the call of duty for you to have subjected yourself to this again.  Sweet and icky and cuddly.  Brrr!  Horrid stuff. ;)  Thanks so much for looking again, though.  Your comments and Azlin's helped a lot.  

Thanks for the beta and the review! :) 

 

Everything reminded me of you by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 45] 18
Summary:

When everything reminds you of the past, it is best to embrace it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Word: Two-Week Fanfic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6565 Read Count: 32973 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2008 Updated: February 18, 2008
Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: End

That's a nice way to wrap it up. And I liked the registered Pamocrat in Vote. :)


Author's Response: Swedge, you reviewed this story nearly 8 years ago, but I still appreciate all the kind words. Jim + Pam forever! :)

Reviewer: Swedge Signed 10
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Table

A fun concept and good introduction. It was pretty brave to do one story based on these words.

Author's Response: Thank you! It was definitely a challenge to keep it going!